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Hello!

This is my first legacy (that I've posted) so I hope you enjoy it! Please read and comment on what you think of it! If you like/love it I will continue the story!

:)

Chapter 1 - http://fletcherlegacy.blogspot.com/2010/08/chapter-1.html

Chapter 2 - http://fletcherlegacy.blogspot.com/2010/08/chapter-2.html

Chapter 3 - http://fletcherlegacy.blogspot.com/2010/08/chapter-3.html

Chapter 4 - http://fletcherlegacy.blogspot.com/2010/08/chapter-4.html

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    BrightFashionBrightFashion Posts: 4,090 New Member
    edited August 2010
    bump

    please read and comment guys it would mean a lot!

    :D
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    DeedsDeeds Posts: 771
    edited August 2010
    First off, kudos to using the name "Fletcher" :) That's the surname for my legacy family too! And funnier still? My foundress was also a girl! Sure they're extremely different but that's a whole 'nother story :p

    Anyway, I was reading over your first chapter and it's a cute story so far. I do have a few recommendations though. You might wanna at least put the walls up partially when taking pictures. It adds detail and lets us see what the house looks like on the inside. And you might want to not add that she popped up the wishes and all to make it more story-like instead of you just saying "Oh this happened so I made her do this", get me?

    But either way, it's really cute and I can't wait to see the future baby!
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    CBroxCBrox Posts: 415 Member
    edited August 2010
    I like it so far! I also left a comment, can't wait for the next chapter to see the baby :)

    ^ putting the walls up helps alot, try also using tab, for a closer look at the sims.
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    BrightFashionBrightFashion Posts: 4,090 New Member
    edited August 2010
    Deeds wrote:
    First off, kudos to using the name "Fletcher" :) That's the surname for my legacy family too! And funnier still? My foundress was also a girl! Sure they're extremely different but that's a whole 'nother story :p

    Anyway, I was reading over your first chapter and it's a cute story so far. I do have a few recommendations though. You might wanna at least put the walls up partially when taking pictures. It adds detail and lets us see what the house looks like on the inside. And you might want to not add that she popped up the wishes and all to make it more story-like instead of you just saying "Oh this happened so I made her do this", get me?

    But either way, it's really cute and I can't wait to see the future baby!

    Fletcher yh lol!

    nd thnx for the advice it really helped!
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    BrightFashionBrightFashion Posts: 4,090 New Member
    edited August 2010
    I like it so far! I also left a comment, can't wait for the next chapter to see the baby :)

    ^ putting the walls up helps alot, try also using tab, for a closer look at the sims.

    kk!

    and thank you so much! glad you like it!!
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    BrightFashionBrightFashion Posts: 4,090 New Member
    edited August 2010
    bump so others can comment lol!
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    BrightFashionBrightFashion Posts: 4,090 New Member
    edited August 2010
    working on chapter 2 right now!
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    BrightFashionBrightFashion Posts: 4,090 New Member
    edited August 2010
    bump :)
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    BrightFashionBrightFashion Posts: 4,090 New Member
    edited August 2010
    bump.........

    please read and comment i put a lot of work, time and effort into this!
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    BrightFashionBrightFashion Posts: 4,090 New Member
    edited August 2010
    bumpity bump bumpers
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    BrightFashionBrightFashion Posts: 4,090 New Member
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    BrightFashionBrightFashion Posts: 4,090 New Member
    edited August 2010
    bump............
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    BrightFashionBrightFashion Posts: 4,090 New Member
    edited August 2010
    plz plz plz PLZ comment!

    it would mean everything! please read!

    :D
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    Alexy777Alexy777 Posts: 346
    edited August 2010
    Like it. ^.^
    I agree with putting up the walls, though. When Goodwin was working, the fire alarm was floating.
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    BrightFashionBrightFashion Posts: 4,090 New Member
    edited August 2010
    lol sorry bout that!
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    BrightFashionBrightFashion Posts: 4,090 New Member
    edited August 2010
    buymp
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    BrightFashionBrightFashion Posts: 4,090 New Member
    edited August 2010
    BUMPER CARS!
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    BrightFashionBrightFashion Posts: 4,090 New Member
    edited August 2010
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    TenriTenri Posts: 182
    edited August 2010
    I like it a lot. :) It just got better with each chapter, particularly after you started putting walls up in chapter 3. Looking forward to seeing more. :D

    I like Goodwin. ^^
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    BrightFashionBrightFashion Posts: 4,090 New Member
    edited August 2010
    thank you!

    i was learning by people giving me advice!

    :D
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    melodicspike21melodicspike21 Posts: 24,180 Member
    edited August 2010
    I liked it! Can't wait for more :D
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    TenriTenri Posts: 182
    edited August 2010
    thank you!

    i was learning by people giving me advice!

    :D

    It does show. :D ^^

    Writing your own legacy is a big learning experience. I know I've learnt a lot and it's obvious you have too.

    Can't wait for more. :)
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    BrightFashionBrightFashion Posts: 4,090 New Member
    edited August 2010
    thank you so much! both of you!

    it really means a lot!

    :D
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    BrightFashionBrightFashion Posts: 4,090 New Member
    edited August 2010
    chapter 4 will probably be out on thursday!
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    simsdorocksimsdorock Posts: 58 New Member
    edited August 2010
    I <3 your LEGACY! :mrgreen: can't wait for more!
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