Ethan is cute. I like the mix of genetics on him. I think I'm a sucker for blue eyed sims.
So... will poor Ethan get involved with the evil Goths too when he's older? I want my drama!
I really like the way he turned out too! I've started noticing he gets these expressions on his face that are so Graham. He may end up with Graham's smile, which would be great. I still don't know how he turns out yet.
Hm..... Well, I will tell you the title of the next chapter is "Some Dude" if that helps. As for more than that, I'm still debating what trick I'm going to pull out of my hat.
Drama? You want drama? Graham is about to turn over a whole mess of a can of worms.
Oh my gosh, I loved this chapter and Graham's insight into Alex's thinking. And Mortimer's crime ring... I have a feeling it won't go down as planned. I want to read more! Preferably yesterday already! I also like the first picture with Graham sitting on the bed.
I'm thrilled you love it! Graham can understand Alex's feelings because he's felt them. He wishes he could go with them, but he has to put it in other people's hands. He will, however, get a small piece of vicarious revenge, though. I have two more chapters written, so they should come out a few days between at a time.
That pic of Graham was sheer luck. He was in the middle of something, and I caught that moment with him looking down. Strange even for me to only have two pics in a chapter.
LMBO!
Yeah, I realized that as I was shooting it. It looks like the creepy man at the playground thing. That wasn't my intent! But that's how it came out.
Off about Alex? Well, he IS freaking out about something yet trying to keep his cool without losing it.
The mustache is here to stay. :P hehe
I think of it as the baby version of the one his father touts.
This generation has started driving me crazy! There isn't enough happening for my taste. I've got a few things left to do in order to set up gen 2, though. Oh, and speaking of... Ethan turns out a total babe:
To me, he's like a cross between Graham and Brielle's father.
It wasn't too bleh. I like the name Emily. Looking forward to next two non-bleh chapters. And I'm curious as to what you have planned for the next generation.
It started feeling more commentary-style than story-style if ykwim. Usually, I see a pic, hear the story, keep writing the dialogue, find another pic that works, write more, scene. begin again. etc. The fact that it wasn't happening for those chapters drove me nuts. Don't get me wrong, there's nothing wrong with commentary-style. I do that for my wishacy. And frequently, things start like that, but this is an evolved story. I had higher hopes for myself.
Graham thanks you for liking the name Emily. Maybe he'll convince Brielle.
I finally got a solid idea for gen 2, and it's just plain evil.
Oh, I totally understand. I prefer story-style too. It's annoying when I feel I have nothing else to say than comment the pictures. But I don't mind reading it, when someone else does that.
Did you say plain evil? My reader self is squealing with pure joy right now.
Oh dear... Until Graham lost it, I didn't realize that Alex could gain access to some of his work files, since he's good in hacking.
I wonder how Alex's new girlfriend looks like. It wouldn't surprise me if she resembled Brielle. How awkward would it be when they meet?
Still, Alex acts kinda stalker-ish.
Oh dear... Until Graham lost it, I didn't realize that Alex could gain access to some of his work files, since he's good in hacking.
I wonder how Alex's new girlfriend looks like. It wouldn't surprise me if she resembled Brielle. How awkward would it be when they meet?
Still, Alex acts kinda stalker-ish.
Well, that's also saying that Graham would keep that stuff on his home computer. Still, yeah, Alex is a dam- good hacker. Who knows what he could've done after Ethan stepped away? Then again, he could've done nothing. He could've said those things to freak Graham out because he knows he can. If he really wanted certain information, he could get it from anywhere.
I think Laura will surprise you, possibly. In a couple of chapters, Alex explains how everything came about.
Stalkeri-sh? In what way exactly?
Oh dear... Until Graham lost it, I didn't realize that Alex could gain access to some of his work files, since he's good in hacking.
I wonder how Alex's new girlfriend looks like. It wouldn't surprise me if she resembled Brielle. How awkward would it be when they meet?
Still, Alex acts kinda stalker-ish.
Well, that's also saying that Graham would keep that stuff on his home computer. Still, yeah, Alex is a dam- good hacker. Who knows what he could've done after Ethan stepped away? Then again, he could've done nothing. He could've said those things to freak Graham out because he knows he can. If he really wanted certain information, he could get it from anywhere.
I think Laura will surprise you, possibly. In a couple of chapters, Alex explains how everything came about.
Stalkeri-sh? In what way exactly?
He always seems to come around when Graham is convenietly away, like he's watching their house. He just gives me this feeling, you know, like he's very dangerous even when he's trying to be friendly, the serial killer way, obsessed with Brielle and stuff. But it's not a bad thing, I mean for the story not in general.
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I love how you get it.
Hmmmm. But it could be that his being around is just a red herring kind of thing, a decoy for something else.
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1.43: It Was Awesome!
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So... will poor Ethan get involved with the evil Goths too when he's older?
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I really like the way he turned out too! I've started noticing he gets these expressions on his face that are so Graham. He may end up with Graham's smile, which would be great. I still don't know how he turns out yet.
Hm..... Well, I will tell you the title of the next chapter is "Some Dude" if that helps. As for more than that, I'm still debating what trick I'm going to pull out of my hat.
Drama? You want drama? Graham is about to turn over a whole mess of a can of worms.
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1.44: Digging a Web
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That pic of Graham was sheer luck. He was in the middle of something, and I caught that moment with him looking down. Strange even for me to only have two pics in a chapter.
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1.45: Some Dude
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Yeah, I realized that as I was shooting it. It looks like the creepy man at the playground thing. That wasn't my intent! But that's how it came out.
Off about Alex? Well, he IS freaking out about something yet trying to keep his cool without losing it.
The mustache is here to stay. :P hehe
I think of it as the baby version of the one his father touts.
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1.46: Flushed
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This generation has started driving me crazy! There isn't enough happening for my taste. I've got a few things left to do in order to set up gen 2, though. Oh, and speaking of... Ethan turns out a total babe:
To me, he's like a cross between Graham and Brielle's father.
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1.47: A Glimpse Into the Future
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Graham thanks you for liking the name Emily. Maybe he'll convince Brielle.
I finally got a solid idea for gen 2, and it's just plain evil.
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Did you say plain evil? My reader self is squealing with pure joy right now.
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1.48: Agent Bug
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I wonder how Alex's new girlfriend looks like. It wouldn't surprise me if she resembled Brielle. How awkward would it be when they meet?
Still, Alex acts kinda stalker-ish.
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Well, that's also saying that Graham would keep that stuff on his home computer. Still, yeah, Alex is a dam- good hacker. Who knows what he could've done after Ethan stepped away? Then again, he could've done nothing. He could've said those things to freak Graham out because he knows he can. If he really wanted certain information, he could get it from anywhere.
I think Laura will surprise you, possibly. In a couple of chapters, Alex explains how everything came about.
Stalkeri-sh? In what way exactly?
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He always seems to come around when Graham is convenietly away, like he's watching their house. He just gives me this feeling, you know, like he's very dangerous even when he's trying to be friendly, the serial killer way, obsessed with Brielle and stuff.
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