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~~Whispers in the Wind~~ - The FINAL CHAPTER is out now! (p.44)

MischiefTheKittenMischiefTheKitten Posts: 3,635 Member
Hi there, everyone!

I warmly welcome you to Whispers in the Wind, my first ever rainbowcy/legacy! :)

The final chapter is 8.20.
For any other chapters, please see the Table of Contents over on the blog :)

I love writing this, and would very much appreciate any feedback you feel like giving me. Your comments mean a great deal to us writers, but where you comment is entirely up to you :)

~MischiefTheKitten

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    cumonlespartycumonlesparty Posts: 9,794
    edited December 2011
    Sorry, you cant...But yay i love your rainbowcy!
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    MischiefTheKittenMischiefTheKitten Posts: 3,635 Member
    edited December 2011
    thank you so much, I'm glad you're liking it :) I'll try my best to update it at least once a week, even when I'm back at uni next month.. at leas for now it should be possible ^^

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    MischiefTheKittenMischiefTheKitten Posts: 3,635 Member
    edited December 2011
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    MischiefTheKittenMischiefTheKitten Posts: 3,635 Member
    edited December 2011
    bump :)

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    cumonlespartycumonlesparty Posts: 9,794
    edited December 2011
    About to read it xx If you'd like any feed back with story lines, cc , ect. feel free to ask me! btw about to send you a friend request xx
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    cumonlespartycumonlesparty Posts: 9,794
    edited December 2011
    Awesome! Aw, i feel sorry for whisper but i bet something happens between them...
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    MischiefTheKittenMischiefTheKitten Posts: 3,635 Member
    edited December 2011
    Awesome! Aw, i feel sorry for whisper but i bet something happens between them...

    Thanks for the offer, feedback is always welcome :)
    And yeah, she's having quite a frustrating start (with Kobi anyway), but you know how it is - things have to get worse before they can improve again..

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    CelenessCeleness Posts: 381
    edited December 2011
    If this is your first story, I can tell you now that you have a lot of potential to be a great writer! ^^

    I think the only major thing I saw was the lack of paragraph breaks, but that's really not that important. A few typos here, a missing punctuation there, and I think I saw one tense confusion, but otherwise, it's really good. You've also got a good storyline going. I remember thinking "Oh, I know what's gonna happen, and it's gonna be good," which is something I don't think often.

    ^^ I do believe you've earned another faithful follower.
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    MischiefTheKittenMischiefTheKitten Posts: 3,635 Member
    edited December 2011
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    MischiefTheKittenMischiefTheKitten Posts: 3,635 Member
    edited December 2011
    Celeness wrote:
    If this is your first story, I can tell you now that you have a lot of potential to be a great writer! ^^

    I think the only major thing I saw was the lack of paragraph breaks, but that's really not that important. A few typos here, a missing punctuation there, and I think I saw one tense confusion, but otherwise, it's really good. You've also got a good storyline going. I remember thinking "Oh, I know what's gonna happen, and it's gonna be good," which is something I don't think often.

    ^^ I do believe you've earned another faithful follower.

    Thank you! :) I have written before, a whole book in fact, but nothing I ever published, or anything serious :) I used to write a lot in theSims2, but of course back in the good ol' days you could write these things in game..

    Again, thanks for the feedback :)

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    MischiefTheKittenMischiefTheKitten Posts: 3,635 Member
    edited December 2011
    Woo, chapter five is out now!

    http://mischiefthekitten.blogspot.com/2011/12/generation-one-chapter-five.html

    This is the last chapter before christmas, and possibly also before the new year, but after that there'll be a lot of catching up to do with Whisper :)


    Merry Christmas, everyone!

    MischiefTheKitten

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    MischiefTheKittenMischiefTheKitten Posts: 3,635 Member
    edited January 2012
    Happy New Year, everyone!!! Make this year a special one :) Or if it can't be special, at least make it great ;)

    Chapter six is out now, hope you'll like it :-o

    http://mischiefthekitten.blogspot.com/2012/01/generation-one-chapter-six.html

    MischiefTheKitten

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    MischiefTheKittenMischiefTheKitten Posts: 3,635 Member
    edited January 2012
    And chapter Seven is now out :)

    http://mischiefthekitten.blogspot.com/2012/01/generation-one-chapter-seven.html

    Feedback would be appreciated as always, of course :)

    MischiefTheKitten

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    MischiefTheKittenMischiefTheKitten Posts: 3,635 Member
    edited January 2012
    Chapter Eight is out now! :)

    http://mischiefthekitten.blogspot.com/2012/01/generation-one-chapter-eight.html

    Keep coming with that feedback, I love hearing your opinions :)

    MischiefTheKitten

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    MischiefTheKittenMischiefTheKitten Posts: 3,635 Member
    edited January 2012
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    serindeppityserindeppity Posts: 6,690 Member
    edited January 2012
    Hey!! I saw you commenting around and have been meaning to check on your story. :3 I love the title, and gonna start reading now ^_^
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    serindeppityserindeppity Posts: 6,690 Member
    edited January 2012
    Read through it all, I'm loving it. :)
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    MischiefTheKittenMischiefTheKitten Posts: 3,635 Member
    edited January 2012
    Oh, thank you!!! I saw all your comments on my phone, I'll reply to them all once I've left you some more :)

    Thank you for reading it, I really appreciate all the feedback :)

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    MischiefTheKittenMischiefTheKitten Posts: 3,635 Member
    edited January 2012
    The photos for the next two chapters are taken! Chapters ten and eleven will be out some time tomorrow morning :)

    Since I'm back at uni from Monday on, I don't know how often I will be able to update... I will update at least once a week though, more often if I can :)

    Thanks again for all the feedback I have received already, I really appreciate it :!:

    MischiefTheKitten

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    MischiefTheKittenMischiefTheKitten Posts: 3,635 Member
    edited January 2012
    Chapter 10 is out now :)

    http://mischiefthekitten.blogspot.com/2012/01/generation-one-chapter-ten.html
    Chapter 11 should also be up soon :)

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    MischiefTheKittenMischiefTheKitten Posts: 3,635 Member
    edited January 2012
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    serindeppityserindeppity Posts: 6,690 Member
    edited January 2012
    !!!!!!!!!!
    NO!!!! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT'S GOING ON!!!!!!!
    Terrific chapters, I commented on both of them. Illusion is so cute x3
    But oh my gosh... o-o I can't wait for the next chapter!
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    MischiefTheKittenMischiefTheKitten Posts: 3,635 Member
    edited January 2012
    !!!!!!!!!!
    NO!!!! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT'S GOING ON!!!!!!!
    Terrific chapters, I commented on both of them. Illusion is so cute x3
    But oh my gosh... o-o I can't wait for the next chapter!

    I saw your comments, thank you :)
    Things are definitely a little mixed up for Whisper, but I suppose she's got new hope for a baby girl again now :)

    I'm hoping to put the next chapter out beginning to middle of next week, but where I'm about to go back to uni tomorrow I don't know how tired I'll be when I get back home. Next week should still be fairly loose though as I'm between assignements right now :)

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    MischiefTheKittenMischiefTheKitten Posts: 3,635 Member
    edited January 2012
    Woo, handed in my uni project today!!

    Chapter 12 is being worked on and will be up by the end of tomorrow :D

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    MischiefTheKittenMischiefTheKitten Posts: 3,635 Member
    edited January 2012
    I have finally taken the photos for the next chapter :)

    Also, I'm planning on doing a little special, so two updates should be up very soon :)

    MischiefTheKitten

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