Congratulations to HannahJayneBebs and ArtistByNight
NiNjahawkz was unable to score this round so scores were helpfully and thankfully provided by Sparkleberrystar. Thanks Sparkle! (again)
1st Place
198/200 - 99%
Creativity: 8/10
Relevance: 10/10
Model's Appearance: 15/15
Pose: 15/15
Follows Rules: 10/10
Picture Quality: 10/10
Presentation: 9/10
Setting: 15/15
WOW Factor: 5/5
TOTAL: (97 + 2) 99/100
Comments: I really love what you did with your model. You brought out an adorable setting, clothes, pose, everything and still kept it pin-up model sexy! The smirk was excellent and gave her the edge she needed. I think you may have gotten a bit heavy with the skin lighting around the chest and a bit on the face but your quality is spotless! The small thing I noticed besides that was the way your models arms went through the dress. Just a silly wardrobe malfunction but excellent work. I also love that you went as far as to change your model’s eye colour for this assignment!
creativity 10/10
relevance 10/10
model's appearance 10/10
pose 14/15
follows rules 10/10
picture quality 10/10
presentation 10/10
setting 15/15
wow factor 5/5
total 99/100
This is such a pretty picture! I think your represent pink/cute nicely while still keeping in mind that the competiton is about pinup. I like her pose but her arms underneath are a little bit awkward looking. All the small touches are nice and I like her intense stare. Good Job!
2nd Place
184/200 - 92%
Creativity: 10/10
Relevance: 10/10
Model's Appearance: 15/15
Pose: 15/15
Follows Rules: 10/10
Picture Quality: 7/10
Presentation: 8/10
Setting: 12/15
WOW Factor: 4/5
TOTAL: 91/100
Comments: Being the only male model, pink was not the manly colour I expected from you and did you ever make it work. You managed to keep the pin up theme in your model perfectly here! I don’t quite like the position of the flower pot though, as it takes quite a bit of attention from your model. I also feel that the walls were a bit heavy with the brown and just threw the shot off a bit. The couch was perfect and I’m wondering where you got it! Its silver frame is gorgeous and worked very well. Excellent job!
TetroFreak73
creativity 10/10
relevance 10/10
model's appearance 10/10
pose 15/15
follows rules 10/10
picture quality 10/10
presentation 9/10
setting 14/15
wow factor 5/5
total 93/100
I really like the idea of your color and I think that the model's outfit and pose fit your concept perfectly. However, you chose to use pink and the colors are more purple than pink looking to me. Overall great job!
3rd Place
180/200 - 90%
Creativity: 4/10
Relevance: 10/10
Model's Appearance: 15/15
Pose: 15/15
Follows Rules: 10/10
Picture Quality: 9/10
Presentation: 10/10
Setting: 15/15
WOW Factor: 5/5
TOTAL: 93/100
Comments: You did an excellent job with this assignment! My only real concern in your entry was the lacking creativity in your colour and emotion as both were included in the example. I did however enjoy the twist you put into it and how you gave it your own gothic and sexier edge. As always your model’s outfit and pose was spot on! Great work!
gymmonkey007
creativity 10/10
relevance 10/10
model's appearance 8/10
pose 13/15
follows rules 10/10
picture quality 9/10
presentation 10/10
setting 13/15
wow factor 4/5
total 87/100
I like the idea of using red for lust and I also like that your picture has both red and black in it. I think the pose is a little awkward from this angle and her skin could have used a little bit of smoothing. The background is really dark except for the picture frames which I think the picture would have been better without. Also her teeth look a little strange.
4th Place
167.5/200 - 84%
Creativity: 10/10
Relevance: 10/10
Model's Appearance: 10/15
Pose: 10/15
Follows Rules: 10/10
Picture Quality: 6/10
Presentation: 6.5/10
Setting: 11/15
WOW Factor: 3/5
TOTAL: (76.5 + 5) 81.5/100
Comments: Congratulations on Viewer’s Choice! Very well deserved! Your model looks excellent and I like her outfit though I feel you could have made it more along the pin-up lines, it still worked very well for the shot. Excellent use of poseplayer and the pose looks good however, it distorted her dress a bit (some poses have a nasty habit of doing that…) and the facial expression seemed a tad blank. I would have loved to see some fierce, dominant fire in those eyes. One concern I had was this was that I had to look at your tag to tell the colour you used. At first I thought grey and then silver and then I wondered if it may be brown. The black did not stand out as much as I would have liked to see. You did pick a very creative colour though, as this was the last emotion and colour I expected to see. Youre setting worked well but seemed to hold a lot of space which could have been fixed by zooming in on the model a bit, that also would have given a clearer shot of her and put more focus on her. Excellent entry and beautiful work!
creativity 10/10
relevance 10/10
model's appearance 8/10
pose15 /15
follows rules 10/10
picture quality 9/10
presentation 7/10
setting 13/15
wow factor 4/5
total 86/100
I thought you showed off dominant perfectly with your pose and model's expression however her outift could have been a bit more eyecatching. I also think it would have been better zoomed in a little bit more because of the simple background, we don't need to see the whole wall. Nice picture!
5th Place
140.5/200 - 70%
Creativity: 5.5/10
Relevance: 8/10
Model's Appearance: 13/15
Pose: 11/15
Follows Rules: 10/10
Picture Quality: 7/10
Presentation: 5/10
Setting: 6/15
WOW Factor: 2/5
TOTAL: 67.5/100
Comments: your model looked excellent. I really enjoy your choice of dress and it works well with the pin-up theme. Since red was one of the suggested colour I unfortunately docked you a few marks in creativity. Though I enjoy how you took a different route in the emotion. I wish you hadn’t have cut off your model’s head though. The background was a little simple and I wish you would have done a bit more with it. The angle could have been improved a bit by playing around with the options from the Tab button. Also, upping your in-game quality can be helpful for modelling comps (You can always turn it back down for in game play) this was an incredible entry though. Great work!
creativity 8/10
relevance 10/10
model's appearance 7/10
pose 15/15
follows rules 10/10
picture quality 8/10
presentation 7/10
setting 10/15
wow factor 3/5
total 73/100
This picture makes me think of anger when I see it and your model's pose and expression represent that niceley. The background is very plain and her head and toes are cut off!
ELIMINATED: 6th Place
132/200 - 66%
Creativity: 8/10
Relevance: 8/10
Model's Appearance: 12/15
Pose: 11/15
Follows Rules: 10/10
Picture Quality: 6/10
Presentation: 4/10
Setting: 10/15
WOW Factor: 3/5
TOTAL: 72/100
Comments: I absolutely adore this entry! You really stepped up this round and your model looks good. The hair and makeup is very pin-up-esque and your colour choice was spot on. I wish that you would have taken more with the outfit though. The long dress is beautiful but doesn’t scream pin-up model for me. Also, although the pose is lovely, it didn’t give me the feeling of loyalty, instead I thought of sadness or loneliness (both “blue” moods too though not the one you were going for) The setting could have been a tad more dynamic and the couch seems to stand out a lot but I really love those little butterflies on the wall! Your graphics also seemed to improve which is great! One thing I noticed in the mirror though is the lack of a set up (got to watch those tiny details.) And your model’s face is hidden a tad more than I would have liked. All in all an outstanding entry this round though.
creativity 8/10
relevance 6/10
model's appearance 5/10
pose 7/15
follows rules 10/10
picture quality 6/10
presentation 5/10
setting 10/15
wow factor 3/5
total 60/100
I thought that it was a good idea for your to use blue to represent loyalty but I thought the set was very plain. Also, it's a little bit too glowy. She dosen't really look loyal, more depressed and maybe crying. There is also some fuzziness around her arms. I am in love with her hairstyle though and her makeup is very pretty!
"All of you have all come such a long way and the enthusiasm in this assignment was mind blowing! Excellent work everyone! Unfortunately, as this is an elimination competition, we must say goodbye to reby18. You have come far in your assignments and I hope to see you around the forums more and more! Thank you so much for all that you brought to this cycle of DOWN with DRAB!"
Lol artist and I are still tied for peoples choice xD
when I checked like 15 minutes ago before collaborating all the scores it showed artist in the lead. So she was awarded viewer's choice. Last minute voters are making this democracy impossibru!
Accidentally deleted the save my model was in. :oops: But, thankfully, I have another version of her stowed away. Just a heads up in case she looks a bit in comparison to her normal self, but there shouldn't be that much wrong.
:shock: 4/5 entries. Wow! Amazing everyone! I'll update the front ASAP
Just a heads up. The light on my laptop is busted so I have to send it to be fixed. I may be MIA for like 5 days or more after that. I'll check in on my phone and such but I will be haulted as far as assignments/scoring goes... Might be able to convince my bf to let me on his laptop and put some assignments on a USB but I doubt it...
Comments
NiNjahawkz was unable to score this round so scores were helpfully and thankfully provided by Sparkleberrystar. Thanks Sparkle! (again)
1st Place
198/200 - 99%
Creativity: 8/10
Relevance: 10/10
Model's Appearance: 15/15
Pose: 15/15
Follows Rules: 10/10
Picture Quality: 10/10
Presentation: 9/10
Setting: 15/15
WOW Factor: 5/5
TOTAL: (97 + 2) 99/100
Comments: I really love what you did with your model. You brought out an adorable setting, clothes, pose, everything and still kept it pin-up model sexy! The smirk was excellent and gave her the edge she needed. I think you may have gotten a bit heavy with the skin lighting around the chest and a bit on the face but your quality is spotless! The small thing I noticed besides that was the way your models arms went through the dress. Just a silly wardrobe malfunction but excellent work. I also love that you went as far as to change your model’s eye colour for this assignment!
creativity 10/10
relevance 10/10
model's appearance 10/10
pose 14/15
follows rules 10/10
picture quality 10/10
presentation 10/10
setting 15/15
wow factor 5/5
total 99/100
This is such a pretty picture! I think your represent pink/cute nicely while still keeping in mind that the competiton is about pinup. I like her pose but her arms underneath are a little bit awkward looking. All the small touches are nice and I like her intense stare. Good Job!
2nd Place
184/200 - 92%
Creativity: 10/10
Relevance: 10/10
Model's Appearance: 15/15
Pose: 15/15
Follows Rules: 10/10
Picture Quality: 7/10
Presentation: 8/10
Setting: 12/15
WOW Factor: 4/5
TOTAL: 91/100
Comments: Being the only male model, pink was not the manly colour I expected from you and did you ever make it work. You managed to keep the pin up theme in your model perfectly here! I don’t quite like the position of the flower pot though, as it takes quite a bit of attention from your model. I also feel that the walls were a bit heavy with the brown and just threw the shot off a bit. The couch was perfect and I’m wondering where you got it! Its silver frame is gorgeous and worked very well. Excellent job!
TetroFreak73
creativity 10/10
relevance 10/10
model's appearance 10/10
pose 15/15
follows rules 10/10
picture quality 10/10
presentation 9/10
setting 14/15
wow factor 5/5
total 93/100
I really like the idea of your color and I think that the model's outfit and pose fit your concept perfectly. However, you chose to use pink and the colors are more purple than pink looking to me. Overall great job!
3rd Place
180/200 - 90%
Creativity: 4/10
Relevance: 10/10
Model's Appearance: 15/15
Pose: 15/15
Follows Rules: 10/10
Picture Quality: 9/10
Presentation: 10/10
Setting: 15/15
WOW Factor: 5/5
TOTAL: 93/100
Comments: You did an excellent job with this assignment! My only real concern in your entry was the lacking creativity in your colour and emotion as both were included in the example. I did however enjoy the twist you put into it and how you gave it your own gothic and sexier edge. As always your model’s outfit and pose was spot on! Great work!
gymmonkey007
creativity 10/10
relevance 10/10
model's appearance 8/10
pose 13/15
follows rules 10/10
picture quality 9/10
presentation 10/10
setting 13/15
wow factor 4/5
total 87/100
I like the idea of using red for lust and I also like that your picture has both red and black in it. I think the pose is a little awkward from this angle and her skin could have used a little bit of smoothing. The background is really dark except for the picture frames which I think the picture would have been better without. Also her teeth look a little strange.
4th Place
167.5/200 - 84%
Creativity: 10/10
Relevance: 10/10
Model's Appearance: 10/15
Pose: 10/15
Follows Rules: 10/10
Picture Quality: 6/10
Presentation: 6.5/10
Setting: 11/15
WOW Factor: 3/5
TOTAL: (76.5 + 5) 81.5/100
Comments: Congratulations on Viewer’s Choice! Very well deserved! Your model looks excellent and I like her outfit though I feel you could have made it more along the pin-up lines, it still worked very well for the shot. Excellent use of poseplayer and the pose looks good however, it distorted her dress a bit (some poses have a nasty habit of doing that…) and the facial expression seemed a tad blank. I would have loved to see some fierce, dominant fire in those eyes. One concern I had was this was that I had to look at your tag to tell the colour you used. At first I thought grey and then silver and then I wondered if it may be brown. The black did not stand out as much as I would have liked to see. You did pick a very creative colour though, as this was the last emotion and colour I expected to see. Youre setting worked well but seemed to hold a lot of space which could have been fixed by zooming in on the model a bit, that also would have given a clearer shot of her and put more focus on her. Excellent entry and beautiful work!
creativity 10/10
relevance 10/10
model's appearance 8/10
pose15 /15
follows rules 10/10
picture quality 9/10
presentation 7/10
setting 13/15
wow factor 4/5
total 86/100
I thought you showed off dominant perfectly with your pose and model's expression however her outift could have been a bit more eyecatching. I also think it would have been better zoomed in a little bit more because of the simple background, we don't need to see the whole wall. Nice picture!
5th Place
140.5/200 - 70%
Creativity: 5.5/10
Relevance: 8/10
Model's Appearance: 13/15
Pose: 11/15
Follows Rules: 10/10
Picture Quality: 7/10
Presentation: 5/10
Setting: 6/15
WOW Factor: 2/5
TOTAL: 67.5/100
Comments: your model looked excellent. I really enjoy your choice of dress and it works well with the pin-up theme. Since red was one of the suggested colour I unfortunately docked you a few marks in creativity. Though I enjoy how you took a different route in the emotion. I wish you hadn’t have cut off your model’s head though. The background was a little simple and I wish you would have done a bit more with it. The angle could have been improved a bit by playing around with the options from the Tab button. Also, upping your in-game quality can be helpful for modelling comps (You can always turn it back down for in game play) this was an incredible entry though. Great work!
creativity 8/10
relevance 10/10
model's appearance 7/10
pose 15/15
follows rules 10/10
picture quality 8/10
presentation 7/10
setting 10/15
wow factor 3/5
total 73/100
This picture makes me think of anger when I see it and your model's pose and expression represent that niceley. The background is very plain and her head and toes are cut off!
ELIMINATED: 6th Place
132/200 - 66%
Creativity: 8/10
Relevance: 8/10
Model's Appearance: 12/15
Pose: 11/15
Follows Rules: 10/10
Picture Quality: 6/10
Presentation: 4/10
Setting: 10/15
WOW Factor: 3/5
TOTAL: 72/100
Comments: I absolutely adore this entry! You really stepped up this round and your model looks good. The hair and makeup is very pin-up-esque and your colour choice was spot on. I wish that you would have taken more with the outfit though. The long dress is beautiful but doesn’t scream pin-up model for me. Also, although the pose is lovely, it didn’t give me the feeling of loyalty, instead I thought of sadness or loneliness (both “blue” moods too though not the one you were going for) The setting could have been a tad more dynamic and the couch seems to stand out a lot but I really love those little butterflies on the wall! Your graphics also seemed to improve which is great! One thing I noticed in the mirror though is the lack of a set up (got to watch those tiny details.) And your model’s face is hidden a tad more than I would have liked. All in all an outstanding entry this round though.
creativity 8/10
relevance 6/10
model's appearance 5/10
pose 7/15
follows rules 10/10
picture quality 6/10
presentation 5/10
setting 10/15
wow factor 3/5
total 60/100
I thought that it was a good idea for your to use blue to represent loyalty but I thought the set was very plain. Also, it's a little bit too glowy. She dosen't really look loyal, more depressed and maybe crying. There is also some fuzziness around her arms. I am in love with her hairstyle though and her makeup is very pretty!
"All of you have all come such a long way and the enthusiasm in this assignment was mind blowing! Excellent work everyone! Unfortunately, as this is an elimination competition, we must say goodbye to reby18. You have come far in your assignments and I hope to see you around the forums more and more! Thank you so much for all that you brought to this cycle of DOWN with DRAB!"
Example 1: Frog
Example 2: Tiger
DUE: Tuesday, April 9, 2013 - 11:59pm (EST)
SEEN IT!!! and I totally know what im gonna do!(:
Can't wait to see
Me and Pose Player are going to become enemies very soon, sad to see you go Reby
Jaguar in a tropical setting
Please judge fullsize! http://i1288.photobucket.com/albums/b497/fluffyfannie7/dwd4_zps0be8b77d.png
DO YOU REALISE HOW IRRITATING IT IS TO TAKE A PIC FROM THIS HEIGHT!? XD
Every time the camera went berserk I cursed with rage. o.e
Zebra in some sort of African Jungle, by "some sort", more like failed. I'm so awful at settings
OMG BEBS THAT'S AMAZING
I like the looks of everyone else's... All the patterns on the clothes are so pretty. xD
Just a heads up. The light on my laptop is busted so I have to send it to be fixed. I may be MIA for like 5 days or more after that. I'll check in on my phone and such but I will be haulted as far as assignments/scoring goes... Might be able to convince my bf to let me on his laptop and put some assignments on a USB but I doubt it...
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<a href="http://poll.pollcode.com/l31zl">Which Was Your Favourite Assignment 4 Entry?</a>
Your in first for favorite though (well deserved btw)! I'm the one that doesn't have any votes xD
Whut. :')