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  ThePlumbob Posts: 4,971 Member

  September 2015

  Great start, very intricate backstory you've given to your founder, and it looks like she's managed to do quite well for herself already. I love that you started with a sim that's on the curvier side, I don't think I've seen anyone do that!

  
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  JoieWilder Posts: 2,513 Member

  September 2015

  Like @ThePlumbob said, I don't think I've seen anyone start off with a curvy founder before. I love that Gemma has backstory. That always kind of bugs me with legacies; it's like founders just sprout fully-formed from the earth. I'm looking forward to the next chapter and also so happy I could inspire you! That's one of the best compliments a writer can get. Feel free to bounce some ideas off of me if you like.

  
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  IOIplaySims Posts: 135 Member

  September 2015

  I like you're legacy. It has a nice backstory

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  simlish1 Posts: 2,738 Member

  September 2015

  Thanks guys real nice feedback. I'll be posting the next few chapters tomorrow

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  Ruby10990 Posts: 491 Member

  September 2015

  Really liking it so far! Can't wait for the next chapter

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  simlish1 Posts: 2,738 Member

  September 2015

  Chapter two is up now

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  Julyvee94 Posts: 6,694 Member

  September 2015

  we have the same wordpress design! Yay! I love that design and the beginning of your legacy too

  
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  simlish1 Posts: 2,738 Member

  September 2015

  Thank you @Julyvee94

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  simlish1 Posts: 2,738 Member

  September 2015

  Here is Chapter Three

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  Ruby10990 Posts: 491 Member

  September 2015

  Yes Gemma! Accomplish your dreams!

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  simlish1 Posts: 2,738 Member

  September 2015

  Chapter Four is up now

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  simlish1 Posts: 2,738 Member

  September 2015

  Chapter Five is up now I'm getting a lot out today! Haha!

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  Ruby10990 Posts: 491 Member

  September 2015

  UMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM I...just...don't...know...anymore...

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  simlish1 Posts: 2,738 Member

  September 2015

  ?? what do you mean @Ruby10990

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  Julyvee94 Posts: 6,694 Member

  September 2015

  woah that escalated quickly xD

  
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  simlish1 Posts: 2,738 Member

  September 2015

  Haha, it did indeed!

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  simlish1 Posts: 2,738 Member

  September 2015

  Chapter 7 should be up at some point today

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  simlish1 Posts: 2,738 Member

  September 2015

  Chapter Seven
  
  FYI - Gemma was not meant to get pregnant, as this wasn't the way I wanted the story to pan out. But I accidentally clicked on try for a baby instead of woohoo. It was over all too quick to cancel the action. This is why it may seem that I've kind of rushed through Gemma's pregnancy. Apologies.

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  Julyvee94 Posts: 6,694 Member

  September 2015

  Ohh poor Gemma I wonder what happened to the alien? sometimes you just gotta go with what the game gives you

  
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  simlish1 Posts: 2,738 Member

  September 2015

  Chapter Eight is up now.
  
  I know, I was gutted about her falling pregnant in a way. But I do wonder how they will turn out.

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