One of these Days - Epilogue - OUT NOW 04-19-2013 «1…45678910...Next Go

annasommer

Hi Diane, thanks for stopping by! Aw, the story thread moves so fast, I need to catch up several pages today

Glad you liked what you read

annasommer

Working on chapter ten atm, will probably take the last pics tomorrow

annasommer

Sneak peak: Le Anh and Nick in Al Simhara...




Now all I have to do is choose from a laughable amount of roughly 260 pics

_sims_Yimi

annasommer wrote:

Now all I have to do is choose from a laughable amount of roughly 260 pics

260?! :shock: Wow, that a lot of pictures you took. Must be one hell of a chapter! I can't wait to start reading it.

Hopefully Nick won't meet any of the people from the past when in Al Simhara. Like those guards who hurt him, or the people from his previous expedition. I'm seriously doubting he can handle any of them. :?

annasommer

... and after a lot of consideration, I proudly present- Chapter TEN

melodicspike21

...
:shock:
I do not like where this is heading...

annasommer

Aw Mel. Have faith 8)

SamelaRita

Loved the chapter! Loved the screenshots! Love the suspense! (oh, and thanks for your post on my story as well).

annasommer

Agh. I wanted to upload the b&b and the car rental, but the don´t show up in my studio :evil:

Will try again later... so far, some pics...

Foladi´s Limousine´s



The Hotel Oriental

LemonBerg95

UUUUEEHEHHHH
I don't know
Just ...just let them have the treasure okay?
Yep. Yep. That'd be good.

Denimg8

Gosh! I'm loving the pics you took this time. (I almost thought Nick was *cough cough* naked in the hotel room -the angle you took the pic in lol- then I just about saw the shorts... lol (just ignore me,) Though I'm kinda curious about the two sneaky looking dudes at the end.
I am also surprised -in a happy way- that Nick didn't have a nervous breakdown when the police officers arrived, and it was nice that Le was there for him this time

About the 260 pics..I get the same problem when I start taking them too, just can't seem to stop and then we start thinking -how about from this angle?, what about from above? and bla bla bla- lol I got way too many in my screenshots folder too..

Happily waiting for chp.11 x

annasommer

@ Rita

Thanks, and your welcome. I always enjoy reading your updates, you know that

@ Aimee

Mmmmmmmmmmmh we´ll see

@ Denim

Tah! And I tried so hard to get an angle were nothing of the shorts would show
Funny that you noticed that, yet you don´t recognize the guy with the ridiculous hat in the last pictures... 8)

Denimg8

I just went back to take a second look at the 'man with the hat' and still am unsure ...its not Joe is it? (at first I thought the ne next to him was joe but he looks a bit different....) Oh I dunno, I guess I'll have to just find out... :?

Lalajadeeyes

Anna, I have left comments up to Le's chapter, just to let you know what I have thought of each chapter.

So now I want to say, I love your story. Good writing, and although I have already said this, I'll say it again; I love Nick. hehehe.

annasommer

@ Denim

Ok I´ll save you the waiting, yes, it is Joe. When I was done with the picture taking, I was like "wait, with this hat and the sunglasses, he is so hard to recognize... I´ll better let the other guy call him Doctor all the time to give people a hint to his identity"

@ Jade

And a ton of comments you did leave! Thank you so much!
I love Nick, too. I really have to be careful not to give him TO much room in this story 8)

annasommer

My first attempt to a family tree

_sims_Yimi

annasommer wrote:

My first attempt to a family tree

Hey, thats not bad! =D You do know there's a site that you can easily make family trees in, right? I believe it was... familyecho.com... or something close to that.
Poor Heather has bad relations with everyone on that family tree list. XD Wait, did I just say poor? I mean deserved. :P

annasommer

Hehe, I know, but I am to lazy to spent time on this

Hm, off to bed now... will work on the chapter tomorrow, will see how far I get this weekend

annasommer

And chapter eleven is up. Whew! Wonder if I can actually finish this story before the year is over! :shock:

melodicspike21

Okay, I absolutely love Mac. I felt really bad for him though, but it's a good thing he has such good friends!
And that last line was just perfect.
Amazing chapter (as usual), Anna!

annasommer

Thank you

I think I will need to more chapters until I am done. Not so sure about the content yet, but yes... two more should do 8)

_sims_Yimi

Awwwww...
His friends are such good people and Seamus too, I love how their relatonship has turned out... Though I felt bad for Mac during the entire chapter. Bad eyesight made me giggle, I really thought it was going to be something much worse. :P

Great chapter! I really like that you go into details for every interesting character in your story. There's not a lot of people who can do that without it seeming forced or kind of irrelevant to the story, but you can! You keep me interested and dying for more at the end of every chapter. ^^

annasommer

Thank you Yimi :oops:

I love to think about the back story of side characters, it makes them more real to me and therefore more interesting to write about.... and like with the building of sets, I get carried away at times and a side character ends up with a chapter of her or his own

Denimg8

Hi there Anna! I just managed to see your comment when I filtered my page to ''My activity'' Only! I just read chp eleven (and loved the title btw -reminds me of one my my fav songs!)
I was really sucked into Malcolm's little problem there. Feel really sorry for him..at first I thought his friends were against him... but loved the end. The Fantastic Four!

Great chapter! (gonna try and publish my one hopefully by tonight!)

OceanBeautyII

I've just started reading and os far I like it. I've only read to chapter one. I'll read the rest tomorrow.