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    WitcHazardWitcHazard Posts: 1,209 Member
    Well I should read other comments but I'm to lazy to go through all those pages! :p But with this happening that means Anti Shippers plan of having Zayne get with his sexy business partner has gotten a little more believable hm ;)
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    pammiechickpammiechick Posts: 12,262 Member
    Part one is happening. Break up.

    Part 2--date losers

    Part 3-- a restaurant opportunity opens in SM for Zayne as he expands his restaurant line. Meets up with Hope.

    Part 4--get married. Have nooboos.

    Part 5 --happiness

    Now you can laugh because that's not how will go down at all. :D
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    anaitapevaanaitapeva Posts: 917 Member
    - is dead/broken hearted - :'(
    Now your only option is dive deeply into your work, Zayne! No excuses for you to hold on to! Don't disappoint me. :)
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    CitizenErased14CitizenErased14 Posts: 12,187 Member
    Hahahaha @pammiechick the future is very much wide open at this point, so those predictions are definitely possible. Time will tell!

    @anaitapeva Yeah, this one hurts a lot :'( (even more than Mark and Joce, for me. This is the hardest breakup I've ever had to write!). I'm glad you have faith in Zayne though! :smiley:
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    orangeplumboborangeplumbob Posts: 1,102 Member

    I have no words, just gifs to get me through this pain.

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    CitizenErased14CitizenErased14 Posts: 12,187 Member
    Forgive me, @orangeplumbob :'( (I enjoyed your gifs though :joy:)
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    orangeplumboborangeplumbob Posts: 1,102 Member
    @CitizenErased14 First Mark and Joce, then Lucas and Evelyn, and now Zayne and Hope...

    @pammiechick for the love of all my Ships, don't sink Winston today. I don't think I could handle three sunk ships in one day.
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    ForgottenPixelsForgottenPixels Posts: 11,376 Member
    I think we all saw the breakup coming, just some of us were clinging on to the tiny slither of hope it wouldn't. :) I'm in the middle. I knew it was coming but I thought it would have been another chapter before they actually broke up.
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    AudreyFldAudreyFld Posts: 6,695 Member
    I have no words, just gifs to get me through this pain.

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    Exactly!!!!
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    pammiechickpammiechick Posts: 12,262 Member
    @CitizenErased14 First Mark and Joce, then Lucas and Evelyn, and now Zayne and Hope...

    @pammiechick for the love of all my Ships, don't sink Winston today. I don't think I could handle three sunk ships in one day.

    Wintson is safe...for now. >:)
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    rednenemonrednenemon Posts: 3,206 Member
    @orangeplumbob

    If it's any consolation, Mark and Joce did get back together in the end, and even kind of sort of married. (I'm still unclear on their marital status after that one Interlude with Chuck and Ben's wedding)

    Personally, I think it's just easier to consider the two of them properly married, legal documents be 🐸🐸🐸🐸.
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    CitizenErased14CitizenErased14 Posts: 12,187 Member
    Writing/screenshotting a chapter hasn't hit me this hard in a while...

    Interlude: Goodbye
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    ForgottenPixelsForgottenPixels Posts: 11,376 Member

    Bad decision, Hope and Zayne. :#
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    CitizenErased14CitizenErased14 Posts: 12,187 Member
    Bugsie2016 wrote: »
    Bad decision, Hope and Zayne. :#

    Haha @Bugsie2016 I think it was actually good for them, in the long run. It gave their relationship closure. :) But I can also understand the opposite perspective!
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    anaitapevaanaitapeva Posts: 917 Member
    It was a sad but needed chapter. :'(
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    WitcHazardWitcHazard Posts: 1,209 Member
    Anti Shipper looks in the mirror!

    Anti Shipper: No matter what anybody says you're still a winner! (cautiously looks around)

    Anti Shipper: Vic-to-ry! Vic-to-ry! Vic-to-ry! Vic-to-ry! VICTORY!!!!

    Shipper: No self uplifting pep talks in the mirror either!

    Anti Shipper: Now you're just being cruel!
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    kayt45kayt45 Posts: 434 Member
    Aw, that was a horrible decision. But ya know, I have the feeling that the horrible decision might be the catalyst for a reunion. Maybe in about 9 months.
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    CitizenErased14CitizenErased14 Posts: 12,187 Member
    Thanks @anaitapeva ! I agree -- very sad, but also needed! It was very painful to write :(

    @WitcHazard tell Anti to stop rubbing it in :tongue:

    @kayt45 Haha I can see why it seems like a horrible idea (especially if that prediction of yours comes true!) But I think they both needed that closure... So overall I think it was actually good for them!
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    peatockpeatock Posts: 139 Member
    i figured i'd pop over here to lurk instead of always chattering in the writer's lounge about this, haha. :blush: don't mind me! i'll just be keeping my eye on this and (hopefully) catching up someday.
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    CitizenErased14CitizenErased14 Posts: 12,187 Member
    Hahaha thanks @peatock ! Take your time! :blush: There's a LOT of story to catch up on... But thankfully my chapters tend to be pretty short :)
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    cecerose0208cecerose0208 Posts: 1,521 Member
    Loved this chapter! And the comments! Which I'm sure you can tell since I was liking and replying to half the comments from your readers, lol.
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    peatockpeatock Posts: 139 Member
    Hahaha thanks @peatock ! Take your time! :blush: There's a LOT of story to catch up on... But thankfully my chapters tend to be pretty short :)

    i'm so excited! :star: once i finish my current job i'll probably have more time to sit down and read, i can't wait. (let's all pray that's this week, lol)
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    SeaDragonSongSeaDragonSong Posts: 2,324 Member
    This was a very sad chapter! Hopefully they grow up a bit, both of them.
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    AudreyFldAudreyFld Posts: 6,695 Member
    I have a song for them should they EVER get back together. Billy Joel's Honesty!

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    CitizenErased14CitizenErased14 Posts: 12,187 Member
    @cecerose0208 I LOVE that you're so interactive with the other commenters. :heart: Thank you!

    @SeaDragonSong I hope they grow up too! Time will tell...

    Thanks for sharing that song @AudreyFld ! Honesty was definitely something they lacked... :(
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