I've been writing & publishing a lot more/faster than I expected, but almost all the chapters only take 5 minutes or less to read, if anyone's interested in digging in As always, feedback and tips are appreciated!
From the town's first community lot to each household and rabbit hole, watch the stories unfold... Rebuilding Appaloosa Plains Prologue & Chapters 1-18 out now!
Origin ID: Mourning-Stars | Simming since 2000
@friendsfan367 kind of the point... she IS Cinderella up until Carly gets kidnapped as a teenager. Then Carly becomes "Carlyella"
i know its the point. i had started reading the first time i just never finished . i know i started on 4 i'll try and read more after i get glasses reading hurts my eyes right now but i wanted to see the new version.
@friendsfan367 kind of the point... she IS Cinderella up until Carly gets kidnapped as a teenager. Then Carly becomes "Carlyella"
i know its the point. i had started reading the first time i just never finished . i know i started on 4 i'll try and read more after i get glasses reading hurts my eyes right now but i wanted to see the new version.
well it will take a while since I'm going to take pictures of chapter 5 after I get the Enrichment relgion sorted out
@MadameLee I went back and re-read all the new chapters because I thought I was missing something. It's a very intriguing story -- maybe I'm missing some context?
Was the price of using the potion to avoid marrying her cousin all of those family deaths AND a Cinderella child? (Seems like making the 1 child a cleaning servant is just her choice? She could treat them all the same instead, no?) Is she trying to live out a destiny of some kind since she was born a Duchess?
From what I gather in this reading circle, there are strong fairytale/Disney influences for your legacy story, but I wouldn't have gathered that right away from your story so far (I've only read the new rewritten chapters). Is this information important to the story's premise, or more like a source of inspiration for you?
I really am intrigued by your story and look forward to reading more!!
From the town's first community lot to each household and rabbit hole, watch the stories unfold... Rebuilding Appaloosa Plains Prologue & Chapters 1-18 out now!
Origin ID: Mourning-Stars | Simming since 2000
@MadameLee I went back and re-read all the new chapters because I thought I was missing something. It's a very intriguing story -- maybe I'm missing some context?
Was the price of using the potion to avoid marrying her cousin all of those family deaths AND a Cinderella child? (Seems like making the 1 child a cleaning servant is just her choice? She could treat them all the same instead, no?) Is she trying to live out a destiny of some kind since she was born a Duchess?
From what I gather in this reading circle, there are strong fairytale/Disney influences for your legacy story, but I wouldn't have gathered that right away from your story so far (I've only read the new rewritten chapters). Is this information important to the story's premise, or more like a source of inspiration for you?
I really am intrigued by your story and look forward to reading more!!
Molly is one of four Cinderella-characters that will appear in the Swansons you already meet number #2 future Cinderella
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Well there had to be a reason for the family's suffering from Gen 2 onwards and a reason for Clarissa to have to move from India. But it's not a potion but a spell sort of like the "Dark Curse" from Once Upon a Time TV Show But Molly being a servant is more of Carly's doing then the Mom's doing. Mom's just can't say "No" to her.
I've been well--busy with work (which is finally settling down a bit) and having lots of fun with ESO (which I've gotten my fill of for a little while). Looks like I have some fun catching-up to do here! I'm excited!
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1.12: Another Unexpected
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i can get it to her for you we have a pm thread already.
i sent it to her for you.
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In this whistlestop update, the Livingstone children are growing up and gaining skills. Plus, Baby G makes their entrance!
Part Five: Skills Not Skulls
I also posted an update today Chapter 21 - Self-Doubt
I've been writing & publishing a lot more/faster than I expected, but almost all the chapters only take 5 minutes or less to read, if anyone's interested in digging in As always, feedback and tips are appreciated!
Rebuilding Appaloosa Plains
Prologue & Chapters 1-18 out now!
Origin ID: Mourning-Stars | Simming since 2000
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this reminded me of cinderella.
@friendsfan367 kind of the point... she IS Cinderella up until Carly gets kidnapped as a teenager. Then Carly becomes "Carlyella"
i know its the point. i had started reading the first time i just never finished . i know i started on 4 i'll try and read more after i get glasses reading hurts my eyes right now but i wanted to see the new version.
well it will take a while since I'm going to take pictures of chapter 5 after I get the Enrichment relgion sorted out
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Was the price of using the potion to avoid marrying her cousin all of those family deaths AND a Cinderella child? (Seems like making the 1 child a cleaning servant is just her choice? She could treat them all the same instead, no?) Is she trying to live out a destiny of some kind since she was born a Duchess?
From what I gather in this reading circle, there are strong fairytale/Disney influences for your legacy story, but I wouldn't have gathered that right away from your story so far (I've only read the new rewritten chapters). Is this information important to the story's premise, or more like a source of inspiration for you?
I really am intrigued by your story and look forward to reading more!!
Rebuilding Appaloosa Plains
Prologue & Chapters 1-18 out now!
Origin ID: Mourning-Stars | Simming since 2000
@Morningstar
here's a spoiler
Well there had to be a reason for the family's suffering from Gen 2 onwards and a reason for Clarissa to have to move from India. But it's not a potion but a spell sort of like the "Dark Curse" from Once Upon a Time TV Show But Molly being a servant is more of Carly's doing then the Mom's doing. Mom's just can't say "No" to her.
I've been well--busy with work (which is finally settling down a bit) and having lots of fun with ESO (which I've gotten my fill of for a little while). Looks like I have some fun catching-up to do here! I'm excited!
I've got a new chapter of Sierra and S-Boys: Episode 14: Fan Transfer
Hope you're having a great day, and I'm looking forward to catching up on your writing!
Do you also play The Elder Scrolls Online? You can find me there as CathyTea, too!