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    SimCrazySimCrazy Posts: 9,908 Member
    edited January 2011
    w00t, I like it!
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    Mollymoo15Mollymoo15 Posts: 6,448 Member
    edited January 2011
    SimCrazy wrote:
    w00t, I like it!
    w00t, I'm glad you do!
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    CrazyPlumbob915CrazyPlumbob915 Posts: 4,035 Member
    edited January 2011
    Molly, I love the plot of this story. I did notice as I read through this thread a few spelling errors, so keep note of that. :thumbup:
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    Mollymoo15Mollymoo15 Posts: 6,448 Member
    edited January 2011
    Molly, I love the plot of this story. I did notice as I read through this thread a few spelling errors, so keep note of that. :thumbup:
    Thank ya dear. I'll keep track of how I spell, just for you >_> XD
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    CrazyPlumbob915CrazyPlumbob915 Posts: 4,035 Member
    edited January 2011
    Mollymoo15 wrote:
    Molly, I love the plot of this story. I did notice as I read through this thread a few spelling errors, so keep note of that. :thumbup:
    Thank ya dear. I'll keep track of how I spell, just for you >_> XD

    Why thank ya. ;)
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    Mollymoo15Mollymoo15 Posts: 6,448 Member
    edited January 2011
    Mollymoo15 wrote:
    Molly, I love the plot of this story. I did notice as I read through this thread a few spelling errors, so keep note of that. :thumbup:
    Thank ya dear. I'll keep track of how I spell, just for you >_> XD

    Why thank ya. ;)
    Ya welcome. ;)
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    Mollymoo15Mollymoo15 Posts: 6,448 Member
    edited January 2011
    Bump
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    Mollymoo15Mollymoo15 Posts: 6,448 Member
    edited January 2011
    Bumparoo
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    1nova1nova Posts: 7,078 New Member
    edited January 2011
    LOVED it!!! (just had to put that in caps for you)
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    Mollymoo15Mollymoo15 Posts: 6,448 Member
    edited January 2011
    1nova wrote:
    LOVED it!!! (just had to put that in caps for you)
    Glad too see ya back here hun :mrgreen:

    I'm glad you liked it. And i'm happy theres more viewers coming in! :D

    Oh, and I also love your sig. It made me laugh ^-^
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    1nova1nova Posts: 7,078 New Member
    edited January 2011
    Mollymoo15 wrote:
    1nova wrote:
    LOVED it!!! (just had to put that in caps for you)
    Glad too see ya back here hun :mrgreen:

    I'm glad you liked it. And i'm happy theres more viewers coming in! :D

    Oh, and I also love your sig. It made me laugh ^-^

    Oh thanks!!! I random'lly thought of flying one day and came up with that!!
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    Mollymoo15Mollymoo15 Posts: 6,448 Member
    edited January 2011
    1nova wrote:
    Mollymoo15 wrote:
    1nova wrote:
    LOVED it!!! (just had to put that in caps for you)
    Glad too see ya back here hun :mrgreen:

    I'm glad you liked it. And i'm happy theres more viewers coming in! :D

    Oh, and I also love your sig. It made me laugh ^-^

    Oh thanks!!! I random'lly thought of flying one day and came up with that!!
    Haha! I tried doing that when I was little with and umbrella and I failed epicly XD

    I might have a new chapter out today or tomorrow, since I have today and tomorrow off of school :D
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    Mollymoo15Mollymoo15 Posts: 6,448 Member
    edited February 2011
    ~Chapter 5~

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    Next week I went onto the computer to catch up with the news. I could have checked the newspaper, but I think January burned them again...
    Thats when I heard footsteps coming up the stairs. I leaned my head to the right to see just who it was.

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    Well, surprise surprise. It was Jason. Oh, did I Mention we're dating now? The day after January freaked out on Jason, he asked me out in a flash. Ever since, he's been following me everywhere. And I mean EVERYWHERE.
    "Hey, babe." He said with his loving smile.
    "Hi."
    He kissed me on the cheek.
    "Where have ya been?"
    "Like you wouldn't know!" I smirked when I said that. And so did he. He even blushed a little. He then pulled me up from the warm red seat.

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    "You know I love you right?"
    He had never said he loved me. But I guess he just never told me because he was dating January for such a long time.
    "Of course! And I love you too."
    He pulled me closer and whispered in my ear.
    "Alyssa Jade Morlli, I love you with all my life. My heart starts pounding on my chest when I see you. I want to be with you my whole life. I can't express my feeling for you enough. Will you, Alyssa, marry me?"
    My heart stopped, I couldn't say a word, my breathing was heavy and tears were streaming down from my eyes.
    "Jason.... Jason that was..... wonderful. Y..... YES!"

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    He got down on one knee, and slid the ring up onto my finger. The heart shaped diamond was shining like the sun after a long rain. I loved it. I must have stared at it for at least six minutes before I snapped back into reality. I shed my last tear and hugged the life out of Jason.

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    Soon I will be Mrs. Breve, I already planed out my wedding day. Ya, call me a freak, but its the most important day in a girls life! Don't get me wrong ;)

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    Sorry I missed last week end guys, I was slacking off and i'm so sorry! I promise I will bet back on track. I'm missing the updates cause I haven't adjusted from my little break. I hope I get all my viewers back.

    Well, thanks for reading!

    ~MollymooXx
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    SimCrazySimCrazy Posts: 9,908 Member
    edited February 2011
    Wooooooooooooooooooo! Love it!
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    SimCrazySimCrazy Posts: 9,908 Member
    edited February 2011
    Wooooooooooooooooooo! Love it!
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    Mollymoo15Mollymoo15 Posts: 6,448 Member
    edited February 2011
    SimCrazy wrote:
    Wooooooooooooooooooo! Love it!
    Woooooooooooooooooo! Thank you!
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    Mollymoo15Mollymoo15 Posts: 6,448 Member
    edited February 2011
    Bump
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    1nova1nova Posts: 7,078 New Member
    edited February 2011
    Love it!!!!!!!
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    Mollymoo15Mollymoo15 Posts: 6,448 Member
    edited February 2011
    1nova wrote:
    Love it!!!!!!!
    Thank you! Glad you did! :D
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    Mollymoo15Mollymoo15 Posts: 6,448 Member
    edited February 2011
    Bump

    Snow day, might get new chapter out today.
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    Mollymoo15Mollymoo15 Posts: 6,448 Member
    edited February 2011
    Sorry I skipped last week end guys, I had a rough night Sunday, and I was gonna get the chapter up then, but something happened and I couldn't focus on the story line. So, i'll get it out on Friday or Saturday. Depends about Saturday. Cause I might be going to a party so, ya.

    Hopefully all the readers will come back. ._.

    ~MollyXx
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    Mollymoo15Mollymoo15 Posts: 6,448 Member
    edited February 2011
    ~Chapter 6~

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    Me and Jason got married about ten months ago, and Jason found this adorible little abode of us to live. I am loving my life. Me and January keep in touch. Although shes busy with he new boyfriend Harold, we're still close.
    I then heard grunting coming from downstairs. Slowly, I walked over to the stairs and walked my way down to the living room.

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    Jason was doing his weekly workout, although hes been cheating on his diet, when he thinks I don't know that he is... He sneeks down in the middle of the night to get ice cream. One morning I found ice cream all over his face!
    Anyway, I asked his if he would like some waffles. Even though he knows I suck at cooking. Last time I did, I nearly burned the house down..... O~O

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    I grabed the stuff from the fridge, I usely just use Eggo waffles, but we were all out. Life is so hard some times....

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    Some seasoning...

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    Milk!

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    Mix it all together.... AND YOU GET THE BEST OF BOTH WORLDS :XD:

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    Mmmmm... yummy waffles. Golden brown... syrup.... YUM!
    "Don't.... don't burn em!" Yelled Jason from the living room

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    Sucess! They aren't burned! WIN!
    "Jason! Come eat hunny!" I yelled to the living room "They aren't burned!"
    "Thank the lord...." I acted like I didn't hear that ;)

    I grabed my plate, and held my stomach, I wasn't feeling to easy.
    Then, I just dropped my plate and ran to the bathroom.
    "......Good thing I didn't take a bite of those waffles." Jason said under his breath.

    Oh, did I mention, I'm pregnant?

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    Whew! Thats the chapter for this week guys. I wont be on on computer Saturday to snap any pics for the next chapter. I'll be at a sleepover. And wont get back till Sunday afternoon. So, enjoy this chapter and wait for the next chapter!

    ~MollyXx

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    EDIT: God I had alot of mistakes. Fix'd em.
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    simsgal2227simsgal2227 Posts: 12,279 Member
    edited February 2011
    Nice, Molly! I finally got around to reading it. Am I weird? I love sim stories, but never feel like readin them, but when I do, I'm glad I did.
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    Mollymoo15Mollymoo15 Posts: 6,448 Member
    edited February 2011
    Nice, Molly! I finally got around to reading it. Am I weird? I love sim stories, but never feel like readin them, but when I do, I'm glad I did.
    Haha, i'm like that to. I'll see a story, and be like "Oooh, i'll read that once I check out this thread.". And then it's a week later till I read it xD.

    Oh, and thank you!
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    Sims3PlayrGSims3PlayrG Posts: 6,659
    edited February 2011
    lovee it! Carry on !!!
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