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My story corner

Hello

I have decided to start a little corner here, for a new side story I am planning.
More to come later.

Comments

  • emorrillemorrill Posts: 7,383 Member
    Sweet! Bookmarked! :kissing_heart:
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  • Silverofdreams30Silverofdreams30 Posts: 6,425 Member
    edited April 17
    Story title

    Someday or one day

    Characters



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    Gwen Peters, the main character her grandmother passed away and left
    a big house for Gwen and her mother Teresa, which they soon moved into.
    Noone knows who Gwen's father was, her mother told her he left before she was born, the story will
    be Gwen trying to find out who her father is, and on the way find her own happiness.

    Post edited by Silverofdreams30 on
  • Silverofdreams30Silverofdreams30 Posts: 6,425 Member
    @emorrill

    Ty for following.
  • DivaDoodleDivaDoodle Posts: 1,695 Member

    @Silverofdreams30 Love the storyline! That will be interesting for Gwen to try to find out who her father is!


    She is a beauty! <3
  • Silverofdreams30Silverofdreams30 Posts: 6,425 Member
    @DivaDoodle

    Ty for following :)
  • Silverofdreams30Silverofdreams30 Posts: 6,425 Member
    edited April 17
    Next character

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    Teresa Peters, Gwen's mother, holds a secret which her daughter can not know of,
    and its parts to do with who her father is.
    Post edited by Silverofdreams30 on
  • DivaDoodleDivaDoodle Posts: 1,695 Member

    Teresa looks like an awesome Mom!

    Oh, her daughter can not know of the secret her Mother holds! Interesting!

    I am intrigued! :)
  • Silverofdreams30Silverofdreams30 Posts: 6,425 Member
    @DivaDoodle

    Thank you, I
    'm about to post part of the prologue right now.
  • Silverofdreams30Silverofdreams30 Posts: 6,425 Member
    edited April 17
    " someday , or one day"

    Prologue part one

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    My grandmother passed away a few months ago, she left this big
    house to me and my mother so one can say we are the new kids on the block.
    We lived in another area for years, in a tiny two-bedroom apartment before we moved.

    My mother had never enjoyed the city life much, she only stayed because she could not afford to move, her job as a caretaker did not pay enough. She also wanted me to finish elementary school so I did not have to give up my life too soon.
    But when grandma passed she left us her home to renovate, we basically got it free of charge it just needed a little work to be perfect again,
    gran knew my mother loved to redesign so she knew this would be the perfect excuse for us to move and so had left us the lot.

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    Oh, I'm silly, you all must wonder who is this crazy person talking about some old home? I totally forgot to introduce myself first.
    I am Gwen, yeah " Gwen", you heard it correctly G- W-E_ N!. My mother had always loved this name, so when she gave birth to me I was named it.
    I'm a high schooler, just turned 15, and this will be my story to tell, what story you may wonder? My father according to my mother left us before she gave birth to me, I want to find out more about who he was, and if I can find him again, I want answers my mum cant give me and this will be my story to tell.

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  • DivaDoodleDivaDoodle Posts: 1,695 Member

    @Silverofdreams30 I like the part one of the Prologue! I like the way Gwen speaks! What a cute 15 year old! Teens are my favorites!

    That was nice of Grandma to leave her home to them! I've always liked that corner facing house!

    It will fun to see what Teresa wants to do with it!

    I wonder where Gwen will begin her searching for answers! :)
  • Silverofdreams30Silverofdreams30 Posts: 6,425 Member
    @DivaDoodle

    Ty, I do not write beforehand, I take screenshots then I type up my
    planned story. We will see what she get up to.
  • chonkiechonkie Posts: 24 Member
    Bookmarked! Already seems like a very entertaining story. :)
    By the way, I really like the name Gwen too! It's cute. I wonder how she's going to go about finding her father, it can't be very easy...
    Can't wait to see where the story goes :)
  • Silverofdreams30Silverofdreams30 Posts: 6,425 Member
    @chonkie

    Ty for following, I hope it will
    be enjoyable, English is my second language so I use an addon
    to correct the grammar.
  • DivaDoodleDivaDoodle Posts: 1,695 Member

    @Silverofdreams30 That's how I do it too, I take pics, then pause the game and jot down what's happened, then go back and unpause and carry on!

    btw I think your English is very good! You sound very fluent! 👍
  • Silverofdreams30Silverofdreams30 Posts: 6,425 Member
    " someday or one day"

    Chapter one


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    "So this is my room, it's where I spend most of my free time after
    school, either relaxing or trying to find clues about who my dad is
    ".

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    " I Take selfies, which fail miserably a lot of the times"

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    " Or sometimes they just turn out goofy, like this one".

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    " And sometimes I just give myself a pep talk".

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    I decided to chat a bit with some of the locals, maybe any of them could
    give me answers about my father. There were only two people on this early on a
    Sunday, but it better than none. there was this older guy that looked kind, I thought a bit
    about how to start and then typed slowly.

    Gwen - ]Hello, my name is Gwen Peters,
    I have just moved here, maybe you can help me

    Hank - " Hello, How can I help you"?

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    Gwen - I need to find out who my father is or was, he disappeared before I was
    born, but I can not just sit here not knowing what happened to him.

    Hank - I think you could ask around town, the elders here might have information,
    it's all I know, I have not lived here that long".

    Gwen " Okay, thank you for trying to help, I figure something out".

    I logged off the chat and decided it was time to head out and look around.

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    Downstairs my cat smuggler came up to greet me, we have had him for about
    two years, he's the most cuddly cat ever.

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    My mother was busy painting " I head out a bit" I called to her, as the front door closed after me.

    To be continued



  • Silverofdreams30Silverofdreams30 Posts: 6,425 Member
    @DivaDoodle

    Thank you,
    I try my best with the language.
  • chonkiechonkie Posts: 24 Member
    That is the friendliest, most gentle looking cat I've ever seen! :lol:
    It's a bit of a long shot, but I hope Gwen finds some sort of hint! Maybe some of the elders in town are the tropey kind that love to chat and stick their noses into other people's business. XD That could be helpful for once.
  • bekkasanbekkasan Posts: 9,835 Member

    @Silverofdreams30 Gwen and her Mom are both very lovely sims. Gwen must get her color from her father or grandparents.
    I'm looking forward to the story.
    The house looks really nice. I'm sure they will enjoy living in it and designing it.
    I hope Gwen is able to find her answers.
    Her room is really cute!
    Good idea to talk to some of the older people around town.
    I'm guessing her Mom doesn't know what she is up too. :grin:
  • emorrillemorrill Posts: 7,383 Member
    @Silverofdreams30 LOVE the way you designed Gwen's room. <3
    Her selfie pics. :lol:
    I do hope she can find someone who can help her find answers about her dad. It's a shame her mother doesn't want to reveal much...makes me really wonder why. :p
    Smuggler is adorable. <3
    I look forward to reading more. :)
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  • TamijoTamijo Posts: 831 Member

    @Silverofdreams30
    She is a cute girl, fantastic high-quality pictures.
    The room is spot on for a teen like her.
    Hope some of the older people in town can help her.
    Want to follow my story - Suggest that you read the Biographies at the first post here:

    Survivors the River

    That should help a lot understanding what is going on.


  • Silverofdreams30Silverofdreams30 Posts: 6,425 Member
    edited April 3
    @bekkasan, @emorrill, @Tamijo, @chonkie

    Thank you so much for enjoying this little adventure so far, I won't spoil the fun
    of it too soon, so time will eventually tell if she will find out who the father is.
    Her mother doesn't want to tell her as it's a secret she decided to not tell anyone about, but Gwen is a teen
    she will figure stuff out on her own eventually with her curiosity.

  • DivaDoodleDivaDoodle Posts: 1,695 Member

    @Silverofdreams30 omg such a cute room! You are Very good at decorating!

    LOL Gwen's selfies! <3 She is so darling!

    That was brave of Gwen to chat to complete stranger Hank!

    OMG Smuggler is So cute! and such a cute name! He looks very soft! and he is smiling! I LOVE him!!! <3

    I am very interested in Gwen's Mom! Why does she want to keep this secret! It might be it is too painful to remember, is what I am thinking! Ah Love gone wrong maybe!


    Great story!
  • Silverofdreams30Silverofdreams30 Posts: 6,425 Member
    @DivaDoodle

    Thank you, my friend!
    I am still trying to figure out the father plot, not yet decided what I want to do with it
    I just go as I take the screenshots so not planning ahead.
  • DivaDoodleDivaDoodle Posts: 1,695 Member

    Silverofdreams30 yes, not planning ahead is the best for me! I would just let Gwen be Gwen, and she will at sometime reveal to you (it will come to you) where this story wants to go! After all there is more to a sims day than always being on a quest! :smile:<3
  • Silverofdreams30Silverofdreams30 Posts: 6,425 Member
    @DivaDoodle

    Yeah, I will figure it out sooner or later haha.
    Had a headache yesterday so was not on the forum,
    today it is gone so that's good.

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