@fabtiffsim wow it looks amazing I love how it looks like a mountain retreat or forest retreat
As for the feedback I normally do feedback from looking in game as pics dont really show up close or allow things to be tested so in future id say if you want feedback make sure to not use cc and to include gallery links so I can check out in game. But I am more than happy to see your cc version and for you to share them like you did looks amazing
Thanks! I'm happy to just have people see it, #picsoritdidn'thappen haha
@Pebblycat Yes, sometimes it's tricky... There is one spot which must stay free for sims to go to bed... I think it depends on the bed type where this spot is programmed... Normally it is enough to leave place in the middle of the bed at least from one side of it, but sometimes it is also a problem when you place items under the head part.... I'm happy that it worked for you want to see some pics
@lisi_ja I agree It's a bit tricky it takes me a few goes at it once you know where to put things so its free for the sims to go to bed and not big bulky things just need to keep on trying until you get it right I guess this is a very good to practice on and I have two sims on the bed how is that I got it I forgot how many times I tried this one.
Your bunk bed bedroom looks very nice! @chips46 The dinosaur theme of the room looks very great! The dinosaur toys, flor rug, wall pattern, wall pictures and wall prints complement together so very well! The heart teddy and panda lamp are cute on the upper bunk bed level.
It is good to know that you are more relaxed @Cbear13 I did not ask for feedback at step 3 because then you have little time. As this house is not big and you can check all in this last step. Thanks
So sorry for the delay, real life likes to get in the way hehe.
Ok firstly I love what you did with the top roof using the dividers around the edge which also gave the look of the arch windows very creative
I did notice the roofing on the 2nd floor looked a bit odd sticking into the structure of the house but its easily fixed
In the first pic when you select the roof piece the white arrows that appear extend and shorten the length of the roof over hang
If you only want to shorten one side hold down the shift button while dragging that sides arrow and it will shorten it
In the 2nd pic you will see it looks a bit cleaner stopping at the start of the wall
Also the lei up wall flowers you see on the front above the roof looks a bit strange sticking out of the roof and there is not enough room there to have them look like they arent so many a different decoration would of been a better choice, though I do like that decoration was added as it breaks up the grey of the color on the exterior
Nice use of different windows, since all your exterior is the one color I probably would of gone a bit more crazy with the decorations or flower boxes to break it up more especially on the right side of the house that looks a bit plain.
Seeing as you used this planter box at the front its nice to keep that decoration going, also added another window to fill the blank space on the right
When using alot of the same color on exterior it really does need breaking up with another color whether you use a different color 2nd type of wall covering or different color decoration
I also added more lights because it is quite dark at night in alot of spots and lights are great for decoration to.
You covered the house patio with roofing which we wanted lattice roofing but you did some lattice roofing in the back yard which looks great, I love the creative design.
Lastly and I find this issue a lot in entries for the comps, be careful when placing plant pots that they are not sticking into walls as you can see in the pic the House rubber starter kit plant is sticking into the half wall.
Hold the alt button down while placing and move it away enough that its not sticking into anything.
Great job though especially with the roof patio cant wait to see this finished.
Wow I love it the chess board theme looks amazing
Even though there isnt really much landscaping I think what you did with the flooring and chess pieces suits this perfectly. Also the touches of green and decorations look great.
I also love the black rock fountains they look amazing.
The interior looks amazing and well done working with those shapes I know how difficult they are to decorate but you did an amazing job.
Great decoration the style looks beautiful and so well suited to this whole build.
Great creativity with mixing items to decorate and create something new
My favourite room has to be the master bedroom with the fishtank and decorations, only thing i would mention here is remember they cant watch tv from the bed so maybe putting an ottoman at the end of the bed so sims can sit and watch would be better. (I wish they would fix that in a patch that they could watch tv while sitting on the bed).
There is no critique feedback needed I couldn't find anything wrong
@VioletRed and @Soraya4sims I havent written up a feedback on your shells because they both look wonderful and you both did a great job using different shapes
I will give proper feedback if you two decide to do the other parts of the challenge
I think I am all up to date with everyones feedback, though if I have missed anyones please slap me and point me to the post and I will get it done asap
Your challenge build looks so very nice! @emere Very nice exterior of the home! The outdoors areas look very great! The chequered outdoors flooring and chess theme of the build looks very nice! The chess pieces look great on the chess board and on the roof ! The twisted sculptures look nice in the build. It is great that that there are chess tables near the chess board! The glass windows bamboo features look very nice! The pool area is very nice! The water fountain feature there looks very nice! Very nice rock waterfalls in the build!
The build is very nice!
I hated roofing, I was so bad and I could never get it to look good.
I forced myself to practice and do it over and over and I know I have improved a lot.
I havent added any decoration on mine as I was trying to concentrate on using plenty of pieces to make it creative and different.
The outdoors areas of UFO Pod House looks so very, very great! @chips46 The layout looks so very nice! It looks very nice how you have used the terrain paint! The flowers , plants and trees through the outdoors areas look so very, very nice and pretty! The rows of diamond water fountain features looks so very nice! The area with the water fountain, fish fountain , flowers and water windows looks very nice! The pillar with the floral greenery, bamboo and sun decor on it looks great! Nice gardening nook for sims to enjoy growing harvestable plants. The flower cart is a nice touch there. The alien plants through the outdoors gives a great look to the build and goes well with the exterior design of the home! The corner floral and plants nooks look very nice.
It is a very nice home!
Origin ID: Xieria
Challenge/Part no: 5/1
Lot name that you built on: QC Prac Ch5-Roofs
Would you like feedback (must supply gallery link if yes): Yes
Gallery Link: Xieria Gallery Link
Here's my attempt at roofs, I used your advise @Cbear13 and used pieces. That really helped
Origin ID: lisi_ja
Challenge/Part no: 5
Lot name that you built on: Asphalt Abodes
Would you like feedback (must supply gallery link if yes): yes, please
Gallery Link: Roof Experiments
Pictures:
I tried to push myself very hard with this... Usually I build flat roofs I hope it was allowed to build this second floor
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Thanks! I'm happy to just have people see it, #picsoritdidn'thappen haha
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Challenge/Part no: 4/4
Lot name that you built on: Sandtrap Flat (Oasis)
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So sorry for the delay, real life likes to get in the way hehe.
Ok firstly I love what you did with the top roof using the dividers around the edge which also gave the look of the arch windows very creative
I did notice the roofing on the 2nd floor looked a bit odd sticking into the structure of the house but its easily fixed
In the first pic when you select the roof piece the white arrows that appear extend and shorten the length of the roof over hang
If you only want to shorten one side hold down the shift button while dragging that sides arrow and it will shorten it
In the 2nd pic you will see it looks a bit cleaner stopping at the start of the wall
Also the lei up wall flowers you see on the front above the roof looks a bit strange sticking out of the roof and there is not enough room there to have them look like they arent so many a different decoration would of been a better choice, though I do like that decoration was added as it breaks up the grey of the color on the exterior
Nice use of different windows, since all your exterior is the one color I probably would of gone a bit more crazy with the decorations or flower boxes to break it up more especially on the right side of the house that looks a bit plain.
Seeing as you used this planter box at the front its nice to keep that decoration going, also added another window to fill the blank space on the right
When using alot of the same color on exterior it really does need breaking up with another color whether you use a different color 2nd type of wall covering or different color decoration
I also added more lights because it is quite dark at night in alot of spots and lights are great for decoration to.
You covered the house patio with roofing which we wanted lattice roofing but you did some lattice roofing in the back yard which looks great, I love the creative design.
Lastly and I find this issue a lot in entries for the comps, be careful when placing plant pots that they are not sticking into walls as you can see in the pic the House rubber starter kit plant is sticking into the half wall.
Hold the alt button down while placing and move it away enough that its not sticking into anything.
Great job though especially with the roof patio cant wait to see this finished.
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Checkmate!
Wow I love it the chess board theme looks amazing
Even though there isnt really much landscaping I think what you did with the flooring and chess pieces suits this perfectly. Also the touches of green and decorations look great.
I also love the black rock fountains they look amazing.
The interior looks amazing and well done working with those shapes I know how difficult they are to decorate but you did an amazing job.
Great decoration the style looks beautiful and so well suited to this whole build.
Great creativity with mixing items to decorate and create something new
My favourite room has to be the master bedroom with the fishtank and decorations, only thing i would mention here is remember they cant watch tv from the bed so maybe putting an ottoman at the end of the bed so sims can sit and watch would be better. (I wish they would fix that in a patch that they could watch tv while sitting on the bed).
There is no critique feedback needed I couldn't find anything wrong
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I will give proper feedback if you two decide to do the other parts of the challenge
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The build is very nice!
http://forums.thesims.com/en_US/discussion/817478/hello-come-and-introduce-yourself
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Challenge 5 is now posted on page 1, a smaller challenge for us to challenge ourselves on.
You may continue and finish any of the other challenges at any time, they can all be found HERE.
Challenge 5 found here
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Challenge/Part no: Ch 5
I hated roofing, I was so bad and I could never get it to look good.
I forced myself to practice and do it over and over and I know I have improved a lot.
I havent added any decoration on mine as I was trying to concentrate on using plenty of pieces to make it creative and different.
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http://forums.thesims.com/en_US/discussion/817478/hello-come-and-introduce-yourself
http://tinyurl.com/OneRoomOneWeek
http://tinyurl.com/rosemow
My Showcase thread https://forums.thesims.com/en_US/discussion/948861/rosemow-s-rooms-showcase
Origin ID: chips46
Challenge/Part no: 4/ 4
Lot name that you built on:: Fern Park, Newcrest
Would you like feedback: yes please
Gallery Link:https://www.thesims.com/en_AU/gallery/985D69BF5AD611E68E2E30605109FFB7?category=lots&searchtype=item_name&sortby=newest&time=all&searchquery=house&max=50&maxis=false
It is a very nice home!
http://forums.thesims.com/en_US/discussion/817478/hello-come-and-introduce-yourself
http://tinyurl.com/OneRoomOneWeek
http://tinyurl.com/rosemow
My Showcase thread https://forums.thesims.com/en_US/discussion/948861/rosemow-s-rooms-showcase
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http://forums.thesims.com/en_US/discussion/817478/hello-come-and-introduce-yourself
http://tinyurl.com/OneRoomOneWeek
http://tinyurl.com/rosemow
My Showcase thread https://forums.thesims.com/en_US/discussion/948861/rosemow-s-rooms-showcase
Challenge/Part no: 5/1
Lot name that you built on: QC Prac Ch5-Roofs
Would you like feedback (must supply gallery link if yes): Yes
Gallery Link: Xieria Gallery Link
Here's my attempt at roofs, I used your advise @Cbear13 and used pieces. That really helped
http://forums.thesims.com/en_US/discussion/817478/hello-come-and-introduce-yourself
http://tinyurl.com/OneRoomOneWeek
http://tinyurl.com/rosemow
My Showcase thread https://forums.thesims.com/en_US/discussion/948861/rosemow-s-rooms-showcase
Challenge/Part no: 5
Lot name that you built on: Asphalt Abodes
Would you like feedback (must supply gallery link if yes): yes, please
Gallery Link: Roof Experiments
Pictures:
I tried to push myself very hard with this... Usually I build flat roofs I hope it was allowed to build this second floor
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