What Do You Think

ashleyadorable

This is a photo I edited...just ignore the text, it was gonna be an advertisement but as you can see it doesn't look like one. I put the pictures before and after.
(pics are clickable to see at full size)

Then while I am here take a look at this more *proper* advertisement:


So just give me your thoughts! Thanks! I'm still learning so go easy on the amatuer 8)

weerweer02

That's pretty good, but the pool and grill seem a little out of place with the flowers dominating the background. It feels like she should be in a park, not in her back yard. Also, I would love to see the sim more active. Aside from that, it's pretty cool. The blur ads a bit of a "dream-effect" (my odd words), but it's not too fantasy either.