The Circle is a
plot-driven SimLit drama following the lives of six young adults: Kiara, Jackson, Jasmine, Laurie, Brianna and James. The six young adults all become acquainted in San Myshuno City - a place where people come to chase their dreams, find love, make a fortune or in Kiara's case, to start over. Kiara moves in with two strangers she found on the internet, Jackson and Jasmine. Jackson is an extremely privileged drop-kick who is the son of a very powerful man. Jasmine is Jackson's flatmate and childhood friend. Brianna is a hot-shot lawyer working at the biggest firm in the city. Laurie is Brianna's boyfriend and the heir to a multi-million dollar real estate development business. James, a neurosurgeon-in-training, is Laurie's best friend. Over the course of their lives, this group of six sims will uncover a number of secrets, scandals and surprises as they learn what it really means to forgive, find true love, and to be a friend.
You can read the story
here. At the moment, I am trying to upload a new chapter every week.
Please feel free to drop me a line here or on the blog! I would love to hear your thoughts.
Happy simming!
Comments
I very much like your sims - a lot of work has gone into making them look the way they do and it shows.
On the negative, none of the characters are gripping. None of them appear truly interesting so far, at least for me. Also, the group Klara finds herself in are all "son/daughter of someone big and powerful". It certainly alienates her from them, but this tool is a little bit overused IMO.
Looking forward for more
Hey @ArcherDK, thank you for taking the time to read my story!
I will definitely try to focus on deeper character development - hopefully they will become a bit more three dimensional soon
Did I guess anything or am I completely wrong?
Regardless, there is definitely a lot of potential. My apologies if I offend or impose.
No offence taken at all, I am very open to receiving feedback and hearing people’s thoughts.
I will let you read on and see if you guessed correctly
Book O' Spells: The Life and Times of Lady Ravendancer Goth
The Shadow Over Newcrest - Revised Story Blog
You didn't have to wait long to find out - chapter 3 is already out
I kid of expected something like that to happen regarding the bedroom.
An interesting way to back out from compromising Klaras image.
As for everything else - after I've read the first two chapters, I noticed that the whole story so far can be described in one word. Third chapter fits this word perfectly.
Klara will fit in this group just fine...
Anyway - great chapter!
For the story:
Already she compromised her values by being swept up by Laurie's pretty face (here in the states, Laurie is a girl's name! Lol! So I had to get over that. )
And now she's giving him a proposition! I like how she's thinking. But will that be the answer to her job woes and poverty? Hmm...
Book O' Spells: The Life and Times of Lady Ravendancer Goth
The Shadow Over Newcrest - Revised Story Blog
Thanks for the shout out!
Kiara is seduced by the glamorous lifestyle and she's young and naive... We'll see if the job helps her or if it backfires in her face
Glad to hear you are enjoying it!
What word are you thinking of?!
So yeah...Rot. Second word would be "Glamour", but this one is obvious. Everything looks good, smells good, even tastes good, but in the end it's all Rot.
There. Again - this is not in any way an insult and there is no offense intended.
Hahaha it's okay, you don't have to keep saying that your comment is not intended to be an insult, it's all good.
You've made a very insightful observation, I can't wait to see what you think of the next chapter.
I'm looking forward to it. And to seeing how exactly Klara intends to
About Dano - that's bad luck right there. But at least Jasmine gets to reveal a little bit of rot in herself.
Keep up the good work!
Maybe Jackson will tell off Kiara’s ex!
I’m secretly shipping her and Jackson (and NOT Laurie! Hee!)
Now I can't help to think VERY low about Jasmine. Whatever strings she's pulled (or whomever she's buttered up, if you know what I mean), she got Dano fired. Now granted, breaking Kiara's hears was a low move, but taking away his way to make a living? I dunno. Seems a little bit TOO low. This actually resonates very well with the fact that Kiara had to use blackmail to get herself a job. It's all so...Rotten.
Michael. Honestly I like his attitude - he's spent his life building this company and now his son is mucking about like that. Of course he's angry. The problem is that he will probably take out his anger on Kiara, too.
It seems that Kiara is making a lot of enemies. Michael could just say so and Kiara loses her job and no one will believe her word - Michael will not allow one nobody's word to tarnishthe imae of his company and (I hope) Laurie is not dumb enough to admit his faults.. Kiara is a tine fish surrounded by sharks and orcas. And then there is Dano. Who know what connections HE has? Or what he can actually DO? He blames Kiara, remember.
Also - could Kiara just once IGNORE a handsome man in front of her? I mean, it's just not doing her any favors at this point.
An excellent chapter!
@pinot_grigio I loved that chapter. Laurie and Eric look a lot alike. Are they related?
Book O' Spells: The Life and Times of Lady Ravendancer Goth
The Shadow Over Newcrest - Revised Story Blog
Hmm.. is there a need to interrupt Laurie like that? Eric is interesting. I'm reserving judgement for now. But there's something going on. and quoting 15aewar above, they look really alike. You did mention it was a family business.
Laurie's dad seem to have a low opinion of him. Interesting, especially if Eric is his sibling. Laurie is in a very poor position then. To work for a boss that doesn't value you, let alone father! That's going to cause some very dire confidence problems.
Yes - Eric is Laurie's cousin. It was mentioned briefly in Chapter 3: "... my parents are going to give my spot at Kerr Industries to my cousin Eric".