Definitely looking forward to Dr Vatore making a re-appearance, though not sure if he'll be willing to shed light on the situation anyway (shed light is probably a poor choice of words for a vampire. what would a vampire shed? 😆) - doesn't aound like he's been in a particular hurry to catch up with his offspring so far, so not sure why he'd change that now.
The only other thing I can think of shedding is skin, but that's just weird. Shedding skin on the situation? Or fur? Oh gosh, it's only Monday and already my brain is shot to heck.
He's probably just a busy guy. I mean the Starlight Accolades are nearly upon the town, the surgery's gonna be packed, lots of faces to fix.
Ah, finally checking in with the Vatores. I love how they were communicating telepathically. Also loved how their reaction to potential vampire hunters at the door was something akin the annoyance of a door-to-door salesman showing up.
I also forgot to say how believable Melinda's thought process was, from her wondering if she could outrun a vampire, then remembering she is a vampire to realising she has no idea what she's dealing with... very nice! Definitely feel slike being inside someone's head.
A chat between the girl is definitely in order now. For so many reasons. Come on ladies, you can do it *holds out pom poms* You're immortal beings, you have time to sit down for 20 minutes and come clean with each other... Teenagers, right?
I read Grim as it was the reaper that I was gonna see in the chapter lol. Ooof this feels like we're venturing into horror movie territory! Egg-citing!
I know, imagine spending eternity watching everyone you love dying and knowing the only way to save them is to inflict the same on them. Lilith for sure has a lot of scars.
Sorry to disappoint you. I wanted some sort of caution so people weren't all like 'lalala, let's read this lovely, light-hearted chapter on the train... oh my gosh!' but had no idea what to put. Although I suppose Grim had been so not a total lie. Yeah, there are horror elements for sure, but nothing that'll give you nightmares... I think. I'm 99% sure. 95% maybe...
So that’s how their relationship started. With lies and discomfort. That’s not a good foundation to build friendships on… though it explains how the three of them grew to have the dynamic they have now. Gah, and they’re all powerful, immortal bloodsuckers now. Powerful immortal bloodsuckers that still have the emotional maturity of a teenager. Of course this will end well. Yup. Super super well. xD
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He's probably just a busy guy. I mean the Starlight Accolades are nearly upon the town, the surgery's gonna be packed, lots of faces to fix.
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