I'm writing it right now, so it should be up soon! It'll be a bit short, but that's just because we're not focused on eliminations or dates in this chapter - just the reactions from the baby.
Lift up your head, princess. If not, the crown falls.
Kara should be arrested. If they can't say no, they can't say yes.
My thoughts, too.
ETA: not trying to make you feel bad, Simcess, I know you were just trying to make a feasible reason as to why Stellan might be the father. But that's so not OK - especially when it gets played off for laughs for so many men.
Kara!!!!! This is definitely not ok. However the child came to be, he should not be punished (hes so cute!!!) his mother definitely needs some be dealt with though. Things just took a turn!!!
Kara should be arrested. If they can't say no, they can't say yes.
My thoughts, too.
ETA: not trying to make you feel bad, Simcess, I know you were just trying to make a feasible reason as to why Stellan might be the father. But that's so not OK - especially when it gets played off for laughs for so many men.
Of course! I'll be delving deeper into the drink affair - it wasn't meant to insinuate ra.pe. In Kara's backstory, Ori is her crazy sister. I think Kara was just trying to let stellan feel the way her sister felt - described as crazy even thought she felt she wasn't.
However, I understand the backlash completely and will rewrite the chapter I agree it's not okay - I wasn't trying to go in that direction at all. I realize it wss misconstrued, and that happens sometimes! My apologies.
So I'll revise it
Lift up your head, princess. If not, the crown falls.
Kara should be arrested. If they can't say no, they can't say yes.
My thoughts, too.
ETA: not trying to make you feel bad, Simcess, I know you were just trying to make a feasible reason as to why Stellan might be the father. But that's so not OK - especially when it gets played off for laughs for so many men.
Of course! I'll be delving deeper into the drink affair - it wasn't meant to insinuate ra.pe. In Kara's backstory, Ori is her crazy sister. I think Kara was just trying to let stellan feel the way her sister felt - described as crazy even thought she felt she wasn't.
However, I understand the backlash completely and will rewrite the chapter I agree it's not okay - I wasn't trying to go in that direction at all. I realize it wss misconstrued, and that happens sometimes! My apologies.
So I'll revise it
No! I was half joking. It's a serious issue in life but I wasn't taking it so seriously in the sims, it's just a game. I love this story as is
Update: Chapter thirteen has been removed from the PrincessSimcess blog. I thank everyone for their feedback. It wasn't my intention to insinuate any sort of assault on whomever. Sometimes there can be a disconnect between writer and readers, and I think that's what happened here. The plan I had in my head didn't translate well onto paper (or digital, haha!). It happens, folks!
I tried to stay away from all those issues with my bachelor challenge. I wanted this to be a fun, lighthearted read. Even Kara's pregnancy is for fun! Nevertheless, that doesn't mean issues like this don't pop up. Again, while my intentions were pure, the execution was poor.
Check back soon for the revised chapter!
Lift up your head, princess. If not, the crown falls.
I agree with ikiamyetta, I think for the same of the story, it's fine - and Kara is evil after all! I wasn't even going to say anything, but felt emboldened after seeing ikiamyetta's comment.
Whatever you decide, I hope it works out the way you want it to - that's the important thing. And honestly, as ugly as it is, assault happens and we can still write about it in the context of a story.
Above all, we love you Simcess! Thank you for inviting us into your world and sharing this amazing story!
I agree with ikiamyetta, I think for the same of the story, it's fine - and Kara is evil after all! I wasn't even going to say anything, but felt emboldened after seeing ikiamyetta's comment.
Whatever you decide, I hope it works out the way you want it to - that's the important thing. And honestly, as ugly as it is, assault happens and we can still write about it in the context of a story.
Above all, we love you Simcess! Thank you for inviting us into your world and sharing this amazing story!
I'm truly glad you both spoke up - no worries on that front! I'm glad (and incredibly lucky) that we can have these open discussions. Feedback only makes me better
I love all of you, too! I can't wait to move forward with new stories and involve you all! Cheers to the future
Lift up your head, princess. If not, the crown falls.
Hmm, so is the implication there that Luke has grey eyes? I can't quite see. I remember Kara has purple, so he didn't get his eye color from her.
Btw, did you know if a woman woohoos with two men around the same time and has fraternal twins, there is a very small chance she could have a child by both men? Too bad we can't do that in the game, that would be hilarious!
Hmm, so is the implication there that Luke has green-grey eyes? I can't quite see. I remember Kara has purple, so he didn't get his eye color from her.
Btw, did you know if a woman woohoos with two men around the same time and has fraternal twins, there is a very small chance she could have a child by both men? Too bad we can't do that in the game, that would be hilarious!
Oh man, that would've been crazy! I should've tried that, haha! So just to clear it up:
Luke has brownish/black hair and grey eyes
Stellan has blonde hair and light green eyes
Kara has black hair and purple eyes
Lift up your head, princess. If not, the crown falls.
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Oh don't worry, she'll get her date! It just might be focussed on something else...
I'm curious to see how the girls will react to the actual baby!
Not sure! I might have to, haha! I have one of those weird charcoal masks on so maybe I'll kill some time and write!
omg, I have my fingers crossed! I'm dying from the suspense!
My thoughts, too.
ETA: not trying to make you feel bad, Simcess, I know you were just trying to make a feasible reason as to why Stellan might be the father. But that's so not OK - especially when it gets played off for laughs for so many men.
Of course! I'll be delving deeper into the drink affair - it wasn't meant to insinuate ra.pe. In Kara's backstory, Ori is her crazy sister. I think Kara was just trying to let stellan feel the way her sister felt - described as crazy even thought she felt she wasn't.
However, I understand the backlash completely and will rewrite the chapter
So I'll revise it
No! I was half joking. It's a serious issue in life but I wasn't taking it so seriously in the sims, it's just a game. I love this story as is
I tried to stay away from all those issues with my bachelor challenge. I wanted this to be a fun, lighthearted read. Even Kara's pregnancy is for fun! Nevertheless, that doesn't mean issues like this don't pop up. Again, while my intentions were pure, the execution was poor.
Check back soon for the revised chapter!
Whatever you decide, I hope it works out the way you want it to - that's the important thing. And honestly, as ugly as it is, assault happens and we can still write about it in the context of a story.
Above all, we love you Simcess! Thank you for inviting us into your world and sharing this amazing story!
I'm truly glad you both spoke up - no worries on that front! I'm glad (and incredibly lucky) that we can have these open discussions. Feedback only makes me better
I love all of you, too! I can't wait to move forward with new stories and involve you all! Cheers to the future
Chapter 13 - Born this Way has been posted https://princesssimcess.wordpress.com/2017/03/18/chapter-thirteen-born-this-way/
And of course, you can still vote for who you think the father is https://www.surveymonkey.com/r/66XSZ89
*pats London's back as she sobs quietly in a corner*
But honestly it does look like Stellan's.
Btw, did you know if a woman woohoos with two men around the same time and has fraternal twins, there is a very small chance she could have a child by both men? Too bad we can't do that in the game, that would be hilarious!
Oh man, that would've been crazy! I should've tried that, haha! So just to clear it up:
Luke has brownish/black hair and grey eyes
Stellan has blonde hair and light green eyes
Kara has black hair and purple eyes
Me right now.