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Tribe Kohona-An Amazon Challenge Story

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After a lot of thought, I decided to start an amazon challenge story. So here it is. Many thanks to the people who inspired me, including @pammiechick @Marialein @roseinblack69 and many more. Anyway, enough of my rambling. The story starts here:

This is my Creator, Anya Kohona: m04selI.png?1

Here are her two slaves, Lucas: K4mdW6Y.png?1

and Daniel: Tk86JtO.png?1

Finally, here is the Gatherer, Lila: h0abCW2.png?1
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    LluviaRainLluviaRain Posts: 2,199 Member
    Here are the tribal grounds: kNWw0Mh.jpg
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    roseinblack69roseinblack69 Posts: 4,070 Member
    Thanks for mentioning my story @cupcake12 :) I'll follow your story ;) I see they have a lot of place, I'm sure they'll be great tribe in time :)
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    LluviaRainLluviaRain Posts: 2,199 Member
    edited May 2016
    Sorry about the trash in the picture, I've tried this challenge before and I forgot to clean it up. :#

    Edit: spelling
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    LluviaRainLluviaRain Posts: 2,199 Member
    Also, thank you for the comments :)
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    Julyvee94Julyvee94 Posts: 6,694 Member
    Yay for another Amazon story :) always love these and I like your characters ^^
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    LluviaRainLluviaRain Posts: 2,199 Member
    edited May 2016
    Chapter 1:

    Daniel starts things off by going scavenging in the trash for spare parts.

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    Which is quickly followed by staring at the trash.

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    As staring at trash earns slaves a beating, Anya quickly deals with it.

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    After all of this, Anya and Daniel join Lucas and work on their fitness skills, while Lila goes fishing.

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    Daniel starts learning how to cook. (as Lucas is a breeding slave)

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    The day ends with Lila catching her 3rd fish.

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    LluviaRainLluviaRain Posts: 2,199 Member
    edited May 2016
    Sorry this chapter is so short, I hope that I will have time for longer ones in the future :/
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    Julyvee94Julyvee94 Posts: 6,694 Member
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    roseinblack69roseinblack69 Posts: 4,070 Member
    Yes, chapter is really short :( But I hope you'll find more time for longer chapter next time ;) I guess Daniel is lazy or he hoped if he'll stare to trash it will vanish itself :D
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    LluviaRainLluviaRain Posts: 2,199 Member
    I honestly don't understand Daniel. He's not insane, he's not lazy, yet he seems to do what he likes. It's almost impossible to get him to stop!
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    roseinblack69roseinblack69 Posts: 4,070 Member
    cupcake12 wrote: »
    I honestly don't understand Daniel. He's not insane, he's not lazy, yet he seems to do what he likes. It's almost impossible to get him to stop!

    :D But it's most interesting, isn't? Mostly I always allow my sims to do what they want :)
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    LluviaRainLluviaRain Posts: 2,199 Member
    Chapter 2:

    Daniel wakes up first thing in the morning to get food made, while Lila rummages in a fallen log, looking to find some frogs.

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    She found an eggplant whirl frog! Lila decides to keep the frog for breeding.

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    Anya compliments Lucas's appearance. The creator should breed first, so she gets to work.

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    Lucas rejects her! Anya punishes him.

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    Lucas gets angry and storms off. Oh dear.

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    LluviaRainLluviaRain Posts: 2,199 Member
    cupcake12 wrote: »
    I honestly don't understand Daniel. He's not insane, he's not lazy, yet he seems to do what he likes. It's almost impossible to get him to stop!

    :D But it's most interesting, isn't? Mostly I always allow my sims to do what they want :)

    I have autonomy on, so when Anya gave Lucas in trouble, Lucas started telling a joke! Anya kept on giving poor Lucas in trouble, so that's how he got angry. He's so self assured as well. *sigh* :(
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    roseinblack69roseinblack69 Posts: 4,070 Member
    cupcake12 wrote: »
    cupcake12 wrote: »
    I honestly don't understand Daniel. He's not insane, he's not lazy, yet he seems to do what he likes. It's almost impossible to get him to stop!

    :D But it's most interesting, isn't? Mostly I always allow my sims to do what they want :)

    I have autonomy on, so when Anya gave Lucas in trouble, Lucas started telling a joke! Anya kept on giving poor Lucas in trouble, so that's how he got angry. He's so self assured as well. *sigh* :(

    And it's great for your story :) Give them a time, later it can work ;) I mean if Anya and Lucas will know each other better he'll not reject her. Maybe ;) Let's hope it :D
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    LluviaRainLluviaRain Posts: 2,199 Member
    Ok. I'm wondering whether I should have smaller chapters, but update more often, or whether a should have larger chapters and update less. I know what's easier for me, but I want to know what everyone else prefers. Please give me your opinion. :)
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    roseinblack69roseinblack69 Posts: 4,070 Member
    edited May 2016
    cupcake12 wrote: »
    Ok. I'm wondering whether I should have smaller chapters, but update more often, or whether a should have larger chapters and update less. I know what's easier for me, but I want to know what everyone else prefers. Please give me your opinion. :)

    Just do what is easier for you... :) If you don't have too much time then larger chapters and less update would be the best decision for you :)
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    LluviaRainLluviaRain Posts: 2,199 Member
    Chapter 3:

    Anya asks Lucas to cloud gaze behind the main compound, while Lila waters her only plant, the mushroom.

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    Lila then finds a leopard frog and breeds it with the eggplant whirl frog. One whirlyflower frog is the result!

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    While she finds the frogs, she picks up a new addition to the garden, a snapdragon.

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    Both of the slaves get to work on cleaning up the bathroom. They blame the toilet for breaking.

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    Daniel then goes and stands in one of the puddles.

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    Only then does he realise that the shower is broken, so he goes and fixes it while Lucas does press ups outside.

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    Anya continues to work on her relationship with Lucas, while Daniel works on his fitness skill.

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    The day ends on a high note.

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    roseinblack69roseinblack69 Posts: 4,070 Member
    Lucas was better decision than Daniel ;)
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    LluviaRainLluviaRain Posts: 2,199 Member
    The way my rules are, creator gets to choose who to breed with, so I make it that the first slave that she wants to talk to is the breeding slave. There maybe a twist though >:)
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    roseinblack69roseinblack69 Posts: 4,070 Member
    Yes, creator always choose :) Let's hope she'll choose right ;)
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    LluviaRainLluviaRain Posts: 2,199 Member
    I'm celebrating my first anniversary of my account today! (Though I can't see how as I joined in November :/ )
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    LluviaRainLluviaRain Posts: 2,199 Member
    edited July 2016
    Dear Reader/s,
    I am sorry to say that after a bit of thought, I am discontinuing this story. If anyone enjoyed it, please check out The Cullen Legacy.

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    roseinblack69roseinblack69 Posts: 4,070 Member
    Why? :/ Lost inspiration?
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    LluviaRainLluviaRain Posts: 2,199 Member
    Why? :/ Lost inspiration?

    Yes, and I'm just not enjoying writing this story. I also give up easily. :/
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