Hey all, does anyone have any suggestions on how to make your stories encourage comments/feedback? I'd really love it if I could take readers' opinions into consideration more than I'm currently able to (but then again it's possible that my story just isn't good enough to get people invested in it to begin with). If you have any advice for this, or personal experiences related to it you're willing to share (even just 'be patient' would be appreciated as I'm not sure if I should make changes to anything or not) I'd really appreciate it.
Hey all, does anyone have any suggestions on how to make your stories encourage comments/feedback? I'd really love it if I could take readers' opinions into consideration more than I'm currently able to (but then again it's possible that my story just isn't good enough to get people invested in it to begin with). If you have any advice for this, or personal experiences related to it you're willing to share (even just 'be patient' would be appreciated as I'm not sure if I should make changes to anything or not) I'd really appreciate it.
Hey all, does anyone have any suggestions on how to make your stories encourage comments/feedback? I'd really love it if I could take readers' opinions into consideration more than I'm currently able to (but then again it's possible that my story just isn't good enough to get people invested in it to begin with). If you have any advice for this, or personal experiences related to it you're willing to share (even just 'be patient' would be appreciated as I'm not sure if I should make changes to anything or not) I'd really appreciate it.
true story i started with 3 readers. then when i started again it went to 6 now countless attempts later its in the 80s. sometimes it takes a while to get readers but don't get discouraged keep writing.
i'm probably going to age adrian today 2 reasons 1 the baby pic didn't really show. and 2 i never know what my week looks like til it starts. so i don't want to wait.
i'm probably going to age adrian today 2 reasons 1 the baby pic didn't really show. and 2 i never know what my week looks like til it starts. so i don't want to wait.
@friendsfan367 Ooh excited to see what Adrian looks like
Just realised it's 2 weeks until I get to change my banner again!!! (I'm hyped. Currently screenshotting some chapters to get ahead for next month!!)
i'm probably going to age adrian today 2 reasons 1 the baby pic didn't really show. and 2 i never know what my week looks like til it starts. so i don't want to wait.
@friendsfan367 Ooh excited to see what Adrian looks like
Just realised it's 2 weeks until I get to change my banner again!!! (I'm hyped. Currently screenshotting some chapters to get ahead for next month!!)
'Cause I am. I even came up with my complicated relationship thing for gen 3. Have to have one of those every gen! This one is less complicated than the Vince, Claude etc of gen 2 but... it's more strange. I laughed writing that chapter (I wrote it to get ideas down, it might change same as first teen chapter did from the original) because it's just hilariously ironic.
i'm probably going to age adrian today 2 reasons 1 the baby pic didn't really show. and 2 i never know what my week looks like til it starts. so i don't want to wait.
@friendsfan367 Ooh excited to see what Adrian looks like
Just realised it's 2 weeks until I get to change my banner again!!! (I'm hyped. Currently screenshotting some chapters to get ahead for next month!!)
i'm probably going to age adrian today 2 reasons 1 the baby pic didn't really show. and 2 i never know what my week looks like til it starts. so i don't want to wait.
@friendsfan367 Ooh excited to see what Adrian looks like
Just realised it's 2 weeks until I get to change my banner again!!! (I'm hyped. Currently screenshotting some chapters to get ahead for next month!!)
i'm probably going to age adrian today 2 reasons 1 the baby pic didn't really show. and 2 i never know what my week looks like til it starts. so i don't want to wait.
@friendsfan367 Ooh excited to see what Adrian looks like
Just realised it's 2 weeks until I get to change my banner again!!! (I'm hyped. Currently screenshotting some chapters to get ahead for next month!!)
'Cause I am. I even came up with my complicated relationship thing for gen 3. Have to have one of those every gen! This one is less complicated than the Vince, Claude etc of gen 2 but... it's more strange. I laughed writing that chapter (I wrote it to get ideas down, it might change same as first teen chapter did from the original) because it's just hilariously ironic.
@Bugsie2016 ooh very excited for this new generation! I wonder what this 'strange' relationship will be. That's a really good idea to write a fun chapter to get into the swing of a new generation, even if you don't publish it.
Hey all, does anyone have any suggestions on how to make your stories encourage comments/feedback? I'd really love it if I could take readers' opinions into consideration more than I'm currently able to (but then again it's possible that my story just isn't good enough to get people invested in it to begin with). If you have any advice for this, or personal experiences related to it you're willing to share (even just 'be patient' would be appreciated as I'm not sure if I should make changes to anything or not) I'd really appreciate it.
Hi, @IchigoUsagi ! @friendsfan367 is right! Keep on writing, let people know when you've updated your story, and be patient to get readers.
To get feedback, you can try having an "Author's Notes" section at the bottom where you ask specific questions. You're also welcome to ask questions here at this thread, or at The Kindness Bench, the Fringe, or The Feedback Thread.
Sometimes it works well to pose specific questions. Many times, readers aren't sure what types of comments or suggestions are welcome, so if you ask a specific question, it can give useful direction.
Just realised it's 2 weeks until I get to change my banner again!!! (I'm hyped. Currently screenshotting some chapters to get ahead for next month!!)
you better keep your avi. just because i like it not because i'd be upset.
I'll keep it until Rye gets a boyfriend then i'm changing it. (She's a teen in my game, i'm about 4/5 chapters ahead of the story. )
Edit: Actually i'm changing it to Claude's wedding pic when I get to that point. I love that picture!
@Bugsie2016 Claude's getting married???? I can't wait for the wedding!
Hopefully he's marrying Ally! He better be marrying Ally!
You knew he was getting married. Also, of course he's marrying Ally. I just never confirmed it before because they weren't dating. Now they are I feel I can confirm it.
Hey all, does anyone have any suggestions on how to make your stories encourage comments/feedback? I'd really love it if I could take readers' opinions into consideration more than I'm currently able to (but then again it's possible that my story just isn't good enough to get people invested in it to begin with). If you have any advice for this, or personal experiences related to it you're willing to share (even just 'be patient' would be appreciated as I'm not sure if I should make changes to anything or not) I'd really appreciate it.
Hi, @IchigoUsagi ! @friendsfan367 is right! Keep on writing, let people know when you've updated your story, and be patient to get readers.
To get feedback, you can try having an "Author's Notes" section at the bottom where you ask specific questions. You're also welcome to ask questions here at this thread, or at The Kindness Bench, the Fringe, or The Feedback Thread.
Sometimes it works well to pose specific questions. Many times, readers aren't sure what types of comments or suggestions are welcome, so if you ask a specific question, it can give useful direction.
@IchigoUsagi Also, Just to let you know I am really enjoying your story so far, as you probably know already. If you want to ask me questions about it, you're welcome to pm me. @CathyTea is right. Sometimes we're not sure what sort of feedback you're looking for.
Just realised it's 2 weeks until I get to change my banner again!!! (I'm hyped. Currently screenshotting some chapters to get ahead for next month!!)
you better keep your avi. just because i like it not because i'd be upset.
I'll keep it until Rye gets a boyfriend then i'm changing it. (She's a teen in my game, i'm about 4/5 chapters ahead of the story. )
Edit: Actually i'm changing it to Claude's wedding pic when I get to that point. I love that picture!
@Bugsie2016 Claude's getting married???? I can't wait for the wedding!
Hopefully he's marrying Ally! He better be marrying Ally!
You knew he was getting married. Also, of course he's marrying Ally. I just never confirmed it before because they weren't dating. Now they are I feel I can confirm it.
@Bugsie2016 Yesss! My day is made! (Does a little jig)!
Just realised it's 2 weeks until I get to change my banner again!!! (I'm hyped. Currently screenshotting some chapters to get ahead for next month!!)
you better keep your avi. just because i like it not because i'd be upset.
I'll keep it until Rye gets a boyfriend then i'm changing it. (She's a teen in my game, i'm about 4/5 chapters ahead of the story. )
Edit: Actually i'm changing it to Claude's wedding pic when I get to that point. I love that picture!
@Bugsie2016 Claude's getting married???? I can't wait for the wedding!
Hopefully he's marrying Ally! He better be marrying Ally!
You knew he was getting married. Also, of course he's marrying Ally. I just never confirmed it before because they weren't dating. Now they are I feel I can confirm it.
@Bugsie2016 Yesss! My day is made! (Does a little jig)!
I'm hyped for it. He's my first simlit baby (first baby born in any of my stories!) and i'm so proud of him. Is that weird to say???
Just realised it's 2 weeks until I get to change my banner again!!! (I'm hyped. Currently screenshotting some chapters to get ahead for next month!!)
you better keep your avi. just because i like it not because i'd be upset.
I'll keep it until Rye gets a boyfriend then i'm changing it. (She's a teen in my game, i'm about 4/5 chapters ahead of the story. )
Edit: Actually i'm changing it to Claude's wedding pic when I get to that point. I love that picture!
@Bugsie2016 Claude's getting married???? I can't wait for the wedding!
Hopefully he's marrying Ally! He better be marrying Ally!
You knew he was getting married. Also, of course he's marrying Ally. I just never confirmed it before because they weren't dating. Now they are I feel I can confirm it.
@Bugsie2016 Yesss! My day is made! (Does a little jig)!
I'm hyped for it. He's my first simlit baby (first baby born in any of my stories!) and i'm so proud of him. Is that weird to say???
@Bugsie2016 Nah! That's cool! XD Does that mean the other children were Cas born?
Just realised it's 2 weeks until I get to change my banner again!!! (I'm hyped. Currently screenshotting some chapters to get ahead for next month!!)
you better keep your avi. just because i like it not because i'd be upset.
I'll keep it until Rye gets a boyfriend then i'm changing it. (She's a teen in my game, i'm about 4/5 chapters ahead of the story. )
Edit: Actually i'm changing it to Claude's wedding pic when I get to that point. I love that picture!
@Bugsie2016 Claude's getting married???? I can't wait for the wedding!
Hopefully he's marrying Ally! He better be marrying Ally!
You knew he was getting married. Also, of course he's marrying Ally. I just never confirmed it before because they weren't dating. Now they are I feel I can confirm it.
@Bugsie2016 Yesss! My day is made! (Does a little jig)!
I'm hyped for it. He's my first simlit baby (first baby born in any of my stories!) and i'm so proud of him. Is that weird to say???
@Bugsie2016 Nah! That's cool! XD Does that mean the other children were Cas born?
Nah, only Harry. Vince, Delta and Beth were in game but they're all younger than Claude. Claude's Maria's oldest child.
Maria's in the next chapter actually along with Bob....
Just realised it's 2 weeks until I get to change my banner again!!! (I'm hyped. Currently screenshotting some chapters to get ahead for next month!!)
you better keep your avi. just because i like it not because i'd be upset.
I'll keep it until Rye gets a boyfriend then i'm changing it. (She's a teen in my game, i'm about 4/5 chapters ahead of the story. )
Edit: Actually i'm changing it to Claude's wedding pic when I get to that point. I love that picture!
@Bugsie2016 Claude's getting married???? I can't wait for the wedding!
Hopefully he's marrying Ally! He better be marrying Ally!
You knew he was getting married. Also, of course he's marrying Ally. I just never confirmed it before because they weren't dating. Now they are I feel I can confirm it.
@Bugsie2016 Yesss! My day is made! (Does a little jig)!
I'm hyped for it. He's my first simlit baby (first baby born in any of my stories!) and i'm so proud of him. Is that weird to say???
@Bugsie2016 Nah! That's cool! XD Does that mean the other children were Cas born?
Nah, only Harry. Vince, Delta and Beth were in game but they're all younger than Claude. Claude's Maria's oldest child.
Maria's in the next chapter actually along with Bob....
Just realised it's 2 weeks until I get to change my banner again!!! (I'm hyped. Currently screenshotting some chapters to get ahead for next month!!)
you better keep your avi. just because i like it not because i'd be upset.
I'll keep it until Rye gets a boyfriend then i'm changing it. (She's a teen in my game, i'm about 4/5 chapters ahead of the story. )
Edit: Actually i'm changing it to Claude's wedding pic when I get to that point. I love that picture!
@Bugsie2016 Claude's getting married???? I can't wait for the wedding!
Hopefully he's marrying Ally! He better be marrying Ally!
You knew he was getting married. Also, of course he's marrying Ally. I just never confirmed it before because they weren't dating. Now they are I feel I can confirm it.
@Bugsie2016 Yesss! My day is made! (Does a little jig)!
I'm hyped for it. He's my first simlit baby (first baby born in any of my stories!) and i'm so proud of him. Is that weird to say???
@Bugsie2016 Nah! That's cool! XD Does that mean the other children were Cas born?
Nah, only Harry. Vince, Delta and Beth were in game but they're all younger than Claude. Claude's Maria's oldest child.
Maria's in the next chapter actually along with Bob....
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true story i started with 3 readers. then when i started again it went to 6 now countless attempts later its in the 80s. sometimes it takes a while to get readers but don't get discouraged keep writing.
happy birthday.
@friendsfan367 Ooh excited to see what Adrian looks like
Why are you so onto it @Bugsie2016 ???
'Cause I am. I even came up with my complicated relationship thing for gen 3. Have to have one of those every gen! This one is less complicated than the Vince, Claude etc of gen 2 but... it's more strange. I laughed writing that chapter (I wrote it to get ideas down, it might change same as first teen chapter did from the original) because it's just hilariously ironic.
you better keep your avi. just because i like it not because i'd be upset.
i can show him off after they move the dinning room doesn't fit 8.
I'll keep it until Rye gets a boyfriend then i'm changing it. (She's a teen in my game, i'm about 4/5 chapters ahead of the story. )
Edit: Actually i'm changing it to Claude's wedding pic when I get to that point. I love that picture!
Yayy! @friendsfan367 I'd love that!
@Bugsie2016 ooh very excited for this new generation! I wonder what this 'strange' relationship will be. That's a really good idea to write a fun chapter to get into the swing of a new generation, even if you don't publish it.
@Bugsie2016 Claude's getting married???? I can't wait for the wedding!
Hi, @IchigoUsagi ! @friendsfan367 is right! Keep on writing, let people know when you've updated your story, and be patient to get readers.
To get feedback, you can try having an "Author's Notes" section at the bottom where you ask specific questions. You're also welcome to ask questions here at this thread, or at The Kindness Bench, the Fringe, or The Feedback Thread.
Sometimes it works well to pose specific questions. Many times, readers aren't sure what types of comments or suggestions are welcome, so if you ask a specific question, it can give useful direction.
Do you also play The Elder Scrolls Online? You can find me there as CathyTea, too!
@IchigoUsagi Also, Just to let you know I am really enjoying your story so far, as you probably know already. If you want to ask me questions about it, you're welcome to pm me. @CathyTea is right. Sometimes we're not sure what sort of feedback you're looking for.
@Bugsie2016 Yesss! My day is made! (Does a little jig)!
I'm hyped for it. He's my first simlit baby (first baby born in any of my stories!) and i'm so proud of him. Is that weird to say???
@Bugsie2016 Nah! That's cool! XD Does that mean the other children were Cas born?
Nah, only Harry. Vince, Delta and Beth were in game but they're all younger than Claude. Claude's Maria's oldest child.
@Bugsie2016 I see. So what's Claude?
He's Vince's twin, he was born in game.