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    Silverofdreams30Silverofdreams30 Posts: 7,201 Member
    @meerkattime

    Thank you, Lilith was already placed in the world
    I just edited her a little bit.
    Yep, Gwen is trying to be more mature and not cause unnecessary drama
    since they are not officially dating yet.
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    DivaDoodleDivaDoodle Posts: 1,858 Member
    @Silverofsreams30 Wow! Almost a year your story is going on! Congrats!!!!

    I love it when it's all about your teens! Omg I died when I saw Ayden as a teen and so nice looking but still looking like himself! I don't know how you managed that! Brava!!!

    The multi-level hang out you made is so wonderful with the different level for the teens to hang out! I love seeing everybody!

    Wowie Gwen such a cute teen to try to be so adult and not cause drama and know she is not yet ready for dating yet, or Did Mom and Dad tell her she is too young to date?
    That is a special friendship they have to promise to be dates in the future when Gwen is ready. I liked how you wrote that : ''Gwen and Parker were right now just friends though they had promised when the time is right to deepen this friendship so she was not too worried.''

    omg I love the guy hooting and saying he can sing better lol what a nut!

    YAY No Zombies!!! I enjoyed the update and seeing all the super cute teens!!
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    Silverofdreams30Silverofdreams30 Posts: 7,201 Member
    @DivaDoodle

    Thank you, Yeah Ayden is a difficult one to edit but I don't want to change their
    originals too much so I usually let the facials be as they are except if there are too huge eyes or a big nose.
    Gwen knows that she's not yet ready for a serious relationship, but once there is a prom you know that will change hehe.
    I have plans for the two of them to go to prom together as soon as one pops up.
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    DivaDoodleDivaDoodle Posts: 1,858 Member
    @Silverofdreams30 Oh yes the Prom does make that happen! <3
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    Silverofdreams30Silverofdreams30 Posts: 7,201 Member
    @DivaDoodle

    Yes, more to come soon.
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    emorrillemorrill Posts: 8,122 Member
    @Silverofdreams30 Hold up, it's been a YEAR already since you started this story!? :open_mouth: My gracious how time flies!
    The food the teens are eating sounds yummy. :yum: (Maybe cause I'm hungry. :p )
    That fire pit rocks! :star: Is that another one from the Store?
    I haven't played around with the DJ station yet and I really need to... I played with it a lot in Sims 2. I sent my sims to community lots MANY times back then and there always had to be a DJ table at the happening lots. ;)
    Gwen looks different. It must be the new hair. ;)
    Gwen and Parker were right now just friends though they had promised when the time is right to deepen this friendship so she was not too worried.
    If he wanted a short fling, she was okay with that as she's not ready yet for a relationship.
    ^Famous last words right? ;):p
    So Lilith and Gabrielle are both digging Parker eh? :smirk: The drama is brewing...I can feel it. :p
    Ha ha, love the Parental Advisory shirt. :lol:
    Yay for the no zombies mod! :star:
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    Silverofdreams30Silverofdreams30 Posts: 7,201 Member
    edited February 2022
    @emorrill

    Thank you, I have had to change Gwen's hair and skin tone a few
    times now haha.
    I think it's from the store yes.
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    Silverofdreams30Silverofdreams30 Posts: 7,201 Member
    edited February 2022
    Here is another chapter!

    " Someday or one day"

    Season Two

    chapter three, part one



    Finally another weekend in the game,
    It's where the most gameplay for this story takes place.

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    French Fry was adorable, as he most often is.
    He and Smuggler are very much loved cats.

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    While everyone was in school still, Matthew and Teresa had a bit of
    an outing by the festival area.

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    Emily was there and she watched someone really closely,
    but from afar.

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    Her guy Ty was playing the horseshoe game with some other
    sims.

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    Back at home, they were cozy in the bathroom. They never had any time while the
    kids were at home so they stole some minutes here and there.

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    Saw a notice that Parker went to Gabrielle's home after school,
    she lives in a houseboat.

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    With two dogs on top of her own family needed to place pet stuff cause there were
    none of it there.

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    Parker complemented their small home, and then they did the homework before
    he headed back home.

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    He needed a bath and food quickly so that was taken care of.

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    Teresa tried to give the little guy a bath but he had none of it.

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    Saturday morning was spent working out for the guys.

    In the afternoon I sent the teens out to the hangout, just easier to control all
    of them there.

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    Waiting for everyone to arrive!

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    Spencer Funke decided it was time to hop in the tub, so he went in and just
    relaxed.

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    Gwen served the food, the teens always were hungry after a long day
    at school.

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    Kaylynn first arrived,
    she had not seen Parker for ages, so they had lots to catch up on.

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    She and Gwen also chatted while they had a plate of food.

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    Alexander Goth was mad, he had heard that his girlfriend angela Pleasant had been cheating
    on him, they had been a couple for al ong time so he needed to confront her about if it was true.

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    " Angie, I need to talk to you," he said muttering.

    " Alex, what is going on? Why are you looking so mad"?

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    " I heard first hand from my brother that you have been seeing another guy
    behind my back, why Angie I thought we had something real
    "

    " Your brother, Mortimer? And you believe everything that he tells you?
    why did you not check with me first before coming to your
    own conclusions
    "? She said staring at him. Not believe she was accused of something she had not done.

    " He's my brother, if he tells me he saw you with some guy sneaking about right I would be mad". He said
    and shook his head.

    Angela sighed " That is my tutor okay! if I want to go to college I need to up my
    marks, we met a few times a week because of that, I have never cheated on you"
    !

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    Alexander stubborn turned around,
    " I need to calm down, lets' talk later okay". He said and walked away.

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    Leaving Angela to her own thoughts.

    To be continued


    Tagging: @emorrill , @bekkasan , @meerkattime , @DivaDoodle
    @ZhakiraP





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    emorrillemorrill Posts: 8,122 Member
    @Silverofdreams30 Haha, my Simself be like:

    *inaudible gasp* "Why is my Ty playing horseshoes with other, hotter girls? He didn't say anything about that to me! Is he cheating on me? Or is he over me? Is that why he's thinking of cheating? What if, what if, what if?!?"

    :joy:

    I almost didn't recognize that it was Matt and Teresa kissing in the bathroom. :lol: I thought it was Gwen and some other guy! :open_mouth::p
    Cool that Gabrielle lives on a Houseboat. So is Parker hanging out with her because he considers her a friend? Or a study buddy? Sorry, I need more details. :p
    Cute doggies! 🐶
    I wonder what Gwen and Kaylynn were chatting about. ;)
    Oooh, sad drama between Alexander and Angela. :( It's hard not to trust what you hear from your siblings, especially if you are close. I hope Angela's telling the truth.
    I look forward to more. :)
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    DivaDoodleDivaDoodle Posts: 1,858 Member

    @Silverofdreams30 omg smuggler is adorable!😻

    wow I love seeing so many sims!

    Yay the hang out! Oh, poor Alexander Goth! OK so maybe a misunderstanding.

    Wow I didn't recognize Teresa!😘

    Great update and looking forward to More!
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    Silverofdreams30Silverofdreams30 Posts: 7,201 Member
    edited March 2022
    @emorrill

    :D No Gwen would not kiss some random guy haha. She has no wish to kiss anyone yet, if she gets one it will be Parker only I have seen them beeing sweet automatically heh.

    Parker sees Gabrielle as a good friend, he enjoys studying with anyone.

    Heh, that was a sneaky kiss photo of Teresa and Matthew.

    Angela meant what she said, I dont know who he had seen her beeing sweet to, but it was a good idea to use in the story when I saw him wanting to accuse her. I switch between teens using mastercontroller.

    Thank you!


    @DivaDoodle

    Thank you!



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    bekkasanbekkasan Posts: 10,171 Member

    @Silverofdreams30 Such a cute name for a cute cat! French Fry
    I think she was giving those girls playing horseshoes with Ty the stare down.
    Ty is very committed in my saves so I think she doesn't have to worry. :heart:
    Ty is so adorable! He and my Danielle and the baby they had in my future save will be in the next wave of sims to move to Supernatural Island.
    Both the dogs are totally adorable.
    Love the workout pictures! :love:
    oh wow...poor Angie and yeah Alex should have asked but I know how easy it is when jealously rears it's ugly head.
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    Silverofdreams30Silverofdreams30 Posts: 7,201 Member
    @bekkasan

    Thank you, I had fun with this update.
    More to come soon.
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    meerkattimemeerkattime Posts: 261 Member
    @silverofdreams30

    Aww, cute picture of French Fry <3 .
    I wonder why that blonde lady who's playing horseshoes with Ty and standing behind him is giving him such a nasty look.
    Yes, kissing time! :blush:
    Good boy, Parker! Looks like just a friendly meeting with Gabrielle ;) .
    Poor Alexander! I hope it's just nasty rumors and not true...
    Ok, maybe Alexander shouldn't have been so quick to believe his brother. Sounds like he's still not sure if she's telling the truth though :/ .
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    Silverofdreams30Silverofdreams30 Posts: 7,201 Member
    @meerkattime

    Thank you, it was a fun update it's always so interesting to play
    when I use most of the teens and switch between them to have them be busy with things haha.
    my game crashed so had to stop playing last night as it was quite late.
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    Silverofdreams30Silverofdreams30 Posts: 7,201 Member
    Update soon, been taking some screenshots.
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    Silverofdreams30Silverofdreams30 Posts: 7,201 Member
    Tme for the next part of this chapter

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    While Angela and Alexander fought, other sims arrived, Tristan was the
    ongoing Dj in the group as no one else wanted to work that DJ booth he took that upon himself.

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    After some time Angela wanted to make up with Alex so she went to apologize for making him
    angry, it was really not her fault but she wanted them to not be mad at each other. He would not have it at
    first as he was still hurt.

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    " I don't know Angie, I'm still hurt you know,
    I know it's not your intention to make me this way but rumors are not fun
    ".

    " Alex, please I never ever have done anything to upset you like this, I can't believe
    Mortimer acted this way, I'm so sorry I love you, you know more than anything
    "

    Alex was surprised they had not said " I love you" to each other before, they had
    hung out had some dates but nothing of the sort like " I love you". He understood then Angela was serious, she would not utter these
    words if she were not the least interested in him, and now she said it his heart felt lighter than ever before.

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    He sighed " I love you too Angie, I do not want to fight I know it is stupid but we cant help what we
    feel sometimes.
    ".

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    The two of them finally made up and decided to have a chat with his brother later.

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    The beat of the music started up " Are you ready to rock it!", Tristan shouted as he started this
    evenings gig.

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    Darlene was not sure what to make of this music, she listened in to it very
    focused.

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    Gabrielle had grabbed Parker for dance, at least it was not a slow dance so he
    said okay to one, Parker was not big on dancing otherwise. Gwen was busy chatting with his sister so she was not
    near at that moment.

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    The guys too had fun chatting away, this hangout was good to relax after a long
    schoolday, they could even do homework here.


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    Ethan Bunch and Kaylynn are dating so they grabbed a bite to eat later on.

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    Darlene enjoyed the music after all, so she joined others to
    dance.


    to be continued


    Tagging: @emorrill , @bekkasan , @DivaDoodle , @meerkattime ,
    @TinySpaceFox


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    meerkattimemeerkattime Posts: 261 Member
    @Silverofdreams30

    Angela doesn't have to apologize if she didn't do anything - It's Alex who owes her an apology. I can understand Angela just not wanting to fight though.
    Glad to see they made up <3 .
    I like that pensive look on Darlene's face. Nice to see she decided to join the others on the dance floor :smile: .
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    Silverofdreams30Silverofdreams30 Posts: 7,201 Member
    edited March 2022
    @meerkattime

    Hope you slept well. Thank you,
    I have lots of fun playing tvis save. Yep he owes her an apology too. Im sure he will when they are on their own hehe.
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    emorrillemorrill Posts: 8,122 Member
    edited March 2022
    @Silverofdreams30 This update to the story was SO good! I really enjoyed it! :smiley:
    Aww, bless Angela's heart. <3 I don't blame her for going and apologizing even if it's not her fault so that there can be peace between them. I tend to do the same in my life, over apologize, and a lot of it is anxiety driven because I don't want to feel anxious and overwhelmed over a situation and want to make things right, but anyway...I sympathize with her and hopefully Alex will say he is sorry.
    "I love you" are very powerful words and I'm glad that Alex could recognize her sincerity in saying it. <3
    His Diesel shirt rocks. :star: It reminds me of the car attire my older brothers used to wear when I was growing up. :)
    The two of them finally made up and decided to have a chat with his brother later.
    ^I'm gonna take that to mean he apologized too. :p;) I'm happy for them! :blush:
    Yeah! Get the party started Tristan! :smiley: Woo!
    I wonder if Darlene is thinking about how cute Tristan looks up there... :smirk:
    Oh of course Gabrielle is moving in on Parker like the lioness that she is..... :confused: Gwen may have to get involved soon. :p
    Your updates here make me miss being a carefree teenager. :blush:
    I look forward to more. :)
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    Silverofdreams30Silverofdreams30 Posts: 7,201 Member
    edited March 2022
    @emorrill

    Thank you, I enjoy playing with the teens cause it can give me a bit of relaxation
    from the real world and job hunts,
    just become immersive within these teens' lives instead hehe.
    This story is also a way for me to practice my English and become better at it.
    Tristan is Tristan Van ghoul ( not sure of the last name) btw hehe.
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    TinySpaceFoxTinySpaceFox Posts: 1,110 Member
    The dialogue between Alex and Angela was just too sweet <3 I love that she finally said "I love you", and he realised she was indeed serious and couldn't have been cheating!
    Mortimer's gonna get an earful later from the both of them, it sounds like :tongue:
    Your Darlene looks so good especially with her glasses!
    Love Parker's goofy smile as he's dancing :) wonder if anything is going on between him and Gabrielle (where are you Gwen?)
    they could even do homework here.
    But would they want to? That is the question :tongue:
    I can definitely see your English is improving! Congratulations and keep up the good work! :star:
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    Silverofdreams30Silverofdreams30 Posts: 7,201 Member
    edited March 2022
    @TinySpaceFox

    Thank you for the sweet comment.
    No, nothing from Parkers side its just a one sided crush from Gabrielle but she has no clue yet. Gotta have a little drama now and then to make it fun to play.
    They do their homework at the hangout automatically hehe.
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    Silverofdreams30Silverofdreams30 Posts: 7,201 Member
    Final part for chapter three

    Here is finally the final part of this chapter, enjoy!

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    After their fight Alex and Angela had fun, there was no angry
    faces and it look like they had made up for this time, might be other times they fight
    but they will try to always fix it in a peaceful way.

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    uh - oh, what are you trying to do Gabrielle!. Parker won't have any of
    that so don't worry ( it just looked like she is trying to grab his hand)

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    If you wonder what Gwen is up to, well she is here outside the room eating,
    shes a foodie who loves food ( no she don't have the trait, she just like good food)

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    The karaoke machine is popular, they take turns trying to sing their hearts out


    Matthew had his bachelor party at the same time, he decided it was best to not have it at home so he booked Waylon's hunt for it.
    ( no wedding date yet, just ad a notification in-game to plan a party).

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    Greeting the friends arriving took its sweet time.

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    The mixologist looked bored, no one was ordering from her yet.

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    "Let's get the party started!"

    Matthew cheered and sprayed all of the guests with champagne.

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    Damien arrived late.

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    Ty knows how to entertain, he straight went up and danced on the counter!

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    Noone goes safe from the spraying!

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    The dancer arrived, but she just stood around and did not dance.

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    Matthew finally went round to greet Jeff.

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    Don was hungry!

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    After a drink or two, it was time to hit the karaoke! this was after
    the bachelor party was over.

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    Rhett Funke was passing by Matilda Smart, but it looked like he were
    kissing her.

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    Why looking so glum Damien? I have no idea maybe he was sad the party was
    over so soon.

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    Look like they had a wild night out!

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    With singing going on until the bar closed!

    all in all the party was a success, Matthew could go to bed happy after
    a good party.

    End of Chapter Three

    Tagging: @emorrill , @bekkasan , @meerkattime , @TinySpaceFox ,
    @DivaDoodle





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    bekkasanbekkasan Posts: 10,171 Member

    I'm glad that they were able to make up and say those lovely magic words to each other! :heart:
    Ack that Gabrielle! lol Snatching Parker for a dance.
    Everyone looks like they are having a lovely time.
    It does look like she is trying to grab his hand!
    The bachelor party looks fun.
    Damien! So handsome.
    Ty looks awesome up there dancing away.
    Perhaps Damien wanted to see the girl dancing rather than Ty?
    What a successful bachelor party!
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