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    The Life of the Cartiers - A Comic Story

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    VonTickleburgVonTickleburg Posts: 90 Member
    edited September 2014 in The Sims 4 Challenges, Stories and Legacies
    Hi Everyone. I've never done anything like this before, but since I love the art style of The Sims 4 so much, I decided to make a story to go along with it. I'm new so if anyone has comments, please feel free to tell me! With that, I'll be posting the introductory pictures first. (just two to start with).

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      RachelRosebudRachelRosebud Posts: 1,103 Member
      edited September 2014
      Your pictures look absolutely beautiful! I like the style you chose for the comic, but the writing seems a little small and hard to read compared to the gigantic picture. Is it possible to make it bigger but the bubble more transparent? (if you don't want to lose space - just wondering, either way it's really lovely). Can't wait to read more - the comic idea in general is very awesome! Keep going! Also did you build that house? If so, it's gorgeous - I *love* modern builds. Great job. :)
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      MadScientis7MadScientis7 Posts: 135 Member
      I like the start so far and the home is beautiful. Good job.
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      altad1altad1 Posts: 1,091 Member
      Hey beautiful home, and I love your comic book style. Looking forward to seeing more.
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      DrukiDruki Posts: 163 Member
      I love that house! Your pictures are amazing!!
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      texasangeltexasangel Posts: 160 Member
      the house is great! and I love all the gnomes :)
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      Nicarra60Nicarra60 Posts: 2,916 Member
      Can I just agree that the text is too tiny compared to the lovely huge pic? It's hard to see.
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      xcheekyangelxxcheekyangelx Posts: 289 Member
      Love it!
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      VonTickleburgVonTickleburg Posts: 90 Member
      edited September 2014
      Okay guys, I can't really change the size of the font, so I tried a different font, hopefully it will be easier to read.

      In this episode, Veronique goes to Magnolia Blossom Park in Willow Creek for a jog. There she meets someone.

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      xcheekyangelxxcheekyangelx Posts: 289 Member
      The text is definitely more readable now :)
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      RaeNicRaeNic Posts: 767 Member
      I agree, the text is much better. :) And I also love that you use speech bubbles. First time I've seen it done on here. It 's such a great idea and fits perfectly with your pictures. Loving it so far!
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      VonTickleburgVonTickleburg Posts: 90 Member
      edited September 2014
      RaeNic wrote: »
      I agree, the text is much better. :) And I also love that you use speech bubbles. First time I've seen it done on here. It 's such a great idea and fits perfectly with your pictures. Loving it so far!

      Thanks! I'm glad you guys like it. I will upload more later when I have the time to make them. And I really like the speech bubbles as well, I feel that they fit in really well with the art style of the game. As why I am doing this :)
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      xcheekyangelxxcheekyangelx Posts: 289 Member
      Looking forward to it!
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      gypsy54gypsy54 Posts: 484 Member
      Looking good so far. I love the house and I agree the thought bubbles really suits the style. I am looking forward to seeing more :)
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      VonTickleburgVonTickleburg Posts: 90 Member
      edited September 2014
      Caspar starts of with a joke. No prizes for guessing what type of joke it is!

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      RachelRosebudRachelRosebud Posts: 1,103 Member
      I love the speech bubbles and can read it nicely now. Great job and it's looks like a lot of fun making a story this way! Can't wait to see their romance blossom. :)
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      VonTickleburgVonTickleburg Posts: 90 Member
      edited September 2014
      Hi guys. I am back with more!

      Caspar decided to make his move. Did he get what he want? check out below!

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      RachelRosebudRachelRosebud Posts: 1,103 Member
      Great update! Will be fun to see what happens next, your pictures are beautiful. I'm totally in love with the comic book style.
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      VonTickleburgVonTickleburg Posts: 90 Member
      edited September 2014
      Hey guys, I am back with more! I hope you guys will like it! :#

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      SharonjoaneSharonjoane Posts: 8 New Member
      Amazing pictures and home! But some pictures don't work, they give an 'this image or video is currently unavailable' message from flickr.
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      VonTickleburgVonTickleburg Posts: 90 Member
      Sharonjoane wrote: »
      Amazing pictures and home! But some pictures don't work, they give an 'this image or video is currently unavailable' message from flickr.

      Thanks for the feedback. I've changed some settings. Please let me know if you are still seeing it.
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      RachelRosebudRachelRosebud Posts: 1,103 Member
      Great update! I love the one where she is cooking, you can almost hear the pan sizzling!
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      SharonjoaneSharonjoane Posts: 8 New Member
      edited September 2014
      @VonTickleburg most pictures work fine now thanks! Only in your fourth post I still see the picture error, the one that starts with:
      "Hi guys. I am back with more!
      Caspar decided to make his move. Did he get what he want? check out below!"

      But love your story, excited for more!
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      PurplesandbucketPurplesandbucket Posts: 576 Member
      Wow your pictures are so clean and bright! I love this story so far :)
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      VonTickleburgVonTickleburg Posts: 90 Member
      Sharonjoane wrote: »
      @VonTickleburg most pictures work fine now thanks! Only in your fourth post I still see the picture error, the one that starts with: <br />


      Hi! Thanks I think I got everything now. If you still see the error, try refreshing your page, it might solve it! :) I'm am glad you guys are enjoying this! Gives me motivation to make more!
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      altad1altad1 Posts: 1,091 Member
      I'm loving the updates, so I have it bookmarked so I don't miss any, your pictures are lovely quality and the text is easy to read.
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