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Almost Eternal - Updated February 17th
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Story Blog | Forum Discussion
@ThePlumbob
Good to hear that you like layers. This thing is an onion inside an onion inside a baumkuchen.
Ha! Oh dear. I'd help you out but...
Less OT, I'm looking forward to the onion-fest for sure!
Story Blog | Forum Discussion
Just going to echo Plumbob. I really loved the writing here. Not that I didn't love the writing before. But the tension here is fantastic and compliments/intensifies April's fear. Imma revisit this chapter some time later just to live through it all again.
@mercuryfoam
Every chapter is a piece of the puzzle but this is a crucial one, so I'm glad my writing wasn't completely pants.
@DeafSimmer
Chapter 14 - Out Of Control
Some cool settings in this one too, the train looked very trainlike
Story Blog | Forum Discussion
I'm glad the train looked like a train. For reasons I'm still not sure of, I decided to challenge myself to not use any CC/poses/mods in this story so you can expect some pretty awful, bodged scenes in future chapters.
Exciting story with wonderful glimpses of humor. I look forward to catching up on what I have not yet achieved.
Something for the weekend.
Chapter 15 - Real Drinks
Sorry for all the mysterious responses to your posts. I try not to give spoilers but I also want to reply to everyone.
@MonaSolstraale
Hi, welcome! I'm really glad you decided to check it out and you're enjoying it. Let me know if something doesn't translate.
Story Blog | Forum Discussion
You get comfy. Excuse the mess, I didn't think I'd get guests. Don't open that drawer.
Thank you pointed out yourself in my Forum thread
It was your great banner that lured me
Chapter 16 - Vampiric Allure
I love any comment that starts with 'Oh dear'. Proper drops my heart in my stomach, that.