thx pink. What took him so long? He didn't have the chance because Rachelle was always running off, but trust me that kid WANTED to kiss her. Rachelle refused 20 times x.x I love the shot for when she ran out. I paused it accidentally after the 15th failed kiss while they were both creeped out and BOOM perfect shot!
I do the exact same. I would have to take the same shot 15 times, to get it right. If the pic is not perfect then im not putting it in the story :roll: Sometimes I get on myself's nerves
I had 20 or so pictures of their kiss. Two were the First Kiss one, but the others were just a regular kiss. But I couldn't use them because none of them looked right and her hand shouldn't have been on his shoulder lol. I take an average of about 50-60 pictures for a 20 page story. Perfectionist that's me ;]
Ok people chapter 6 is up! I moved it to a blog because I wanted to (and the story maker was making me crazy) and it's my first time doing a blog so it's all a little awkward, but I'm getting the hang of it! Read and tell me what you think!
Very nice chapter! Rachelle is so beautiful without those glasses! I also liked the Halo segment even though I've never played the game before. I'm pretty bad at First Person Shooters lol.
There was a bit towards the end that repeated itself, but other than that I think this is my favorite chapter so far. The pictures are so pretty and clear and really added a lot to the story. The ending was the best though; Rachelle and Donovan's goodbye was so lovely, I think I was blushing the whole time I was reading it! :oops:
SHOOT! It didn't do that when I checked it over DX I'll fix it hold on.
Edit: I took out the repeated parts but I couldn't fix the font. Like I said...getting used to the whole blogging thing :oops:
But I'm glad you both liked it! I've actually never played Halo, but I've played in the multi-player battles of one of the later Halo games with my cousins.
AHHH! I can't believe I didn't know about this until now! Well I just read all six and rec'd every single one They're super good. I'm so happy her and Donovan ended up together! That makes me happy I'm interested to see more about who this voice in her head is and what happens :P can't wait for more!
AHH! pinkelephant joined the thread! party time lol. hey at least you heard about it ;] ive written out about three more chapters on word but I haven't gotten around to taking pictures. I have to fix my O'Hara legacy and then take all the pics for the story in your contest. thx for the recs btw!
Thx to everyone else who reads and recs it too. I keep forgetting to add that lol
hehe I know right PARTAYYY :P I know, that's always my problem too. Taking the pictures always seems like such a drag after I've written it all out!! And no problem can't wait until you get it posted!
Hello! I really enjoyed this chapter. You're really good with details . Donovan and Rachelle are cute together. I was surprised she actually told him about the demons! By the way, I saw Chapter 6 right below Chapter 7, so at least it didn't get deleted !
Ugh how do I fix that? x.x Why must I be so computer illiterate??? Oh well At least it's still there .__.
And she was bound to tell him about the demons eventually. But Donovan's a lot smarter than he acts or looks, plus he's got a bipolar brother.....and Diamond sort of provoked Rachelle into randomly blurting out things to stop Donovan from dating her. Diamond gets a lot scarier as the story goes on .___.
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Edit: I took out the repeated parts but I couldn't fix the font. Like I said...getting used to the whole blogging thing :oops:
But I'm glad you both liked it! I've actually never played Halo, but I've played in the multi-player battles of one of the later Halo games with my cousins.
EDIT: I just noticed that I killed like 6 threads by posting a comment .___. I hope I'm not cursed or anything because I'm very talkative...
Thx to everyone else who reads and recs it too. I keep forgetting to add that lol
But if you are already caught up with all the chapters just click the link to chapter 6...it's chapter now T.T
And she was bound to tell him about the demons eventually. But Donovan's a lot smarter than he acts or looks, plus he's got a bipolar brother.....and Diamond sort of provoked Rachelle into randomly blurting out things to stop Donovan from dating her. Diamond gets a lot scarier as the story goes on .___.