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    GraceyManorGraceyManor Posts: 20,080 Member
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    Daniel: I do hope you have safe travels, you will return won't you?
    Carolyn: Of course I'm coming home.
    Daniel: I'm glad to hear that.

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    Claymore: It...it was awfully nice of you to invite me along...where is he?!
    Carolyn: You needn't be worried, you know the captain couldn't come.
    Claymore: That's what he wants you to think Ms Muir, but I know him.
    Candy: What was that? Did I just hear doors slamming and chains rattling?
    Claymore: Where? Where?!
    Carolyn: Stop it Candy.
    Candy: I couldn't help myself.

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    They're first day they spent sunbathing on the beach near their boat
    house.I have no clue where Claymore went, probably cowering somewhere.XD

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    Candy: I'm gonna go scare Claymore..
    Carolyn: You will not.Build a sand castle.
    Carolyn: No fair!

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    Sunset on the first night...

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    They also had a surprise visitor that night.:O

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    The next day they stopped by the boardwalk.

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    Not really a "chapter" just figured I'd share photos from their trip =)
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    AmaraRenaAmaraRena Posts: 6,533 Member
    Wait...he actually DID murder his family?
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    GraceyManorGraceyManor Posts: 20,080 Member
    AmaraRena wrote: »
    Wait...he actually DID murder his family?
    yes he’s the one from the legend.

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    GraceyManorGraceyManor Posts: 20,080 Member
    Been suffering from migraines this week, will be updating soon.
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    GraceyManorGraceyManor Posts: 20,080 Member
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    Carolyn: Nice try, Captain.I don't think this suits a family article.
    Daniel: Pity, it had a lot of potential!

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    Daniel: Blast it!
    Carolyn: Would you not blast so much? Candy is picking up
    a really bad habit.
    Daniel: My apologies, my dear, but that sniveling coward, claymore
    has brought an unwelcomed guest!

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    Eric: So this is Gull Lighthouse?
    Claymore: ...Yes, but I don't think Ms. Muir would like you poking
    about.

    Claymore looked around, worried someone was watching from
    the shadows.He was ready to leave.

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    Eric: I paid a good fee to get a tour of this lighthouse, I need
    some photos.
    Claymore:....I really don't think its a good idea...
    Eric: -holds out 200.00--
    Claymore; Well for the right price, come on in.

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    Eric: I beg you to let me take some photos of this beautiful home.
    Carolyn: I'm in the middle of some very important work, I'm sorry.
    Eric: I will be as silent as a grave.
    Claymore: I gotta run away, bye!
    Eric: High strung isn't he?
    Carolyn: Yes, well if this is for an article, I don't think.
    Eric: Oh no! Its for my personal use, Ms. Muir.
    It would probably be easier to let me take my photos,
    then to get rid of me.

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    Claymore: Ha! Maybe the old goat is mellowing...
    Daniel: Claymore!

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    Claymore: Oh! good maker! I'm leaving I'm leaving!

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    Eric: Captain gregg was sort of sour looking wasn't he?
    Carolyn: Oh I don't know about that.
    Eric: What I mean is that its hard for me to imagine that
    a man who looked like that, built this lighthouse?
    Daniel: Ms. Muir, Its high time I be rid of this intruder.
    Carolyn: Yes, I agree.
    Eric: Did you say something?
    Carolyn: I was just thinking out loud.

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    Daniel used his abilities to shove their guest into the wall, Eric
    landed face first into the floor.
    Carolyn: Be careful! Martha just waxed the floors.
    Eric: Yes, I can see...Ms.Muir, I'm beginning to think there is a
    uneasy presence here.
    Carolyn: That's me...I told you I had to work to do, now if you'll kindly
    leave.

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    After the family left for the movies, Eric snuck back into the home.
    Eric: Daniel Gregg, I know you're here.Show yourself.
    Daniel: So this is what you do? breaking into homes, you weasel!

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    Daniel: Sorry to say, Mr. Eric, no working restrooms.
    Eric: Uh gross!...maker!

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    Daniel: How about a little jolt to get you going!
    Daniel: Ouch!

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    Candy: Can I have a hot fudge sundae before bed?
    Martha: No! The last time we did that you had nightmares remember?
    Candy: A strange man on the ground!
    Carolyn: No, it was a bear remember?
    Candy: That sure don't look like a bear.
    Martha: Isn't that the pesky photographer? He's probably robbing
    us.

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    Eric: -wakes up slowly- Oh Ms.Muir? Is that your sister? She's lovely.
    Martha: Well, he's a polite thief, I'll give him that.
    Well buster, before I phone for the police, how did you get in here?
    Eric: Through the window...I unlocked it before I left.
    Martha: He's not only a polite thief, but an honest thief.
    Eric: Oh no, Martha, there's an explanation for everything.
    Carolyn: You might start with your condition?
    Eric: Ms Muir, I been pumbled, punched, kicked and pushed....
    Isn't it fantastic?!

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    Eric: I can assure you my motives are honest.
    Carolyn: Let's start at the beginning.
    Eric: My name is Eric William, yes that's my real name, but I'm
    not a student...I'm a paranormal investigator.I look for ghosts.
    Carolyn: You think there's a ghost here at gull lighthouse?
    Eric: I have enough evidence here to expand my department
    at the university!
    Eric: The sarcastic remarks I was making earlier, that was
    deliberate! I was trying to invoke him.It worked.
    Carolyn: Maybe you should take up photography, it would be
    safer.
    Eric: What I'm relying on is when the head of the college board
    comes here tomorrow night and sees for itself...
    Carolyn: Now, wait just a minute, I don't want you back here.
    I told you I need my privacy.

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    Eric: I see, well the best way to get privacy, is to allow me to
    return here with my superiors.
    Carolyn: How does that give me privacy?
    Eric: Well, it will keep from calling the papers, tv, and busybodies
    who would swarm up here on one word from me.
    Carolyn: How quaint, we have a blackmailing investigator.
    Eric: So will you allow us to come back?
    Carolyn: You don't leave me much of a choice..
    Eric: I hope not.

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    Carolyn: You might have knocked.
    Daniel: Madam, I am a ghost.
    Carolyn: Then rattle a chain or something.
    Daniel: Take a break Ms. Muir, I rendered you
    a service this evening.
    Carolyn: How so?
    Daniel: I gave a good thrashing to that rascal.He won't be back.

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    Carolyn: Its because of you that he will be back.He's a paranormal
    investigator, hunting for ghosts.
    Daniel: Madam, are you suggesting that I am responsible for the
    disruption in our lives?
    Carolyn: Well, I can't see who else is.
    If you behaved yourself, he might have gone away.
    Daniel: That seal insulted me! He said I was sour.
    Carolyn: We should add gullible, he said those things
    to provoke you and you fell for it.
    Daniel: Who was it that allowed that creature into the
    house in the first place?
    Carolyn: Natural mistake, he said he was a student of archictecture.
    Daniel: Now who is gulliable?
    Carolyn: What was I suppose to do? Barricade the doors? come after
    him with a shot gun?
    Daniel: Pity those ideas didn't come sooner.
    Carolyn: Captain more and more irrational, and impossible!

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    Daniel: And you Ms. Muir are in danger of becoming an unmitigated,
    intolerable...

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    Daniel: Oh, it seems we're having a terrible quarrel.
    Carolyn: I was just upset, I'm sorry.
    Daniel: That's better..let me say, that sometimes in the heat
    of anger, words pass that is regrettable. And as one cools, one
    may feel a twinge of remorse.
    Carolyn: That's reassuring..
    Daniel: Now, you say he will return? I will torture the living
    daylights out of him.

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    Carolyn: Don't that's just what he wants you to do.Let me handle
    this.
    Daniel: You? Turn the helm over to you again? When you already
    driving us on to the reefs?
    Carolyn: Would you stop with your nautical metaphors and trust me.
    Daniel: For you, I'll try to behave myself.

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    Eric: I have spent of most of my life searching for something
    Abigail: Too bad he's not searching for a psychiatrist, I know
    an excellent doctor.
    Eric: I found it, proof ghosts are here.

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    Abigail: Look, this is the third wild goose chase you sent me
    on, I see nothing that warrents expanding your department.
    Eric: Wait! Maybe Ms. Muir has some influence on him.

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    Carolyn: I hardly know the man.
    Eric: Please try.
    Carolyn: Alright....Captain to Gregg, speak to us...speak to us.
    Abigail: Try his answering service.
    Carolyn: Are you there?
    Daniel shakes his head no.
    Eric: He's coming through, here him typing.
    Computer said: See spot run, run spot run.
    Eric: It doesn't matter what it says, who else could have written
    this.
    Abigail: Here's a possibility.

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    Abigail: Hello, young lady.Are you reponsible for the typing we heard?
    Candy: Mommy, what happens if I lie?
    Martha: No dessert for 3 weeks...
    Candy: Okay, I did it.
    Abigail: Why?
    Eric: No! perhaps she's a medium.Are you a medium?
    Candy: I think I'm a small.
    Eric: In the hallway! the chandelier is moving!

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    Martha: Hi there!
    Eric: what are you doing?
    Martha: Pulling a string.
    Eric: Why?
    Carolyn: Because of your little blackmailing, breaking into my house
    and threatening me with reporters, we thought we'd give you a little
    bit of own paranormal show.
    Martha: Only one curtain call!

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    Abigail: Did you really do all of those things?
    Eric: Yes! but I have my reasons.
    Abigail: We will discuss this at my office, I do apologize Ms. Muir he
    won't bother you again.
    Carolyn: That's quite alright.
    Abigail: Just one question to clear up...Is there a ghost here?
    Carolyn: Absolutely not.
    Abigail: Didn't think so...Do you believe in ghosts?
    Carolyn: Do I look like the type of girl to believe in ghosts?

    next morning

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    Daniel: You handled that situation quite well, my lady.
    Carolyn: Thank you.
    Daniel: Just one thing.
    Carolyn: Yes?
    Daniel: You told a lie when you said you don't believe...No dessert for 3
    weeks.
    Carolyn: -sticks tongue out-
    Daniel: Ms. Muir!
    Carolyn: Like I said, writers..you can't change us.

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    Daniel: And I don't want to...

    A/N: I'm sorry if this is too long.

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    GraceyManorGraceyManor Posts: 20,080 Member
    edited May 2021
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    Claymore: Is uh you know, IT around.
    Carolyn: Now now, Claymore there's no need to be afraid.

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    Daniel: Are you so sure about that, Ms. Muir
    Claymore: n..now you go away! I have important news for Ms.Muir.
    Daniel: I do not take orders, I give them! Now stop your sniveling and
    tell her what you need to tell her.
    Claymore: Uh...the city....wants to tear the lighthouse down..
    Carolyn: Surely you said no...you wouldn't sell it...
    Claymore: They offered such a good price! They want to expand the boardwalk.
    Daniel: If you so much as remove one step from this home, you'll be sleeping with
    davy jones!
    Claymore: I....should go! more details tomorrow.

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    Carolyn: He wouldn't...
    Daniel: He would...greedy scoundrel wouldn't pass up an offer to make
    a few coins.

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    Claymore: Miss Muir....Ah! What are you doing here? Must you
    always be following her around.
    Daniel: Stop being such a jellyfish.
    Claymore: ...Miss Muir I'm sorry, but I accepted the offer and will
    not be renewing your lease, you'll have a month to vacate.
    Daniel: I ought to have you gutted, you greedy crustacean.
    Claymore: Now....now don't get mad! Its for the best, I was having
    trouble paying the mortgage!
    Carolyn: Even with what I was giving you?
    Claymore: Yes...I am sorry.

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    Carolyn: I guess I better start looking for somewhere else...
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    GraceyManorGraceyManor Posts: 20,080 Member
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    Danie: Cheer up, you have a great mind, you'll think of something.
    Carolyn: I appreciate the confidence, but I fear my creativity has run dry.

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    Daniel: Delay that, I can't stand it when you cry.
    Carolyn: So you've said...

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    Daniel: Forgive me Madam, I overstepped my boundaries...Excuse me.

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    Daniel: Blast!

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    Candy: Claymore says he's selling your ship.
    Daniel: Its true, lass.
    Candy: Let's feed him to the sharks.
    Daniel: Maker! I really am a bad influence on you.
    Miss Candy, do you like to dance?
    Candy: I love it.

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    Daniel: Have I told you the story of the "Flying Dutchman."
    Candy: Auntie has! It was exciting.
    Daniel: So you know what happens to someone who isn't
    kind?
    Candy: But Claymore deserves it!
    Daniel: Nobody deserves unkindness.He may be annoying,
    but he has done some good to, Candy.
    Candy: Like what?
    Daniel: Like bringing you and your aunt here..
    Promise me you won't speak of things like that anymore
    candy...Trust me...
    Candy: I promise.

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    Daniel: Just the lady I wanted to speak to..
    Carolyn: Well, here I am.Claymore says he's trying his best to
    delay the city..
    Daniel: I think it may be for the best if you did find a new home.
    Carolyn: ...I don't understand?

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    Daniel: Its for the best..
    Carolyn: What's the matter with you?
    Daniel: This isn't the place for a young lady and her aunt.
    Leave, Carolyn...you'll be better off.
    Carolyn: ...Fine, if that's how you really feel.We'll leave by
    morning.

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    Claymore: ...ah...everytime.
    Daniel: Don't fear, I'm not going to feed you to any sharks.
    Claymore: What about gutting me?
    Daniel: I'm not going to do anything, dear nephew.
    Claymore: ....Are you coming down with some ghostly illness?
    Normally you're chasing me out the door.
    Daniel: ...Just feeling under the weather is all, what did you need?
    Claymore: Miss Muir, actually...My neighbor may have an idea..

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    Daniel: Never you fear...I asked Carolyn to leave..
    Claymore: .....I don't know what's going on, but I'm beyond confused.
    Daniel: Don't be, its for the best if she and her family left.Excuse me.

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    Claymore: ...I feel like I'm in a bad episode of the twilight zone..
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    GraceyManorGraceyManor Posts: 20,080 Member
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    Daniel: Carolyn?

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    Daniel: What are you doing here?
    Carolyn: I had to come back...

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    Daniel: Its so good to see you, but you should leave.
    Carolyn: But why? Why do you want us gone so badly? Do
    you not like us?
    Daniel: Of course I do...but you don't belong here...I don't
    want to hurt any of you..please just go.

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    Carolyn: Don't shut us out again.
    Daniel: Please...Carolyn, your life is somewhere else.
    Carolyn: But I understand....

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    Carolyn: I want to help...
    Daniel: What I need...I could never ask of you.
    Carolyn: I'd do what I can to help, unless it requires killing someone...
    Daniel: Blast! Its nothing of the sort...but I still can't ask you..

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    Daniel: I love you, Carolyn...but you're not mine...
    Carolyn: I could be...if you just asked....
    Daniel: Carolyn, I would need someone...
    Carolyn: to marry you?...I'd love to!

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    GraceyManorGraceyManor Posts: 20,080 Member
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    Carolyn: Claymore, what's that sign up there on the wall?
    Claymore: It means your home can't be demolished.I did research and saved
    money to have the home declared a historical landmark.
    Carolyn: That must have cost a fortune!
    Claymore: ...it wasn't cheap, but happy to do it, wouldn't want to lose a good tenant.
    Carolyn: Thank you!
    Claymore: By the way, I didn't know your sister was moving.
    Carolyn: Yes, she's taking Candy back home, her husband and her worked
    things out.
    Claymore: Hate to see her go, send my regards.

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    Carolyn: Are you feeling alright? you look as if you seen a ghost...
    wait...martha have you seen a ghost?
    Martha: I know this is gonna sound crazy, but I think I have seen a ghost.
    Carolyn: I don't know how to tell you this...
    Martha: What?
    Carolyn: Martha, if you think you've seen a ghost....you've seen a ghost.
    Martha: So I'm not hallucinating or losing my mind.
    Carolyn: No, its the captain, He's been here since we moved in.

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    Candy: Bye Captain!
    Daniel: You're always welcomed about my ship, candy.
    Candy: No feeding Claymore to sharks.
    Daniel: Good idea.

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    Daniel: Martha..It's nice to finally meet you, even for this short
    moment.
    Martha: I'm so confused.

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    Carolyn: It was nice of you to finally greet martha...but don't startle
    her like that, you nearly killed her.
    Daniel: How was I suppose to know she'd faint!
    Carolyn: She was just being dramatic.
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    GraceyManorGraceyManor Posts: 20,080 Member
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    Claymore: Please, can we hurry.
    Its really creepy out here.
    Daniel: Blast it, claymore! stop your sniveling. You weren't my first
    choice for a justice.

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    Claymore: Why, Ms Muir, your dress is beautiful.
    Daniel: Close your mouth, claymore, you are not a cod fish.
    Carolyn: Thank you, Claymore, that is very kind.

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    Daniel: You do look beautiful, my dear.
    Carolyn: Thank you.
    Daniel: Are you sure you want to...
    Carolyn: I'm sure, you don't have to ask.

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    Carolyn: I'm ready if you are.
    DanieL: My dear, I've been ready.

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    It was late afternoon when Daniel and Carolyn spoke their vows.
    The sunset was a spectacular sight, the clouds tinted with pink
    and red, they sailed over the ship, toward the setting sun, the
    rose-colored glow slowly faded from sea and sky.


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    As the moon slowly rose over the calm sea, Daniel was freed
    from his bondage with the sea.

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    "Many stories end with the chance of redemption."

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    "Find the love of a good woman..." It was enough to end
    the curse of the sea.

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    Daniel wasted no time, he rushed to hold his new bride.

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    GraceyManorGraceyManor Posts: 20,080 Member
    DeafSimmer wrote: »
    Yay, they got married! :smile: And the curse is gone. BTW Carolyn was stunning in her wedding dress.

    Aww thanks!
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    Sue_D_NimSue_D_Nim Posts: 2,553 Member
    I'm loving this! The Ghost and Mrs. Muir was one of my favorite TV show and one of my favorite movies. Your screenshots are beautiful.
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    GraceyManorGraceyManor Posts: 20,080 Member
    Sue_D_Nim wrote: »
    I'm loving this! The Ghost and Mrs. Muir was one of my favorite TV show and one of my favorite movies. Your screenshots are beautiful.

    Thanks! I always love the ghost and mrs muir.Thought Daniel was always so charming.
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