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Where is My Life? A Prettacy and ISBI Challenge
15MagPies
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Meet Vienna DeMarco. She's a dramatic, charismatic, snobby, diva with commitment issues.
Once a celebrity who took advantage of the insecurities in young girls, she was cursed to wake up in an unfamiliar town. She lost all of her money, fame, and good looks, and now has to start life over. If she's able to start a family who eventually produces an heir as pretty and rich as she once was, she will receive a chance to have her life back.
I've decided to start this prettacy to play over the summer. The fact that I'm morphing it with the rules of an I'm Surrounded by Idiots challenge is because I've been wanting to try out both of these challenges for awhile. Well, that and I usually only control my main sim anyways.
If anyone wants to check this out (and I hope you do), the blog can be found here.
Oh and for rules I'm using the basic legacy ones without scoring. That's in addition to the rule that I will only be controlling the current heir. I've decided to let myself control every non-heir I see fit with one action (probably to get jobs or move out.)
I'm not super good to being strict to the regular legacy rules, so I may accidentally break one every now and then.
And I may or may not include a pose here or there for story telling purposes.
Geeze this is a long post! Sorry about that and thanks for checking this out!
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A curse to Kick Things off
Waking up
Escaping Heat
Snow Cones
Step One
Having to Work
Miss Pretty
Step Two
Sundries and Elixirs
Step Three
Scrambling for Simoleons
What Maternal Instincts?
Back to Work
Aging
Midlife Crisis
The Hunt
Not Quite What the Witch had in Mind
Waiting
Mother and Daughter
Ditching Duties
Delusions, Chess, and a Toddler
A Quite Busy Night
Bed Problems
Break-ins and Birthdays
One Last Snow Cone
Second Generation
Mother Issues
First Term
Between Terms and Second Term
A Break
Final Term
Home Life
Love Life
Last Chance
Doubling
Sweet and Spicy
Death on Love Day
In No Need of Grieving
And Then in Swooped the Madness
A Solution to a Dilemma
Subtraction and Addition
Yes, this is entirely about an Expansion
Milton and Lois
Francis and Frederick and Compiling Reports
Sleep
The Future of the Curse
Children
The Shower and the Repairman
It really was Risky
Changes
A Party that is not a Funeral
Spare Time Hobbies
The Final Birthday
Reaching the Top
Dates and Birthdays
Life Fulfilled
Third Generation
Francis' Intro
Ambitious Heir
Scheming
When Planning a Party
Boyfriends
Moving Things Along
A Wholesome Family Bachelor Party
The Wedding
Francis' Fortress
Curious: Finch's Chapter
Losing the Battle
Changes
Sudden Babies
Decisions
Toddlers are Annoying
Claude's Infatuation
Date Days
A Party for Some
The Family
Thinking and Not Thinking
An Answer
Fourth Generation
Jellybean
Father Daughter Time
Claude's Party
Candle Time
Prom
The Family Band in and out of Practice
Things to Do
Not Home
What to do about Jellybean
An Old Potion
A Stylist and a Maid
Duties
Mother Kisser
Respect
Also, next part up.
Another part added. Now I'm all caught up with my gameplay!
Trying out a certain profession for the first time. It's quite fun. I wished I'd played with it earlier.
MissCee
wow just wow :shock: I read every bit and you have captured my attention completely :P and being a writer myself I find this very remarkable to say the least ...I just noticed that your avi is the one cast the spell and now I feel like I am talking to a celeb. :thumbup: man oh man I am captivated and sitting on the edge of my seat...I love your style of writing and your timing ..
when you cut off one chapter to go to the next and that's takes skill some ppl write pages and pages before going to the next but your timing is brilliant therefore not boring us at all you keep us excited and anxiously awaiting to read the next ...this story so far to me is bitter sweet because the attitude of her before was of a snot very selfish,nasty and stuck up I am so glad she got cursed...a start in making her a bit humble about life and the ppl around her as before she felt the world revolved around her and everyone around her was like trash at the bottom of her shoe a spoil brat whom is very beautiful on the outside but was very ugly and, heartless , cold and evil within....
However now that she has turned into this "less attractive" person I'm beginning to feel sad and bad for her I'm starting to actually like her even though it's bitter sweet however I'm still not sold~~> is it genuine? or if she's being this way because she has no other choice and just "playing the game" sort of speak...I can't wait to see what happens...
now that she met a nice female that shows she's a bit caring..a doctor at the science lab that seems to want to help her but I don't know about this doctor real intent... like most science researchers ~~~> looking at this as someone to use as a Ginnie pig to try out multiple scientific experiments...but I do feel the lady at the house is friendly and real about helping her if their paths ever crossed again...I was happy when the guy in the barn chewed her out and picked on her because that's how she treated people in the past and a taste of her ignorance was on point.... so far I give this story a "B" because I know it's lots more to know and figure out but I will say earning a "B" this early into the story is very impressive!!
MissCee- I never thought I’d say (or type) these words, but I’m glad to have made you an addict! Haha! Thank you for taking the time to read my story and brighten my day.
Brsy- Your critic’s review made me feel so fancy. I’m glad that you mentioned my chapter breaks being okay. I’ve been a little afraid I’ve been making them too short, maybe annoying people with my quick updates. I don’t like to combine too many things, and I have a little puppy running around to distract me, so short they must stay.
I’ve been kinda winging the story on the fly (I’m having too much fun playing the game to spend much time thinking ahead), but I have a feeling that Miss Vienna will not be having many fans. Her traits make her a tough person to like. Ha, the townies sure do not seem to want to have anything to do with her.
I will happily take a B. Thank you for the extensive review!
AEventyr- I never thought of Beauty and the Beast. That’s pretty cool! I should pull it off as if I meant that all along, haha. Just kidding. I have always wanted to rework a fairytale though, so I guess I can cross it off my bucket list. Thank you for reading this and leaving a comment!
I’m still pretty blown away by the positive responses I’ve gotten. I’ve always loved to write for fun, so it’s cool to have people actually read something I’ve made, instead of it just sitting in a notebook in a drawer in a dresser in a closet.
Also, another part added. This one is super short, because I'm tired (haha I have no great excuse).
Even though the outside of her changed drastically her mind is still "Vienna DeMarco" I am so pleased the guy didn't look back "at that point" because she needed a reality check ..she's so use to getting things on first try or when she wants it ...in the real world you get things when someone else feels like they are ready to give it to u....who's the idiot now? ...Hmmm I guess he wasn't such an idiot after all
Which reminds me, a new part has been posted. It's my last day off work for the week, and it's raining buckets out, so why not enjoy some sim time?
New part up.
Can't wait for her to get even older though. I'm excited for the ISBI part of this challenge.
Another one