Stories

DarthCronox1027

Hi! I am new and came out with a series of stories called I am Loura Nelson. Please check it out and tell me what you think! How to improve it, what should I do, what you want in it, all that stuff. Find it at my page. I like the stories and I hope you do to :!:

Rika701

Hello! I think your story is pretty funny. I have a few suggestions. One thing is that there are a few grammatical errors. You should consider typing your story in a program like Microsoft Word first because it has a spell checker. Then copy and paste it here! Another thing, you should put the walls up for all of your pictures. It makes them look more realistic. Oh, and if you press Tab you will go into movie making mode. Then you can press Z to zoom in closer for better pics. And X will zoom it out. I think you're off to a great start with your story. Keep writing!!