Sry pplz.. My launcher stoped working but I can still get to my game... I just can upload pictures I wish I could continue but I dont want to reinstall my game AGAIN. Sry Thx for the rec and veiws for the storys that I was able to make
A good start off, I just felt that it could use a bit more
detail in everything :? but it's your first story so it's
fine! I gave it a rec, I'll be waiting for more if you decide
to continue!
I didn't really capture the idea of where the story was going
or going to end up at, it seems their marriage is tough love
but I wasn't certain since that was the only part I saw but
then again it's an intro. I just think the characters need a
small brush of detail such as traits, or a background story
to them!
These are mean words, just trying to help!
I was thinking about story telling sooner or later
Thx. B4 i continue, im going to get the sims makeovers. I mean, Mils makeup is to... goth like. Johns hair doesnt seem like the athlete type. And Josh... well Josh needs work :XD:
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I love to read all kinds of Sim stories. Yours was funny and interesting.
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A good start off, I just felt that it could use a bit more
detail in everything :? but it's your first story so it's
fine! I gave it a rec, I'll be waiting for more if you decide
to continue!
-Metalz :roll: :roll:
I didn't really capture the idea of where the story was going
or going to end up at, it seems their marriage is tough love
but I wasn't certain since that was the only part I saw but
then again it's an intro. I just think the characters need a
small brush of detail such as traits, or a background story
to them!
These are mean words, just trying to help!
I was thinking about story telling sooner or later
-Metalz :roll: :roll:
any1? plz? hwello?
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