You don’t need super powers to fall in love but it can’t hurt or can it? Join me for the adventures of a young sim who’s not looking for love but love’s certainly out to find her.
Usually, I do my reading after breakfast with a cup of coffee--but some stories are too good to wait for!
I hope it was worth breaking your routine
Totally ! And it was a differently paced chapter , too (except for the final screenshot ) and I enjoyed the variety ! I really like the introspective nature of this chapter .
Usually, I do my reading after breakfast with a cup of coffee--but some stories are too good to wait for!
I hope it was worth breaking your routine
Totally ! And it was a differently paced chapter , too (except for the final screenshot ) and I enjoyed the variety ! I really like the introspective nature of this chapter .
I was worried people would be turned off a little from this chapter as it has a little more serious (dont know if thats the right word to use) tone. I tried to keep the writing style the same so it didnt feel like it doesbt belong in the story as a whole.
Usually, I do my reading after breakfast with a cup of coffee--but some stories are too good to wait for!
I hope it was worth breaking your routine
Totally ! And it was a differently paced chapter , too (except for the final screenshot ) and I enjoyed the variety ! I really like the introspective nature of this chapter .
I was worried people would be turned off a little from this chapter as it has a little more serious (dont know if thats the right word to use) tone. I tried to keep the writing style the same so it didnt feel like it doesbt belong in the story as a whole.
I'm glas to see you received it well
Oh, man! I think it's an awesome chapter. The timing of it is brilliant! I feel it's so effective to alter the pace a bit, and I love it when you write introspectively! I love it in all of your writing when you do it--and I see it now and then in everything you write. I think what makes it stand out so much is that you're not ALWAYS introspective in the writing. Sometimes, your so funny, and sometimes even a little flippant, and then it turns and gets serious or reflective. It's fascinating!
What makes it work, for me, is your sentence structure and your tone. In everything you write, the capacity is set early on (like in the first paragraph) for a range of perspectives and even moods. So my expectations as a reader are that I'll be introduced to romance, humor, sarcasm, teasing, and sincerity and reflection. It's delightful!
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Do you also play The Elder Scrolls Online? You can find me there as CathyTea, too!
Thank you! I'm really really pumped about this story and I love that you are too
Now let's see what the future will bring for her!
Sucker for pain - Evina's story
Guys like the chase but usually get bored when they make the catch. Or so they say
*Snuggles into comfortable hoodie a little deeper*
I love how Erin shows a different side of herself with every guy she dates, even when staying true to her original character. So fun to read!
This makes me happy
Looks like Erin ain't getting her wish either!
Do you also play The Elder Scrolls Online? You can find me there as CathyTea, too!
I hope it was worth breaking your routine
Totally ! And it was a differently paced chapter , too (except for the final screenshot ) and I enjoyed the variety ! I really like the introspective nature of this chapter .
Do you also play The Elder Scrolls Online? You can find me there as CathyTea, too!
I was worried people would be turned off a little from this chapter as it has a little more serious (dont know if thats the right word to use) tone. I tried to keep the writing style the same so it didnt feel like it doesbt belong in the story as a whole.
I'm glas to see you received it well
Oh, man! I think it's an awesome chapter. The timing of it is brilliant! I feel it's so effective to alter the pace a bit, and I love it when you write introspectively! I love it in all of your writing when you do it--and I see it now and then in everything you write. I think what makes it stand out so much is that you're not ALWAYS introspective in the writing. Sometimes, your so funny, and sometimes even a little flippant, and then it turns and gets serious or reflective. It's fascinating!
What makes it work, for me, is your sentence structure and your tone. In everything you write, the capacity is set early on (like in the first paragraph) for a range of perspectives and even moods. So my expectations as a reader are that I'll be introduced to romance, humor, sarcasm, teasing, and sincerity and reflection. It's delightful!
Do you also play The Elder Scrolls Online? You can find me there as CathyTea, too!