@Lafrou@roseinblack69 Thank you for your feedback I still have to get some more gameplay for the next chapter, Manika will finally age up It will come out tomorrow or on Tuesday, I promise
Yay! Great news! I'm already waiting for the tommorow
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That was such an awesome chapter! I thought it was really great that it was Manika who convinced Kahio to return to the tribe with them. I think that shows that she is going to be a great creator. I'm really glad she won her fight too. Is The Snake your creation? If so you did a fantastic job on her. She really did look super scary, I was worried for Manika for a moment, despite all the training she's done. I'm glad she doesn't have to spend a year at the temple.
I'm looking forward to her reign, and I hope things work out for her and Taam. Although now that she is Creator she really does have her pick of the slaves doesn't she?
@Lafrou Thank You so much glad you liked it. Yeah I created her myself I decided not to download anything for this challenge
That much is true. But Manika is still Manika and she probably wont pick him if she feels hes not interested. Also it will be hard for her if she had to sacrifice him. I'll see if he stays around
@Lafrou Thank You so much glad you liked it. Yeah I created her myself I decided not to download anything for this challenge
That much is true. But Manika is still Manika and she probably wont pick him if she feels hes not interested. Also it will be hard for her if she had to sacrifice him. I'll see if he stays around
I agree... It will very hard for her, she'll feel horrible like my creator Amadahy I hope Monika will not need to sacrifice Taam. But... I'd like to see them together
Oh yes, I forgot that slaves who breed with the Creator get sacrificed. It's one thing to sacrifice a breeding slave you chose for traits and good genes to pass on to your heiress, quite another to sacrifice a slave you have feelings for.
Oh yes, I forgot that slaves who breed with the Creator get sacrificed. It's one thing to sacrifice a breeding slave you chose for traits and good genes to pass on to your heiress, quite another to sacrifice a slave you have feelings for.
Oh no, I just saw there was a picture error in the last chapter. one picture was missing from the party and the fight pictures were two times the same. I fixed it now
I just binge-read your whole story. How great! Raala had it coming, but I feel bad for her son. I guess he can't stick around as a slave? (Not familiar with the challenge rules).
Also, I'm really rooting for Baato with Nieva. I think I've got a litte attachment to him.
@PeachyKeen88 glad you enjoyed it he can stick around as a slave until he becomes ya then he should leave for another tribe ^^ but I have an idea of bringing him into the story again later
Oh, I am curious what will happen in next chapters... I have a hope that Taam has feelings for Manika too, but is here some solution? I loved this chapter although I liked all I read before
Ugh Manika better not choose Baato for breeding! Just go with your natural chemistry nd breed with Taam Manika! Grr (not that I particularly want either of them to be sacrificed, but if it's Baato I'll cry). Remember those undesirable traits Manika!
I must admit that, for entirely selfish reasons, I really hope that Manika doesn't chose Baato as a breeding slave. For he is my favorite, and I have hopes that he will stay until he is old and gray, and possibly dead from natural causes.
I'm glad that Kahio is settling in well after the whole runaway incident. And Zaleena looks really great in that orange dress. The color suits her.
Great chapter! I'm sure Manika will be good creator. Hmm. It would be the most reasonable choice if she get a new slave for breeding. She obviously is too attached to Taam.. Something tells me it just isn't that easy choice to make. Waiting what will happen!
Thanks so much for all of your comments ^^ Oh dear, what have I done that you know all scared Manika might choose Baato >.< I love him too, you know xD He's my favourite character right now, shortly behind are Manika and Taam. Don't know who I'm shipping yet, though.
@Julyvee94, I'm not scared if Manika will choose Baato No matter that he is lazy, but he has other traits and he is great as person in my opinion I was so upset when he got in troubles being innocent. But will Manika choose Baato when she has feelings for Taam? That's a question... Now I'm feeling totally lost here
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Yay! Great news! I'm already waiting for the tommorow
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I'm looking forward to her reign, and I hope things work out for her and Taam. Although now that she is Creator she really does have her pick of the slaves doesn't she?
That much is true. But Manika is still Manika and she probably wont pick him if she feels hes not interested. Also it will be hard for her if she had to sacrifice him. I'll see if he stays around
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I agree... It will very hard for her, she'll feel horrible like my creator Amadahy I hope Monika will not need to sacrifice Taam. But... I'd like to see them together
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I hope it will be possible... I wish them the best and I'm very curious what will come next in your story
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I totally agree with you @Lafrou
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Also, I'm really rooting for Baato with Nieva. I think I've got a litte attachment to him.
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I'm glad that Kahio is settling in well after the whole runaway incident. And Zaleena looks really great in that orange dress. The color suits her.
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