Hi there, everyone!
I warmly welcome you to
Whispers in the Wind, my first ever rainbowcy/legacy!
The final chapter is
8.20.
For any other chapters, please see the
Table of Contents over on the blog
I love writing this, and would very much appreciate any feedback you feel like giving me. Your comments mean a great deal to us writers, but where you comment is entirely up to you
~MischiefTheKitten
Comments
http://mischiefthekitten.blogspot.com/2011/12/generation-one-chapter-three.html
Thanks for the offer, feedback is always welcome
And yeah, she's having quite a frustrating start (with Kobi anyway), but you know how it is - things have to get worse before they can improve again..
I think the only major thing I saw was the lack of paragraph breaks, but that's really not that important. A few typos here, a missing punctuation there, and I think I saw one tense confusion, but otherwise, it's really good. You've also got a good storyline going. I remember thinking "Oh, I know what's gonna happen, and it's gonna be good," which is something I don't think often.
^^ I do believe you've earned another faithful follower.
http://mischiefthekitten.blogspot.com/2011/12/generation-one-chapter-four.html
Thank you! I have written before, a whole book in fact, but nothing I ever published, or anything serious I used to write a lot in theSims2, but of course back in the good ol' days you could write these things in game..
Again, thanks for the feedback
http://mischiefthekitten.blogspot.com/2011/12/generation-one-chapter-five.html
This is the last chapter before christmas, and possibly also before the new year, but after that there'll be a lot of catching up to do with Whisper
Merry Christmas, everyone!
MischiefTheKitten
Chapter six is out now, hope you'll like it :-o
http://mischiefthekitten.blogspot.com/2012/01/generation-one-chapter-six.html
MischiefTheKitten
http://mischiefthekitten.blogspot.com/2012/01/generation-one-chapter-seven.html
Feedback would be appreciated as always, of course
MischiefTheKitten
http://mischiefthekitten.blogspot.com/2012/01/generation-one-chapter-eight.html
Keep coming with that feedback, I love hearing your opinions
MischiefTheKitten
Chapter Nine is out!
Danevbie Legacy 8.24
Danevbie Legacy 8.24
Thank you for reading it, I really appreciate all the feedback
Since I'm back at uni from Monday on, I don't know how often I will be able to update... I will update at least once a week though, more often if I can
Thanks again for all the feedback I have received already, I really appreciate it :!:
MischiefTheKitten
http://mischiefthekitten.blogspot.com/2012/01/generation-one-chapter-ten.html
Chapter 11 should also be up soon
http://mischiefthekitten.blogspot.com/2012/01/generation-one-chapter-eleven.html
NO!!!! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT'S GOING ON!!!!!!!
Terrific chapters, I commented on both of them. Illusion is so cute x3
But oh my gosh... o-o I can't wait for the next chapter!
Danevbie Legacy 8.24
I saw your comments, thank you
Things are definitely a little mixed up for Whisper, but I suppose she's got new hope for a baby girl again now
I'm hoping to put the next chapter out beginning to middle of next week, but where I'm about to go back to uni tomorrow I don't know how tired I'll be when I get back home. Next week should still be fairly loose though as I'm between assignements right now
Chapter 12 is being worked on and will be up by the end of tomorrow
Also, I'm planning on doing a little special, so two updates should be up very soon
MischiefTheKitten