Hi everyone, have just posted my first chapter to my first ever attempt at writing a Sim Story. I am enjoying the process of making it but would love some feedback on it.
Joining this thread a little late but who care. All I know i that I haven't been writing much because the past stories I've written have only gotten like...9-18 view depending on the chapter. And it got worse! My stories were buried under random stuff! No offense, I'm all for random. But GOOD random not "HAHAHA i made you click you 🐸🐸🐸🐸! XD" kind of random. That's rude. If anyone would like to read, it's called The Thoughts in my Head, and its about this girl named Rachelle. She's struggling with thee thoughts and these hallucinations and dreams. She falls in love of course, but I'm only on chapter three. Here's a link to my studio if anyone wants to read:
I'm writing a story called 'Secrets under the Sun'. The first chapter went down pretty well, with thirty recs, but, the second chapter doesn't even have five. It seems like people have lost interest, so please read. Clicking the picture in my signature takes you to chapter 1 (:
Wow... it feels like centuries since I have checked in. Okay, it probably has been. But I don't even know when it was that the forums stopped acting wonky. Well, this was a pointless post... Uh congratulations, Swishy on 100 pages!
100 pages! Wow, I have been gone for a while and have a lot of catching up to do !
I also got another chapter of the Parker Legacy out! Better late than never, right?
Comments
I hope it's still going.
I was thanked for this thread, for helping all the writers on here. I'm actually flattered and overjoyed. Thank you for the gift, SimGuruHydra.
Swishy
Nurse, I read your story and commented on your forum!
i've been posting on the secondary thread because i couldn't get to this one.
Glad to see this forum is becoming more accessible!
The link is:
http://www.thesims3.com/contentDetail.html?contentId=190127
Thanks
World of Night:
http://worldofnight.wordpress.com/table-of-contents/
An Explorer's Legacy:
http://adventure11031.wordpress.com/
http://www.thesims3.com/myContents.html?action=default&persona=NekoWolf37
Also can someone help me figure out how to put an edited pic for my title page?
http://forum.thesims3.com/jforum/posts/list/180925.page
Thx ahead of time ^^
Trini's Perfect Life: Carrie's Eyes
http://forum.thesims3.com/jforum/posts/list/60/160115.page#2239927
Star Crossed Lovers Part Three.
Part Four will be up next weekend-I got Spring Cleaning this weekend-weee
3.1 A Rotten Legacy
This is when Gen. 3 takes over so it's pretty exciting. ^_^
In other news...
Chapter 8 of "the Roads Not Taken" is out, and I'm planning to go on a super updating spree soon to catch up with my game play.
I can never get on this thread either!! Love the updates everyone, keep up the fantastic stories!
http://simful.webs.com/apps/blog/show/3409153-chapter-9-redo-it-all
And for anyone interested in starting to read my Legacy, the Table of Contents!
http://simful.webs.com/chapters.htm
YAY!! 100 Pages!!
I also got another chapter of the Parker Legacy out! Better late than never, right?
Gen. 1, Ch.7: http://www.thesims3.com/contentDetail.html?contentId=196548
Prologue, Chapter1~Generation Vanilla
Trini's Perfect Life Ch. 8: Peppermint
http://www.thesims3.com/contentDetail.html?contentId=197176
I hope you'll check out my story, I know my first chapter is looooong but my fingers are crossed that you will enjoy it.
The Clarke Legacy G.1 C.1 - Are You Serious?!
If you don't want to leave comments on the blog, please leave them on the forum post I've just set up, I only want to improve upon what I've written.
Thank you!!
http://simful.webs.com/apps/blog/show/3441973-chapter-11-family-is-a