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The Fairy Tale Reader - Stories from Grimm brothers, Hans Christian Andersen & Co

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    roseinblack69roseinblack69 Posts: 4,070 Member
    Awesome chapter! <3 I wish the storyteller would be happy and visible for others... This girl really deserves it :)
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    mastressalitamastressalita Posts: 2,874 Member
    @Marialein : This story has received a shoutout on the Monthly Shoutout thread and will be featured at the Stories and Legacies Index in the Monthly Shoutouts section during the month of January! Congrats!
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    LluviaRainLluviaRain Posts: 2,199 Member
    Please upload again. I love this story! <3
    Not sure what to put here... so hi
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    MarialeinMarialein Posts: 2,885 Member
    @cupcake12 thank you so much <3 It needs a lot of time to update but I have decided what fairytale I will take as the next one so look forward to...
    The little Mermaid
    From Hans Christian Anderson
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    LluviaRainLluviaRain Posts: 2,199 Member
    Yay! looking forward to seeing the characters :p
    Not sure what to put here... so hi
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    Hemera123Hemera123 Posts: 905 Member
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    mastressalitamastressalita Posts: 2,874 Member
    That is one of my favorite fairy tales! I'm a big fan of the Hans Christian Andersen stories! I also love "The Red Shoes" by Hans Christian Andersen! His fairy tales are often tragic but still strikingly beautiful.
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    MarialeinMarialein Posts: 2,885 Member
    @mastressalita I love them too but I just realized the the story is in word 9 sides long and when I copied the text as a try in the forum it said that there are 25000 characters too long so this storie will take some updates. By now I have made the mermaids and I am building their home. ;)
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    mastressalitamastressalita Posts: 2,874 Member
    edited January 2016
    I bet it will look awesome, I've really enjoyed the sets so far!
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    MarialeinMarialein Posts: 2,885 Member
    First thanks @mastressalita <3 I am proud about my first shot i took today. I just have to share it. I promise after that no spoilers until the story is ready, but this could take a while...

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    mastressalitamastressalita Posts: 2,874 Member
    Ooo, it's lovely! I can see why its so hard to not put teasers up for these builds!
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    LluviaRainLluviaRain Posts: 2,199 Member
    It's amazing @Marialein <3 love it!
    Not sure what to put here... so hi
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    MarialeinMarialein Posts: 2,885 Member
    edited January 2016
    4. Chapter- The little mermaid part 1

    I thought I could fly. In this moment I was dreaming I could fly over the water of the pool. But well in reality it didn't looked that good.

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    Today we were with our school class swimming and our teacher wanted us to try out the spring board. First I was able to hide.

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    But then it was my turn. I took some breaths and…

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    Failed. I was very ashamed and just wanted to hide because of the laughs of the others. I know they weren't meaning it always bad, but it was hard for me.

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    I woke up in the middle of the night.

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    I tried everything, but the sleep didn't want to come back. So I took out a fairy tale. The little mermaid. I normally didn't read this to the kids because there is no real happy end. Although it was a beautiful story. I opened the worn down book and started to read.

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    Far out in the ocean, where the water is as blue as the prettiest cornflower, and as clear as crystal, it is very, very deep; so deep, indeed, that no cable could fathom it: many church steeples, piled one upon another, would not reach from the ground beneath to the surface of the water above. There dwell the Sea King and his subjects. We must not imagine that there is nothing at the bottom of the sea but bare yellow sand. No, indeed; the most singular flowers and plants grow there; the leaves and stems of which are so pliant, that the slightest agitation of the water causes them to stir as if they had life. Fishes, both large and small, glide between the branches, as birds fly among the trees here upon land. In the deepest spot of all, stands the castle of the Sea King.
    Its walls are built of coral, and the long, gothic windows are of the clearest amber. The roof is formed of shells, that open and close as the water flows over them. Their appearance is very beautiful, for in each lies a glittering pearl, which would be fit for the diadem of a queen.
    The Sea King had been a widower for many years, and his aged mother kept house for him.

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    She was a very wise woman, and exceedingly proud of her high birth; on that account she wore twelve oysters on her tail; while others, also of high rank, were only allowed to wear six. She was, however, deserving of very great praise, especially for her care of the little sea-princesses, her grand-daughters.

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    They were six beautiful children; but the youngest was the prettiest of them all; her skin was as clear and delicate as a rose-leaf, and her eyes as blue as the deepest sea; but, like all the others, she had no feet, and her body ended in a fish’s tail.

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    All day long they played in the great halls of the castle, or among the living flowers that grew out of the walls. The large amber windows were open, and the fish swam in, just as the swallows fly into our houses when we open the windows, excepting that the fishes swam up to the princesses, ate out of their hands, and allowed themselves to be stroked. Outside the castle there was a beautiful garden, in which grew bright red and dark blue flowers, and blossoms like flames of fire; the fruit glittered like gold, and the leaves and stems waved to and fro continually. The earth itself was the finest sand, but blue as the flame of burning sulphur. Over everything lay a peculiar blue radiance, as if it were surrounded by the air from above, through which the blue sky shone, instead of the dark depths of the sea. In calm weather the sun could be seen, looking like a purple flower, with the light streaming from the calyx. Each of the young princesses had a little plot of ground in the garden, where she might dig and plant as she pleased. One arranged her flower-bed into the form of a whale; another thought it better to make hers like the figure of a little mermaid; but that of the youngest was round like the sun, and contained flowers as red as his rays at sunset. She was a strange child, quiet and thoughtful; and while her sisters would be delighted with the wonderful things which they obtained from the wrecks of vessels, she cared for nothing but her pretty red flowers, like the sun, excepting a beautiful marble statue. It was the representation of a handsome boy, carved out of pure white stone, which had fallen to the bottom of the sea from a wreck. She planted by the statue a rose-colored weeping willow. It grew splendidly, and very soon hung its fresh branches over the statue, almost down to the blue sands. The shadow had a violet tint, and waved to and fro like the branches; it seemed as if the crown of the tree and the root were at play, and trying to kiss each other. Nothing gave her so much pleasure as to hear about the world above the sea.

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    She made her old grandmother tell her all she knew of the ships and of the towns, the people and the animals. To her it seemed most wonderful and beautiful to hear that the flowers of the land should have fragrance, and not those below the sea; that the trees of the forest should be green; and that the fishes among the trees could sing so sweetly, that it was quite a pleasure to hear them. Her grandmother called the little birds fishes, or she would not have understood her; for she had never seen birds.
    “When you have reached your eighteenth year,” said the grand-mother, “you will have permission to rise up out of the sea, to sit on the rocks in the moonlight, while the great ships are sailing by; and then you will see both forests and towns.”

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    In the following year, one of the sisters would be eighteen: but as each was a year younger than the other, the youngest would have to wait five years before her turn came to rise up from the bottom of the ocean, and see the earth as we do. However, each promised to tell the others what she saw on her first visit, and what she thought the most beautiful; for their grandmother could not tell them enough; there were so many things on which they wanted information. None of them longed so much for her turn to come as the youngest, she who had the longest time to wait, and who was so quiet and thoughtful. Many nights she stood by the open window, looking up through the dark blue water, and watching the fish as they splashed about with their fins and tails. She could see the moon and stars shining faintly; but through the water they looked larger than they do to our eyes. When something like a black cloud passed between her and them, she knew that it was either a whale swimming over her head, or a ship full of human beings, who never imagined that a pretty little mermaid was standing beneath them, holding out her white hands towards the keel of their ship.

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    As soon as the eldest was eighteen, she was allowed to rise to the surface of the ocean. When she came back, she had hundreds of things to talk about; but the most beautiful, she said, was to lie in the moonlight, on a sandbank, in the quiet sea, near the coast, and to gaze on a large town nearby, where the lights were twinkling like hundreds of stars; to listen to the sounds of the music, the noise of carriages, and the voices of human beings, and then to hear the merry bells peal out from the church steeples; and because she could not go near to all those wonderful things, she longed for them more than ever.

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    Oh, did not the youngest sister listen eagerly to all these descriptions? and afterwards, when she stood at the open window looking up through the dark blue water, she thought of the great city, with all its bustle and noise, and even fancied she could hear the sound of the church bells, down in the depths of the sea.
    In another year the second sister received permission to rise to the surface of the water, and to swim about where she pleased. She rose just as the sun was setting, and this, she said, was the most beautiful sight of all. The whole sky looked like gold, while violet and rose-colored clouds, which she could not describe, floated over her; and, still more rapidly than the clouds, flew a large flock of wild swans towards the setting sun, looking like a long white veil across the sea. She also swam towards the sun; but it sunk into the waves, and the rosy tints faded from the clouds and from the sea.

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    The third sister’s turn followed; she was the boldest of them all, and she swam up a broad river that emptied itself into the sea. On the banks she saw green hills covered with beautiful vines; palaces and castles peeped out from amid the proud trees of the forest; she heard the birds singing, and the rays of the sun were so powerful that she was obliged often to dive down under the water to cool her burning face. In a narrow creek she found a whole troop of little human children, quite naked, and sporting about in the water; she wanted to play with them, but they fled in a great fright; and then a little black animal came to the water; it was a dog, but she did not know that, for she had never before seen one. This animal barked at her so terribly that she became frightened, and rushed back to the open sea. But she said she should never forget the beautiful forest, the green hills, and the pretty little children who could swim in the water, although they had not fish’s tails.

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    The fourth sister was more timid; she remained in the midst of the sea, but she said it was quite as beautiful there as nearer the land. She could see for so many miles around her, and the sky above looked like a bell of glass. She had seen the ships, but at such a great distance that they looked like sea-gulls. The dolphins sported in the waves, and the great whales spouted water from their nostrils till it seemed as if a hundred fountains were playing in every direction.

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    The fifth sister’s birthday occurred in the winter; so when her turn came, she saw what the others had not seen the first time they went up. The sea looked quite green, and large icebergs were floating about, each like a pearl, she said, but larger and loftier than the churches built by men. They were of the most singular shapes, and glittered like diamonds. She had seated herself upon one of the largest, and let the wind play with her long hair, and she remarked that all the ships sailed by rapidly, and steered as far away as they could from the iceberg, as if they were afraid of it. Towards evening, as the sun went down, dark clouds covered the sky, the thunder rolled and the lightning flashed, and the red light glowed on the icebergs as they rocked and tossed on the heaving sea. On all the ships the sails were reefed with fear and trembling, while she sat calmly on the floating iceberg, watching the blue lightning, as it darted its forked flashes into the sea.

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    LluviaRainLluviaRain Posts: 2,199 Member
    plz release part 2 (I am the very impatient sort)
    Not sure what to put here... so hi
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    MarialeinMarialein Posts: 2,885 Member
    edited January 2016
    @cupcake12 well first I will update my other stories and then I have to prepare a lot for the next part and as far as I can say there will be more than one ;) of course I am happy you enjoy it so far <3
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    MarialeinMarialein Posts: 2,885 Member
    edited January 2016
    By the way if you want to take some mermaid pictures I got the dress from the sims resource but don't play with it. It has some really annoying bugs :/ I am already glad when I can put it out of my mod folder but as long as we don't have more supernaturals I take what I get ;)
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    LluviaRainLluviaRain Posts: 2,199 Member
    I may want the dress but not sure about the bugs :( My cc is really badly playing up :'(
    Not sure what to put here... so hi
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    roseinblack69roseinblack69 Posts: 4,070 Member
    Waiting for the second part of your story... You did amazing work writing it @Marialein <3
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    Hemera123Hemera123 Posts: 905 Member
    I loved this chapter. <3 Waiting for the next one. How you managed to make it look like they are underwater? So beautiful pictures!
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    MarialeinMarialein Posts: 2,885 Member
    edited January 2016
    @roseinblack69 @Hemera123 thank you both very much <3

    To the part of the pictures. Photoshop. Loads of Photoshop. You put a layer of underwater graphic over it. Underneath you draw with a bubble pencil some bubbles. You can download them. Then I took the bb.showhiddenobjects cheat and placed some laying fishes on the ground. I cut them out and placed them also under the water graphic and Taadaaaa!It looked like underwater. In addition is their house surrounded by a pool. Now you know why it takes that long to make those chapters ;)
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    Hemera123Hemera123 Posts: 905 Member
    @Marialein Sounds like a lot of work! You did great job. :) I understand that we have to wait the next update. It will be worth the wait.
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    PlayerRac2PlayerRac2 Posts: 479 Member
    I just spent the last hour or so reading all of your beautiful stories and I'm enchanted with every single word, you put so much into ever piece of text, every set and every character! Can't wait for more!
    I have a Sim Themed YouTube Channel: Take a look! https://youtube.com/channel/UCSLz5W7RU78SStcrnSkLbsg

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    MarialeinMarialein Posts: 2,885 Member
    @PlayerRac2 Thank you very much <3
    Did you really read all my stories :open_mouth:
    In this story I only write the parts of Sera and the orphanage. I just rewrite the fairytales if there is something I can't do with the sims ;)
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    mastressalitamastressalita Posts: 2,874 Member
    Wow, the scenery was really amazing in this one! The underwater scenes were great, as were the ones with the beached mermaids, where you could just see little towns off in the distance, and the water fountain image was also quite gorgeous! I just love seeing these fairy tales re-imagined as if you have a book of fairy tales and when you flip the pages all the illustrations happen to be drawn using The Sims as its medium.

    As I said before, The Little Mermaid by Hans Christian Anderson is one of my favorite fairy tales ever so I was really looking forward to it. I know a lot of people don't like fairy tales with sad endings, but I've always kind of been attracted to those ones for some reason... another of my favorites has always been Swan Lake, another with a sad ending (if you ever get to see the original ending, most ballet troupes these days do a re-written, false "happy" ending ala the Disney style of making sure all fairy tales remove their grimness and always have happy endings). I find something oddly beautiful and poetic in that tragedy... kind of like the ending of Romeo and Juliet.
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