Taylor: Kk! Make sure to give me your honest opinion about it after you read it!
Wow, that was really good! I always have trouble with serious stories. So far I like your style of writing, and the story has a lot of potential. Sorry I don't really have any critisism(I know I spelled that wrong), but since I like your writing, it's to early in the story to say whether you have a good story line or not. Though I do like it so far. Can't wait for the next part!
Ok, back to reading! Though it's not like I stopped reading just to check the forums...oh, no, of course not...
Disclaimer: Before I begin my story, I need to credit some users. First of all, Leo Lock is not my creation. He is alexlockz sim; I downloaded him and changed nothing but his clothes, hair, and a few traits. Second, the twins' mother, Lillian Lock, was originally a male sim of GagaSims that I downloaded, turned into a female, and then tweaked the nose, hair, clothes, makeup, and traits. Gaga, if you don't like this, just say the word and I'll take the story down, I'll understand if you want me to. (; For the houses: the Japanese estate(Himeya Inn) where all pictures with the cherry blossom trees were taken is credited to battousan at MTS, and Clarissa and Scott's house(The Miller) is credited to FlipGuardian at MTS as well.
Kiwi, rl is rough stuff, i know....i gotta work tonight. bleh
Gaga hai!
Yeah it really is, sometimes i wonder how i ended up becoming the good person i think i am with all the bad things ive been through in my 20-something existence
I'm going to play my colorful family for a while! And later I won't be on! Most likely, I'll leave in two hours, and come back on 7 hours starting in now. So 10 pm, central. I'm going to paint my room, and handpaint chinese symbols, etc. I'm doing a chinese themed room.
I'm going to play my colorful family for a while! And later I won't be on! Most likely, I'll leave in two hours, and come back on 7 hours starting in now. So 10 pm, central. I'm going to paint my room, and handpaint chinese symbols, etc. I'm doing a chinese themed room.
I'm going to play my colorful family for a while! And later I won't be on! Most likely, I'll leave in two hours, and come back on 7 hours starting in now. So 10 pm, central. I'm going to paint my room, and handpaint chinese symbols, etc. I'm doing a chinese themed room.
Sounds kool, Joanna!
Yep!
And don't worry. I'll still be here two more hours or so to bother you.
So here is my attempt at making a mansion. PLease let me know what you think. Don't be afraid to be brutally honest. I know it's boxy. All comments, hints, suggestions and colorful metaphors welcome! :twisted:
I have yet to recolor doors, windows, etc. so feel free to suggest colors. The outside walls will remain the color they are now!
So here is my attempt at making a mansion. PLease let me know what you think. Don't be afraid to be brutally honest. I know it's boxy. All comments, hints, suggestions and colorful metaphors welcome! :twisted:
I have yet to recolor doors, windows, etc. so feel free to suggest colors. The outside walls will remain the color they are now!
You need more landscaping, and a pool with a deck. XD
And a special guest room for me,when I show up in your game. Make it colorful! :roll:
Kiwi, it IS all about being positive to the best of your ability. Besides, it may not be a part of your genetic make-up to be a meanie or worse.
Joanna, handpainting chinese symbols sounds fun.
Yep my mother said my positivity helps drive her, little does she know i just try not to be upset, its good that her seeing me not upset helps her stay positive. Barbie =
So here is my attempt at making a mansion. PLease let me know what you think. Don't be afraid to be brutally honest. I know it's boxy. All comments, hints, suggestions and colorful metaphors welcome! :twisted:
I have yet to recolor doors, windows, etc. so feel free to suggest colors. The outside walls will remain the color they are now!
OK, thanks guys! I am looking for feedback on the structure itself. I don't want to proceed with the landscpaing and other amenities, until I have the structure set.
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Wow, that was really good! I always have trouble with serious stories. So far I like your style of writing, and the story has a lot of potential. Sorry I don't really have any critisism(I know I spelled that wrong), but since I like your writing, it's to early in the story to say whether you have a good story line or not. Though I do like it so far. Can't wait for the next part!
Ok, back to reading! Though it's not like I stopped reading just to check the forums...oh, no, of course not...
:P
Talk about fierce :!: Thats her sucked in cheek look. all the models do that lol.
xxmaddi & Barbie - I loved both of your stories
(I thought she was looking kinda cute) How are you doing this morning?
Franz is a hawty... :P
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Get back to your reading. *piercing stare*
I tend to lurk an awful lot. I'm trying to be more active, though! /fistpump
-- Polly
It's okay that you used him.
Was it my avatar?
Liked the story by the way. Can't wait for more!
She was killin it, totally cute face. and yes Franz is hotness.
Actually im doing pretty okay.. life is still kicking my butt(money,bills,lovelife drama), but i remain positive, i try not to let things get me down
Gaga hai!
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I'm lurking. 5 posts to go!
Yeah it really is, sometimes i wonder how i ended up becoming the good person i think i am with all the bad things ive been through in my 20-something existence
Oh and Morning to you too R!
Sounds kool, Joanna!
hmm...
I'm an after thought and only get an initial!
Joanna, handpainting chinese symbols sounds fun.
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And don't worry. I'll still be here two more hours or so to bother you.
I slepted for 12 hours. 1 to 1.
I am going to go get the Wedding pics and post them in awhile.
I have yet to recolor doors, windows, etc. so feel free to suggest colors. The outside walls will remain the color they are now!
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You whoodit whadit? Slepted? lmao I likes... :P
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And a special guest room for me,when I show up in your game. Make it colorful! :roll:
Yep my mother said my positivity helps drive her, little does she know i just try not to be upset, its good that her seeing me not upset helps her stay positive. Barbie =
Yay wedding time
R - I like it somewhat but landscaping would help alot.. add some tree's around lakes flowers. Its nice though i admit a little boxy lol. :P
You are right. It is boxy. But other than that, :thumbup:
This house needs to be EPIC!
One moar post! :shock:
Add a lake and landscaping.
The top of the roof needs color. Not that white or grey ya got there.
Add walkways (sp)
I love the windows you chose for it.
Is that a garage off to the side?
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