A turtle's Journey * Update October 2

MonaSolstraale · July 16

Everything has a beginning, and everything has an end ....... Here we start with the end which at the same time is the beginning of a new life
I have written stories in a Danish Forum for several years.
This is my first attempt to share a story in English.
Read more here:

I would be happy if you would leave a comment and spread the news to those who might be interested

MaggieMarley · July 16

Thank you for tagging me! Loved your prologue

your 'stories in pictures' style is really refreshing and nice to read and you capture just the right moments with your screenshots. The title is intriguing, I can't wait to find out more and to see where a turtle comes into this!

I wonder where Finn's eye and hair colour came from... Could he be a mermaid maybe?

Oh no! Poor Finn and Naja

I'm glad their grandma is looking after them though

Skeilah · July 16

Thanks for tagging me

I'm so sorry for Finn and Naja. Losing your parents at such a young age... Finn looks like a strong boy, I can't wait to read more of him.

pammiechick · July 16

I adore Finn!

Can't wait for more!

Great job!

MonaSolstraale · July 16

Skeilah wrote: »

Thanks for tagging me
I'm so sorry for Finn and Naja. Losing your parents at such a young age... Finn looks like a strong boy, I can't wait to read more of him.

Thanks Skeilah

.... and I really enjoy following your story even though I have not yet posted a comment

MonaSolstraale · July 16

pammiechick wrote: »

I adore Finn!

Can't wait for more!

Great job!

Thanks for your support

TheYayToast · July 16

Thanks for tagging me! The story is so sad so far, but Finn is so cute! I'm excited to read more about him and his new life.

Karababy52 · July 16

Thanks for tagging me about your story prologue! Intriguing title, curious to find out how it connects to the story. I have a theory already, but I'll keep it to myself for now. Love how some screenshots have no text accompanying them, leaves the reader to use their imagination to interpret what's going on. You did a great job capturing the emotions in them. Looking forward to the first chapter!

#bookmarked

MonaSolstraale · July 16

@TheYayToast @Karababy52 Thanks for the comments

It is unfortunately a bit gloomy at first .... but everything has an end

Queenarella · July 17

Thanks for tagging

Your banner is sooooo pretty

What a tragic prologue!

It makes me want to read more

MonaSolstraale · July 17

Queenarella wrote: »

Thanks for tagging Your banner is sooooo pretty

What a tragic prologue! It makes me want to read more

Thank you

MonaSolstraale · July 17

I have now published the first chapter ...
It's a little short, but the next one is coming soon

ThePlumbob · July 17

Aww, poor Finn and Naja. Hopefully things pick up for them from here on!

MonaSolstraale · July 17

ThePlumbob wrote: »

Aww, poor Finn and Naja. Hopefully things pick up for them from here on!

Thank you for your comment

Everything has an end ... even the dark days

TheYayToast · July 17

About the new chapter:

Aaaah! How could you make it even more sad?! Poor Finn and Naja. They are both so cute as YA and Teen though.

I hope they both find happiness soon.

MonaSolstraale · July 17

@TheYayToast

soon?
.... it might be a little too much to hope for ... otherwise there is no story

But things look a little brighter in the next section, so hang on

MaggieMarley · July 17

Poor Finn and Naja losing first their parents, then grandma, then one another

at least they have each other again now though.

MonaSolstraale · July 17

@MaggieMarley

..... it gets better

MonaSolstraale · July 18

I sense that there is a need for me to bring a different mood into the story ..... therefore the 2nd chapter is published
Have a nice weekend

MaggieMarley · July 18

Awww I loved this chapter! It was very heartwarming

Grandma is such a sweet lady and they all look very happy here

MonaSolstraale · July 18

Thanks @MaggieMarley

Finn has deep wounds but he also keeps the memory of a caring grandmother in his heart

... the question is whether he has hidden it too far away

The next chapter may provide some answers

MonaSolstraale · July 20

The winter cold is still lurking around the corners. Naja is just about to tell Finn about school when there is a knock on the door...
Finn is a wounded child and this chapter will give us some more answers to what has happened in the past

MaggieMarley · July 20

Aww looks like Finn's experiences might have left him feeling a little antisocial. Or maybe he is just a natural loner? Either way, I don't blame him for not wanting to chat with the neighbours! I'm that way too.

Nice shot of the orphanage!

Aww no poor Finn getting bullied

have to admit I hate the sound of people chewing myself though lol.

Yay Vlad!

I see you also managed to get a like button for your posts

MonaSolstraale · July 20

MaggieMarley wrote: »

Aww looks like Finn's experiences might have left him feeling a little antisocial. Or maybe he is just a natural loner? Either way, I don't blame him for not wanting to chat with the neighbours! I'm that way too.

Nice shot of the orphanage!

Aww no poor Finn getting bullied have to admit I hate the sound of people chewing myself though lol.

Yay Vlad!

I see you also managed to get a like button for your posts

Yes I did

It would not have happened without my stubbornness

I knew you would be happy to see Vlad

I'm glad I did not know Vlad from your point of view when I wrote my story ... so I would have had scruples

Thank you for always being so kind to leave a comment

It means a lot to me here while my storytelling in English is so new

MonaSolstraale · July 21

While Naja is at school, Finn goes fishing..... this is how one should always live life. Sun and a fishing rod in hand

MaggieMarley · July 21

Aww no worries, I'm enjoying your story! I want to see what happens

Vlad makes his second appearance... I get the feeling he means no good

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