Mm, my colleague just gave me a sour candy with lemon, mint and salt flavor in it and it's amazing. XD Mmmm, salt.... this tastes like Coke with salt to be honest. Hahaha.
I was super excited for TS4 cuz I didn't like TS3 and was just waiting for TS4 to come out. So I made an account here to talk to other people who are excited for it too.
To make friends because I'm friendless and have no social life
I was super excited for TS4 cuz I didn't like TS3 and was just waiting for TS4 to come out. So I made an account here to talk to other people who are excited for it too.
I had some problem with my game
There's two types of people. XD
I know, I'm the lame and unpopular type I still haven't really been successful in making many friends oof
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Hey guys, how weird is the sentence "a picturesque scene of the snowfall"
i'm trying to use Big Words (TM) in my writing but i feel like it sounds off
Can you provide the whole sentence?
"It had started as a simple day. The town was a picturesque scene from the snowfall, and was illuminated from the moonlight above."
Just a short opening to the chapter. I don't have enough skill to make it longer
Honestly, it does sound a bit awkward to me. It sounds like you are just trying to add... ah, Big Words (TM) to your writing, which certainly isn't a bad thing but it just doesn't feel natural here. I think it also depends on how important those details are for the scene, simple descriptions are fine if it won't come up much. Or if it's a slower or more intimate scene and you are trying to paint a picture you could add more.
Or just ignore my advice entirely, that's probably for the best.
y'all, the sooner this cropped top trend dies, the sooner I'll be happy. I bought some pajamas today and I just put them on and the pajama top is cropped.
Didn't you look at them before you bought them ?
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I had this weird thing when your lung get stuck between your ribs and when your breathe you have a sharp pain. Except it was in my back. And it lasted at least 20 minutes. I thought i would suffocate then and there. I could barely breathe.
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It went away really quickly which surprises me. But i swear I felt like I was dying. It felt like something stabbing the inside of my stomach
You may want to get that checked out if it happens again.
Not to do with this, but you know how there’s those people that can be in huge amounts of pain but not complain, then there’s the people that can be in pretty much no pain at all and won’t stop complaining? I’m a mixture of the two, if it’s excruciating then I’ll stay quiet but if I stub my toe I won’t shut up.
I just got this sudden pain in my stomach and it seriously gets worse when I move and it isn't going away
It's been a nice life.
That happened to me when we lived in Maine and I tried to drink the water from the sink. They tried to dig the well out deeper and ruined everything, they never fixed it the entire month I lived there. They sure did try though, I think I posted a picture on this thread a long time ago of the construction from my bedroom window that I had to deal with every single morning.
It went away really quickly which surprises me. But i swear I felt like I was dying. It felt like something stabbing the inside of my stomach
You may want to get that checked out if it happens again.
Not to do with this, but you know how there’s those people that can be in huge amounts of pain but not complain, then there’s the people that can be in pretty much no pain at all and won’t stop complaining? I’m a mixture of the two, if it’s excruciating then I’ll stay quiet but if I stub my toe I won’t shut up.
I feel like the pain might've been my rib. I read somewhere that for people around my age, ribs aren't fully developed so something like that could happen, but it isn't serious? I could be wrong though.
Hey guys, how weird is the sentence "a picturesque scene of the snowfall"
i'm trying to use Big Words (TM) in my writing but i feel like it sounds off
Can you provide the whole sentence?
"It had started as a simple day. The town was a picturesque scene from the snowfall, and was illuminated from the moonlight above."
Just a short opening to the chapter. I don't have enough skill to make it longer
Well, I would say the second sentence is a run-on sentence. There's a few ways to reframe it, but my inclination would be to stick with just one of the descriptors - either snowfall or moonlight.
Hey guys, how weird is the sentence "a picturesque scene of the snowfall"
i'm trying to use Big Words (TM) in my writing but i feel like it sounds off
Can you provide the whole sentence?
"It had started as a simple day. The town was a picturesque scene from the snowfall, and was illuminated from the moonlight above."
Just a short opening to the chapter. I don't have enough skill to make it longer
Well, I would say the second sentence is a run-on sentence. There's a few ways to reframe it, but my inclination would be to stick with just one of the descriptors - either snowfall or moonlight.
I never thought of the run-on sentence thing. That's probably been an issue i've never noticed.
I tried to rewrite it in a way that included both.
Magnolia Promenade was painted by the heavy snowfall and faintly illuminated by the moonlight.
Hey guys, how weird is the sentence "a picturesque scene of the snowfall"
i'm trying to use Big Words (TM) in my writing but i feel like it sounds off
Can you provide the whole sentence?
"It had started as a simple day. The town was a picturesque scene from the snowfall, and was illuminated from the moonlight above."
Just a short opening to the chapter. I don't have enough skill to make it longer
It's fine but maybe it sounds weird cuz you said "picturesque scene". I don't know. How about using "quaint" instead? Or change "scene" to something else. Like "quaint spectacle".
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i'm trying to use Big Words (TM) in my writing but i feel like it sounds off
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Sounds fine to me.
Cool.
Okay Youtube app, why did you delete the suggested videos? What is the point?
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Can you provide the whole sentence?
"It had started as a simple day. The town was a picturesque scene from the snowfall, and was illuminated from the moonlight above."
Just a short opening to the chapter. I don't have enough skill to make it longer
Just vibing...
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Honestly, it does sound a bit awkward to me. It sounds like you are just trying to add... ah, Big Words (TM) to your writing, which certainly isn't a bad thing but it just doesn't feel natural here. I think it also depends on how important those details are for the scene, simple descriptions are fine if it won't come up much. Or if it's a slower or more intimate scene and you are trying to paint a picture you could add more.
Or just ignore my advice entirely, that's probably for the best.
Didn't you look at them before you bought them ?
It's been a nice life.
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I don’t find any issue with it 🙂
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You may want to get that checked out if it happens again.
Not to do with this, but you know how there’s those people that can be in huge amounts of pain but not complain, then there’s the people that can be in pretty much no pain at all and won’t stop complaining? I’m a mixture of the two, if it’s excruciating then I’ll stay quiet but if I stub my toe I won’t shut up.
It's a lot of fun!
That happened to me when we lived in Maine and I tried to drink the water from the sink. They tried to dig the well out deeper and ruined everything, they never fixed it the entire month I lived there. They sure did try though, I think I posted a picture on this thread a long time ago of the construction from my bedroom window that I had to deal with every single morning.
I feel like the pain might've been my rib. I read somewhere that for people around my age, ribs aren't fully developed so something like that could happen, but it isn't serious? I could be wrong though.
God that's a mood.
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Well, I would say the second sentence is a run-on sentence. There's a few ways to reframe it, but my inclination would be to stick with just one of the descriptors - either snowfall or moonlight.
I never thought of the run-on sentence thing. That's probably been an issue i've never noticed.
I tried to rewrite it in a way that included both.
Magnolia Promenade was painted by the heavy snowfall and faintly illuminated by the moonlight.
Does this sound any better?
Just vibing...
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It's fine but maybe it sounds weird cuz you said "picturesque scene". I don't know. How about using "quaint" instead? Or change "scene" to something else. Like "quaint spectacle".
😖😖😖 Why would you name a eeky slimy snail after the most awesome thing which is meringue? I'm shooketh.
Because he is a good, hardworking snail who deserves a good name.