Hey guys, how weird is the sentence "a picturesque scene of the snowfall"
i'm trying to use Big Words (TM) in my writing but i feel like it sounds off
Can you provide the whole sentence?
"It had started as a simple day. The town was a picturesque scene from the snowfall, and was illuminated from the moonlight above."
Just a short opening to the chapter. I don't have enough skill to make it longer
Well, I would say the second sentence is a run-on sentence. There's a few ways to reframe it, but my inclination would be to stick with just one of the descriptors - either snowfall or moonlight.
I never thought of the run-on sentence thing. That's probably been an issue i've never noticed.
I tried to rewrite it in a way that included both.
Magnolia Promenade was painted by the heavy snowfall and faintly illuminated by the moonlight.
Does this sound any better?
Personally, I didn't find it to be a run-on sentence. A true run-on sentence is going to be quite a bit longer than that. Either that or my entire Simlit is filled with run-on sentences.
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Hey guys, how weird is the sentence "a picturesque scene of the snowfall"
i'm trying to use Big Words (TM) in my writing but i feel like it sounds off
Can you provide the whole sentence?
"It had started as a simple day. The town was a picturesque scene from the snowfall, and was illuminated from the moonlight above."
Just a short opening to the chapter. I don't have enough skill to make it longer
Well, I would say the second sentence is a run-on sentence. There's a few ways to reframe it, but my inclination would be to stick with just one of the descriptors - either snowfall or moonlight.
I never thought of the run-on sentence thing. That's probably been an issue i've never noticed.
I tried to rewrite it in a way that included both.
Magnolia Promenade was painted by the heavy snowfall and faintly illuminated by the moonlight.
Does this sound any better?
Personally, I didn't find it to be a run-on sentence. A true run-on sentence is going to be quite a bit longer than that. Either that or my entire Simlit is filled with run-on sentences.
No, i'm the one with all the run-on sentences
I've never noticed a run-on sentence in your Simlit. I may not understand what one is, but i can ensure it. XD
Hey guys, how weird is the sentence "a picturesque scene of the snowfall"
i'm trying to use Big Words (TM) in my writing but i feel like it sounds off
Can you provide the whole sentence?
"It had started as a simple day. The town was a picturesque scene from the snowfall, and was illuminated from the moonlight above."
Just a short opening to the chapter. I don't have enough skill to make it longer
Well, I would say the second sentence is a run-on sentence. There's a few ways to reframe it, but my inclination would be to stick with just one of the descriptors - either snowfall or moonlight.
I never thought of the run-on sentence thing. That's probably been an issue i've never noticed.
I tried to rewrite it in a way that included both.
Magnolia Promenade was painted by the heavy snowfall and faintly illuminated by the moonlight.
Does this sound any better?
Personally, I didn't find it to be a run-on sentence. A true run-on sentence is going to be quite a bit longer than that. Either that or my entire Simlit is filled with run-on sentences.
No, i'm the one with all the run-on sentences
I've never noticed a run-on sentence in your Simlit. I may not understand what one is, but i can ensure it. XD
Basically an excessively, unnecessarily long sentence that, in theory, could be shortened or simplified and possibly even broken into several sentences, or even an entire paragraph in some instances, and this is an absolutely wonderful of example of a sentence that is, indeed, a run-on sentence.
^^^ My proof your sentence was not run-on. There is not a single period anywhere in there. Good lord.
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Hey guys, how weird is the sentence "a picturesque scene of the snowfall"
i'm trying to use Big Words (TM) in my writing but i feel like it sounds off
Can you provide the whole sentence?
"It had started as a simple day. The town was a picturesque scene from the snowfall, and was illuminated from the moonlight above."
Just a short opening to the chapter. I don't have enough skill to make it longer
Well, I would say the second sentence is a run-on sentence. There's a few ways to reframe it, but my inclination would be to stick with just one of the descriptors - either snowfall or moonlight.
I never thought of the run-on sentence thing. That's probably been an issue i've never noticed.
I tried to rewrite it in a way that included both.
Magnolia Promenade was painted by the heavy snowfall and faintly illuminated by the moonlight.
Does this sound any better?
Personally, I didn't find it to be a run-on sentence. A true run-on sentence is going to be quite a bit longer than that. Either that or my entire Simlit is filled with run-on sentences.
Yeah, I don't know what run on sentences are anyways. LOL. I think run on sentences are kinda like how I always talk here like this where I never stop, cuz that's who I am. 😂 Or when I saw stuff like, "I like these shoes as they're black in color cuz black is the best color."
Hey guys, how weird is the sentence "a picturesque scene of the snowfall"
i'm trying to use Big Words (TM) in my writing but i feel like it sounds off
Can you provide the whole sentence?
"It had started as a simple day. The town was a picturesque scene from the snowfall, and was illuminated from the moonlight above."
Just a short opening to the chapter. I don't have enough skill to make it longer
Well, I would say the second sentence is a run-on sentence. There's a few ways to reframe it, but my inclination would be to stick with just one of the descriptors - either snowfall or moonlight.
I never thought of the run-on sentence thing. That's probably been an issue i've never noticed.
I tried to rewrite it in a way that included both.
Magnolia Promenade was painted by the heavy snowfall and faintly illuminated by the moonlight.
Does this sound any better?
Personally, I didn't find it to be a run-on sentence. A true run-on sentence is going to be quite a bit longer than that. Either that or my entire Simlit is filled with run-on sentences.
No, i'm the one with all the run-on sentences
I've never noticed a run-on sentence in your Simlit. I may not understand what one is, but i can ensure it. XD
Basically an excessively, unnecessarily long sentence that, in theory, could be shortened or simplified and possibly even broken into several sentences, or even an entire paragraph in some instances, and this is an absolutely wonderful of example of a sentence that is, indeed, a run-on sentence.
^^^ My proof your sentence was not run-on. There is not a single period anywhere in there. Good lord.
Hey @DeKay what program do you use for drawing again? I'm still using Paint Tool SAI but I might try some others. I haven't drawn in forever but I'm taking a game design class and we have to draw our own characters so I gotta get back into drawing again
Hey DeKay what program do you use for drawing again? I'm still using Paint Tool SAI but I might try some others. I haven't drawn in forever but I'm taking a game design class and we have to draw our own characters so I gotta get back into drawing again
I'm not DeKay but if you want a recommendation, medibang is great! My friend makes whole drawings with her fingers in there
Hey DeKay what program do you use for drawing again? I'm still using Paint Tool SAI but I might try some others. I haven't drawn in forever but I'm taking a game design class and we have to draw our own characters so I gotta get back into drawing again
Paintstorm Studio. It's about $20 and it's the best thing ever. I highly recommend it to everyone who does digital art. You can make so many different brushes with the default set and you can also import ABR.
They have a free trial so you can try that even tho the free trial pop up can be a bit annoying sometimes and a bit buggy. XD
Hey DeKay what program do you use for drawing again? I'm still using Paint Tool SAI but I might try some others. I haven't drawn in forever but I'm taking a game design class and we have to draw our own characters so I gotta get back into drawing again
Paintstorm Studio. It's about $20 and it's the best thing ever. I highly recommend it to everyone who does digital art. You can make so many different brushes with the default set and you can also import ABR.
They have a free trial so you can try that even tho the free trial pop up can be a bit annoying sometimes and a bit buggy. XD
Hey DeKay what program do you use for drawing again? I'm still using Paint Tool SAI but I might try some others. I haven't drawn in forever but I'm taking a game design class and we have to draw our own characters so I gotta get back into drawing again
I'm not DeKay but if you want a recommendation, medibang is great! My friend makes whole drawings with her fingers in there
Paintstorm Studio. It's about $20 and it's the best thing ever. I highly recommend it to everyone who does digital art. You can make so many different brushes with the default set and you can also import ABR.
They have a free trial so you can try that even tho the free trial pop up can be a bit annoying sometimes and a bit buggy. XD
I downloaded both. Loving the interface on both programs, and I love how I can draw on my tablet with Medibang. I'm gonna download it there too, and see how both compare to SAI, which I feel is getting a bit outdated so I wanted to try other programs. Thanks!
Hey DeKay what program do you use for drawing again? I'm still using Paint Tool SAI but I might try some others. I haven't drawn in forever but I'm taking a game design class and we have to draw our own characters so I gotta get back into drawing again
Paintstorm Studio. It's about $20 and it's the best thing ever. I highly recommend it to everyone who does digital art. You can make so many different brushes with the default set and you can also import ABR.
They have a free trial so you can try that even tho the free trial pop up can be a bit annoying sometimes and a bit buggy. XD
Hey DeKay what program do you use for drawing again? I'm still using Paint Tool SAI but I might try some others. I haven't drawn in forever but I'm taking a game design class and we have to draw our own characters so I gotta get back into drawing again
I'm not DeKay but if you want a recommendation, medibang is great! My friend makes whole drawings with her fingers in there
Paintstorm Studio. It's about $20 and it's the best thing ever. I highly recommend it to everyone who does digital art. You can make so many different brushes with the default set and you can also import ABR.
They have a free trial so you can try that even tho the free trial pop up can be a bit annoying sometimes and a bit buggy. XD
I downloaded both. Loving the interface on both programs, and I love how I can draw on my tablet with Medibang. I'm gonna download it there too, and see how both compare to SAI, which I feel is getting a bit outdated so I wanted to try other programs. Thanks!
Medibang is good too but I can't go back to it after trying Paintstorm Studio. 😂
Oh, I forgot, you can customize the interface for Paintstorm. Like any color you want and they have like different styles preset under the Windows option or something.
Hey DeKay what program do you use for drawing again? I'm still using Paint Tool SAI but I might try some others. I haven't drawn in forever but I'm taking a game design class and we have to draw our own characters so I gotta get back into drawing again
Paintstorm Studio. It's about $20 and it's the best thing ever. I highly recommend it to everyone who does digital art. You can make so many different brushes with the default set and you can also import ABR.
They have a free trial so you can try that even tho the free trial pop up can be a bit annoying sometimes and a bit buggy. XD
Hey DeKay what program do you use for drawing again? I'm still using Paint Tool SAI but I might try some others. I haven't drawn in forever but I'm taking a game design class and we have to draw our own characters so I gotta get back into drawing again
Paintstorm Studio. It's about $20 and it's the best thing ever. I highly recommend it to everyone who does digital art. You can make so many different brushes with the default set and you can also import ABR.
They have a free trial so you can try that even tho the free trial pop up can be a bit annoying sometimes and a bit buggy. XD
Hey DeKay what program do you use for drawing again? I'm still using Paint Tool SAI but I might try some others. I haven't drawn in forever but I'm taking a game design class and we have to draw our own characters so I gotta get back into drawing again
Paintstorm Studio. It's about $20 and it's the best thing ever. I highly recommend it to everyone who does digital art. You can make so many different brushes with the default set and you can also import ABR.
They have a free trial so you can try that even tho the free trial pop up can be a bit annoying sometimes and a bit buggy. XD
Hey DeKay what program do you use for drawing again? I'm still using Paint Tool SAI but I might try some others. I haven't drawn in forever but I'm taking a game design class and we have to draw our own characters so I gotta get back into drawing again
Paintstorm Studio. It's about $20 and it's the best thing ever. I highly recommend it to everyone who does digital art. You can make so many different brushes with the default set and you can also import ABR.
They have a free trial so you can try that even tho the free trial pop up can be a bit annoying sometimes and a bit buggy. XD
I was super excited for TS4 cuz I didn't like TS3 and was just waiting for TS4 to come out. So I made an account here to talk to other people who are excited for it too.
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I had questions about Sims3. Y'all had answers.
Still playing Sims3, plus Sims4, and Sims2 as well. If I need help with anything, this forum is the best place to get help.
Hey DeKay what program do you use for drawing again? I'm still using Paint Tool SAI but I might try some others. I haven't drawn in forever but I'm taking a game design class and we have to draw our own characters so I gotta get back into drawing again
Paintstorm Studio. It's about $20 and it's the best thing ever. I highly recommend it to everyone who does digital art. You can make so many different brushes with the default set and you can also import ABR.
They have a free trial so you can try that even tho the free trial pop up can be a bit annoying sometimes and a bit buggy. XD
Hey DeKay what program do you use for drawing again? I'm still using Paint Tool SAI but I might try some others. I haven't drawn in forever but I'm taking a game design class and we have to draw our own characters so I gotta get back into drawing again
Paintstorm Studio. It's about $20 and it's the best thing ever. I highly recommend it to everyone who does digital art. You can make so many different brushes with the default set and you can also import ABR.
They have a free trial so you can try that even tho the free trial pop up can be a bit annoying sometimes and a bit buggy. XD
Hey DeKay what program do you use for drawing again? I'm still using Paint Tool SAI but I might try some others. I haven't drawn in forever but I'm taking a game design class and we have to draw our own characters so I gotta get back into drawing again
Paintstorm Studio. It's about $20 and it's the best thing ever. I highly recommend it to everyone who does digital art. You can make so many different brushes with the default set and you can also import ABR.
They have a free trial so you can try that even tho the free trial pop up can be a bit annoying sometimes and a bit buggy. XD
How did I miss the headline that Mr. Rogers was bi??? An absolute icon.
That made me so happy when i saw it.
90's and early 2000's music is the shizzzzzzzzzz!!!!! The fact that you said your parents listen to it makes me feel old. I can be your godmother. LOL.
Hey DeKay what program do you use for drawing again? I'm still using Paint Tool SAI but I might try some others. I haven't drawn in forever but I'm taking a game design class and we have to draw our own characters so I gotta get back into drawing again
Paintstorm Studio. It's about $20 and it's the best thing ever. I highly recommend it to everyone who does digital art. You can make so many different brushes with the default set and you can also import ABR.
They have a free trial so you can try that even tho the free trial pop up can be a bit annoying sometimes and a bit buggy. XD
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Personally, I didn't find it to be a run-on sentence. A true run-on sentence is going to be quite a bit longer than that. Either that or my entire Simlit is filled with run-on sentences.
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No, i'm the one with all the run-on sentences
I've never noticed a run-on sentence in your Simlit. I may not understand what one is, but i can ensure it. XD
Just vibing...
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Basically an excessively, unnecessarily long sentence that, in theory, could be shortened or simplified and possibly even broken into several sentences, or even an entire paragraph in some instances, and this is an absolutely wonderful of example of a sentence that is, indeed, a run-on sentence.
^^^ My proof your sentence was not run-on. There is not a single period anywhere in there. Good lord.
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Hardworking? Girl, what he do? Mow your lawn? XD
Yeah, I don't know what run on sentences are anyways. LOL. I think run on sentences are kinda like how I always talk here like this where I never stop, cuz that's who I am. 😂 Or when I saw stuff like, "I like these shoes as they're black in color cuz black is the best color."
Whoa, Squirrel, remember to breathe
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wAit really
I feel the hearts beating
can you burn a luigi board
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I'm not DeKay but if you want a recommendation, medibang is great! My friend makes whole drawings with her fingers in there
I feel the hearts beating
Yes, really.
Paintstorm Studio. It's about $20 and it's the best thing ever. I highly recommend it to everyone who does digital art. You can make so many different brushes with the default set and you can also import ABR.
They have a free trial so you can try that even tho the free trial pop up can be a bit annoying sometimes and a bit buggy. XD
No, cuz that's polluting the air. 😂
IS IT DANGEROUS TO PLAY OIJA BOARD
okay i'm done sorry
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I downloaded both. Loving the interface on both programs, and I love how I can draw on my tablet with Medibang. I'm gonna download it there too, and see how both compare to SAI, which I feel is getting a bit outdated so I wanted to try other programs. Thanks!
I don't know. Never tried. I don't think it's dangerous but just spooky.
Medibang is good too but I can't go back to it after trying Paintstorm Studio. 😂
Oh, I forgot, you can customize the interface for Paintstorm. Like any color you want and they have like different styles preset under the Windows option or something.
He cleans Ceviche's tank, because Ceviche is bad at eating (I know, I know. He's no child of mine, obviously)
no it's a meme
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Oh.
Is it that one where the guy is reading all the wrong pronunciation? XD
Yee
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What kinda music?
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I had questions about Sims3. Y'all had answers.
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A lot of 90's and early 2000's music, mainly.
That made me so happy when i saw it.
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I MADE A POSE AND TRIED TO USE IT AND THIS HAPPENED. THIS GENUINELY MADE ME PANIC FOR A SECOND. WHAT THE HELL
I didn't even realized i quoted myself, i thought i edited my post. good lord
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90's and early 2000's music is the shizzzzzzzzzz!!!!! The fact that you said your parents listen to it makes me feel old. I can be your godmother. LOL.
Yesssss.
Nooooo.
*tosses Lyric into the pit*