This is my first legacy (that I've posted) so I hope you enjoy it! Please read and comment on what you think of it! If you like/love it I will continue the story!
First off, kudos to using the name "Fletcher" That's the surname for my legacy family too! And funnier still? My foundress was also a girl! Sure they're extremely different but that's a whole 'nother story
Anyway, I was reading over your first chapter and it's a cute story so far. I do have a few recommendations though. You might wanna at least put the walls up partially when taking pictures. It adds detail and lets us see what the house looks like on the inside. And you might want to not add that she popped up the wishes and all to make it more story-like instead of you just saying "Oh this happened so I made her do this", get me?
But either way, it's really cute and I can't wait to see the future baby!
First off, kudos to using the name "Fletcher" That's the surname for my legacy family too! And funnier still? My foundress was also a girl! Sure they're extremely different but that's a whole 'nother story
Anyway, I was reading over your first chapter and it's a cute story so far. I do have a few recommendations though. You might wanna at least put the walls up partially when taking pictures. It adds detail and lets us see what the house looks like on the inside. And you might want to not add that she popped up the wishes and all to make it more story-like instead of you just saying "Oh this happened so I made her do this", get me?
But either way, it's really cute and I can't wait to see the future baby!
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please read and comment guys it would mean a lot!
Anyway, I was reading over your first chapter and it's a cute story so far. I do have a few recommendations though. You might wanna at least put the walls up partially when taking pictures. It adds detail and lets us see what the house looks like on the inside. And you might want to not add that she popped up the wishes and all to make it more story-like instead of you just saying "Oh this happened so I made her do this", get me?
But either way, it's really cute and I can't wait to see the future baby!
^ putting the walls up helps alot, try also using tab, for a closer look at the sims.
Fletcher yh lol!
nd thnx for the advice it really helped!
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and thank you so much! glad you like it!!
please read and comment i put a lot of work, time and effort into this!
http://fletcherlegacy.blogspot.com/2010/08/chapter-2.html
it would mean everything! please read!
I agree with putting up the walls, though. When Goodwin was working, the fire alarm was floating.
http://fletcherlegacy.blogspot.com/2010/08/chapter-3.html
I like Goodwin. ^^
i was learning by people giving me advice!
It does show. ^^
Writing your own legacy is a big learning experience. I know I've learnt a lot and it's obvious you have too.
Can't wait for more.
it really means a lot!