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~50 Foals Challenge: RoseVale Legacy~

ElijahsBabyGurl9ElijahsBabyGurl9 Posts: 1,326 Member
edited August 2014 in The Sims 3 General Discussion
:? Okay this is probably my 3rd or 4th 50 Foals Challenge. I love these challenges but every time I start one my game quits and I lose the files. SOOO...I started a completely new one. :oops: I plan on finishing this one!! :twisted:

OFFICIAL RULES FOR 50 FOALS CHALLENGE: http://forum.thesims3.com/jforum/posts/list/450566.page

Here are some of the Fifty Foals Challenges I'm following:
I recommend them they are great reads!

Fifty Foals Challenge: Jason and Salsa Dancer
http://forum.thesims3.com/jforum/posts/list/520838.page

Treasure's Foals
http://forum.thesims3.com/jforum/posts/list/723510.page

50 Foals of Fun
http://forum.thesims3.com/jforum/posts/list/541044.page

Savita, Paloma and Skyler 50 foals challenge
http://forum.thesims3.com/jforum/posts/list/722670.page

The Fifty Foals of the Shinigami
http://forum.thesims3.com/jforum/posts/list/676061.page

The Frost Pastures: A 50 Foal Challenge
http://forum.thesims3.com/jforum/posts/list/660571.page

The Legacy Of The Fifty Foals
http://forum.thesims3.com/jforum/posts/list/712675.page

FOALS BORN SO FAR: 5

1. HoneyPie~Filly
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Dam: Argo
Sire: Roman Horse (not uploaded)
Link for HoneyPie: http://www.thesims3.com/assetDetail.html?assetId=8414984

2. Galaxy Rosevale~Uni Colt
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Dam: Lenora Uni Mare
Sire: Hades Horse
Link:

3. Whipper Rosevale~Colt
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Dam: Argo Rosevale
Sire: Hades Horse
Link:

4. Shamus Rosevale~Colt
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Dam: Argo Rosevale
Sire: Kaiser Horse
Link:

5. Remus~Uni Colt
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Dam: Lenora
Sire: Kaiser Horse
Link:
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STALLIONS USED (Links Provided):

1. Roman Horse (in game stallion no link) No picture available

2. Hades Horse (in game adopted horse)
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Link: http://www.thesims3.com/assetDetail.html?assetId=8218604

3. Kaiser Horse (in game adopted stallion)
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Link: http://www.thesims3.com/assetDetail.html?assetId=8414983

4. Apocalypse Ludwig by fleshjenn
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Link: http://www.thesims3.com/assetDetail.html?assetId=4773405

5. Argyle by FancyFrenzy
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Link: http://www.thesims3.com/assetDetail.html?assetId=7350884

6. Aiden by DamonaNightRhode
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Link: http://www.thesims3.com/assetDetail.html?assetId=7771660

7. Black Jack by gympony19
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Link: http://www.thesims3.com/assetDetail.html?assetId=7656082

8. Apache by diamonndlee
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Link: http://www.thesims3.com/assetDetail.html?assetId=7550466

9. APHA Household by dianalaray14u
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Link: http://www.thesims3.com/assetDetail.html?assetId=5817807

10. Warrior Household by dianalaray14u
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Link: http://www.thesims3.com/assetDetail.html?assetId=8407232

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Here are the Sims starring in this challenge:

Sims
Founderess:
Brittanica RoseVale
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Age: YA
Gender: F
Favorites:
Color: Spice Brown
Music:Dark Wave
Food: Mushroom Omelets
LTW: Illustrious Author
Traits: Equestrian, Gatherer, Artistic, Over-Emotional, Family-Oriented
Hair Color: Caramel Honey Brown/Blonde
Eyes: Golden Yellow w/Hints of White
Career/Job: Science

Resident #2
Neem McBrave
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Family's Servant/Bodyguard/Aurar
Always refers to Britt as 'Mistress' is very polite and respectful, obedient and protective. Neem speaks with a thick Brogue/Scottish accent so he may be a bit hard to understand. I'll provide translation for his speech below the Scottish dialogue!
Gender: M
Hair:Blonde
Eyes: Green
Subtype: Wizard (witch)
Traits: Brave, Equestrian, Neat, Natural Cook, Proper
LTW:Bot Builder (loves Plumbots)
Favorites
Color: Blue
Food:Mushroom Omelets
Music: Chinese

Mare For Challenge:

Name: Argo RoseVale (created by Simsupastar for my bday) Dappled Palomino w/ White mane and tail
Gender: Mare
Traits: Brave, Obedient, Fast
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Pet Sims:
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Dog: Pretzel RoseVale (small dog) White terrier mix with brown spots
Gender: Female
Traits: Playful, Adventurous,and Loyal
Original Sim: Lucky by Jiamond5


Cat: Mischief and Magic
Magic ~Female~ -Spayed-Adopted from Snow Cattery
Mischief ~Male~ -Neutered- Adopted from Shades Cattery

Prologue:

After moving from the hustle and bustle of Bridgeport, the biggest city she's ever lived in, Brittanica RoseVale found herself in the country town of Aurora Springs (Skies). It was a stark contrast to what she was used too. In Aurora, there was very little traffic, no loud city sounds, sky scrapers or planes. Instead there was fresh air, rolling green hills and mountains, a beautiful waterfall, lake, ocean, and wild horses as far as the eye could see. Blue sky dominated and soft fluffy clouds replaced the city lights. The Sims that called Aurora home, came in all kinds of shapes, sizes and colors. They were friendly, polite, and very welcoming to a newcomer like Britt. She was going to love it here.
Fresh out Sims U she sought to make a name for herself, she just didn't know how yet. After receiving word that she had inherited a small house, large plot of land, her own personal butler/bodyguard and horse her journey begins. Britt’s cab pulls up to her new home and she is taken aback at how tiny the house is but how large the property was, there was enough room here for an entire herd of horses much less one. Her journey begins here:

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    ElijahsBabyGurl9ElijahsBabyGurl9 Posts: 1,326 Member
    edited May 2014
    (Some of the pictures from the Introduction are repeated here, I am just starting so not many pics yet.}

    Here is what I have so far for chapter one. I hope it is okay! The first foal will be coming soon.

    If anyone has a good stallions that I can use please post their links in your comments ^_^!

    Chapter One: A New Life For Brittanica RoseVale.

    “Welcome tae yer new haem, mistress."
    (Welcome to your new home, Mistress.) Her new butler/bodyguard replies bowing formally to her which caught her by complete surprise as she exits the cab and puts her luggage on the ground.

    “M-mistress? Who me? And who are you?” she replies shakily.

    “Aye mistress. Mah nam is Neem. Ah hae bin in th' service ay yer family fur a very lang time. Ah was appointed caretaker ay yer lain until ye arrived. Thes horse is Argo, she is yoors. Yer family has hud a lang tradition ay raisin' th' finest horses. Ah hiner 'at ye will continue thes tradition wi' Argo. Is thaur anythin' ye require mistress?"
    {Yes Mistress. My name is Neem. I have been in the service of your family for a very long time. I was appointed caretaker of your land until you arrived. This horse is Argo, she is yours. Your family has had a long tradition of raising the finest horses. I hope that you will continue this tradition with Argo. Is there anything you require Mistress?)Neem says as he helps her put her luggage into her room.

    “I don’t understand Mister Neem. This is all so sudden. So from what you’re saying my family raised horses and left you in charge until someone could be found to inherit this place right? Exactly how long have you served my family?” She says sighing heavily and sitting down on the couch. Neem joins her. She looks away from him sadly. "I'm not used to this yet."
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    “‘At is correct mistress. I've bin caretaker haur fur at leest 5-6 years. I've bin in service tae yer late faither fur abit 12 years ur mair. Please mistress don’t worry yerself, I’m haur tae serve an' protect ye. If ye need anythin' jist ask. Ur ye hungry? I’ll make ye lunch. Is macaroni an' cheese acceptable?”
    (That is correct mistress. I've been caretaker here for at least 5-6 years. I've been in service to your late father for about 12 years or more. Please Mistress don’t worry, I’m here to serve and protect you. If you need anything just ask. Are you hungry? I’ll make you lunch. Is Macaroni and Cheese acceptable?)

    Britt nods and Neem immediately makes her the meal he suggested.
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    Soon the meal was ready and she joined him at the table. “Neem?” she asks.

    “Aye mistress? Is th' food acceptable?"
    Yes Mistress? What is it? Is the food unacceptable?

    “Yes, your food is wonderful. I was just curious about something. Um, where do you sleep? I noticed that this house only has one room.” She says quietly.

    “Mah bed is in th' main room, mistress. It woods be improper fur me tae shaur a room wi' ye.”
    (My bed is in the main room, Mistress. It would be very improper for me to share a room with you.) He says as eats his meal.

    “Improper? How So? If you have your own bed, you can put in with mine. I don’t mind honestly. I see nothing improper about that.” She says vehemently.
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    “Nae. mistress. Ah need tae be in th' main part ay th' hoose jist in case thaur is an intruder. Its mah job tae protect ye. Please understan’. But if it will make ye happy I’ll consider movin' mah bed intae yer room efter we hae gotten tae ken each other better. Is thes okay wi' ye?”
    (No. Mistress. Besides I need to be in the main part of the house just in case there is an intruder. Its my job to protect you Mistress. Please understand. But if it will make you happy I’ll consider moving my bed into your room after we have gotten to know each other better. Is this okay with you?) Neem replies.

    Britt nods in agreement.


    “I’m gonna go for a ride on Argo, get to know her. I’ll be back shortly.” Britt says getting her boots on.

    “Mistress 'at is unwise. Ye don’t ken th' neighborhuid yit. Please bide until Ah can accompany ye oan mah ain horse.”
    (Mistress that is unwise. You don’t know the neighborhood yet. Please wait until I can accompany you on my own horse.) Neem said, against her going out alone.

    Britt shook her head. “No. It’s still light out. I’ll be fine Neem. Please don’t worry. Put the leftover food away and I’ll be back.”

    Neem was worried but inclined his head to her. “As ye wish mistress. But ken thes, Ah will bide up until yer return. If ye arenae haem by dark Ah will be lookin' fur ye an' Argo.”
    (As you wish Mistress. But know this, I will stay up until your return. If you are not home by dark I will be looking for you and Argo.)

    Britt smiles and walks out the door.

    She soon had Argo tacked up and headed down the street.
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    Argo was a beautiful dark dappled Palomino. Her bright coat shone in the setting sun.
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    Britt didn’t go very far just long enough for her to get used to being on the back of a horse. She had always loved horses just never ridden one. Argo was a very patient mare. She seemed to instinctively know that her rider was just a beginner so she went with a slow, steady walk.

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    Fiveme2Fiveme2 Posts: 963 Member
    edited May 2014
    Dawww pretty horse :D I need to redo my challenge T.T I miss my horse but oh wells ill find another once i get everything done :)
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    maykalamaykala Posts: 27
    edited May 2014
    Hello I want to do this challenge so badly but how do you? Also I am willing to create a few stallions for the challenge I can send you a gift with a message that has the links to the downloads.You could keep the stallions too. :D
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    ElijahsBabyGurl9ElijahsBabyGurl9 Posts: 1,326 Member
    edited May 2014
    maykala wrote:
    Hello I want to do this challenge so badly but how do you? Also I am willing to create a few stallions for the challenge I can send you a gift with a message that has the links to the downloads.You could keep the stallions too. :D

    Hello maykala I'm glad that you are interested in this challenge. Its one of my favorites. The official rules can be found here: http://forum.thesims3.com/jforum/posts/list/450566.page

    It will explain all that you need to know about the challenge. I do follow some of the rules but tend to make my own as I go along, as it suits my playing style. And thank you for the use of your stallions. It can get hard later in the challenge to find new sires for foals. Sometimes the Equestrian Centers in my game don't stock new stallions so I have to rely on others for use of theirs. And thank you for the gift. I'm honored. If you like you can upload them to the Exchange (the stallions I mean) and share them with everyone OR you can send them to me via email which ever is easiest for you.

    If you chose the email option I'll post it here so you can find it. If you have anymore questions or need help just ask and I'll help you in any way I can.
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    GypsyWynd1GypsyWynd1 Posts: 154 Member
    edited May 2014
    ElijahsBabyGurl9, your story is great. You are a really good writer, you should be publishing novels.

    This challenge sounds fun. I am tempted to give it a try. :D
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    maykalamaykala Posts: 27
    edited May 2014

    Hello maykala I'm glad that you are interested in this challenge. Its one of my favorites. The official rules can be found here: http://forum.thesims3.com/jforum/posts/list/450566.page

    It will explain all that you need to know about the challenge. I do follow some of the rules but tend to make my own as I go along, as it suits my playing style. And thank you for the use of your stallions. It can get hard later in the challenge to find new sires for foals. Sometimes the Equestrian Centers in my game don't stock new stallions so I have to rely on others for use of theirs. And thank you for the gift. I'm honored. If you like you can upload them to the Exchange (the stallions I mean) and share them with everyone OR you can send them to me via email which ever is easiest for you.

    If you chose the email option I'll post it here so you can find it. If you have anymore questions or need help just ask and I'll help you in any way I can.

    I can put it on exchange for you and others also thank you for the help I am soon going to do the challenge too. :)
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    ElijahsBabyGurl9ElijahsBabyGurl9 Posts: 1,326 Member
    edited May 2014
    maykala wrote:

    Hello maykala I'm glad that you are interested in this challenge. Its one of my favorites. The official rules can be found here: http://forum.thesims3.com/jforum/posts/list/450566.page

    It will explain all that you need to know about the challenge. I do follow some of the rules but tend to make my own as I go along, as it suits my playing style. And thank you for the use of your stallions. It can get hard later in the challenge to find new sires for foals. Sometimes the Equestrian Centers in my game don't stock new stallions so I have to rely on others for use of theirs. And thank you for the gift. I'm honored. If you like you can upload them to the Exchange (the stallions I mean) and share them with everyone OR you can send them to me via email which ever is easiest for you.

    If you chose the email option I'll post it here so you can find it. If you have anymore questions or need help just ask and I'll help you in any way I can.

    I can put it on exchange for you and others also thank you for the help I am soon going to do the challenge too. :)

    ~^_^~ Thanks so much maykala! I look forward to reading your story if you decide to write one! :D I also sent you a FR and Rec'd everything in your studio! I raided it and found some beautiful stallions to use. I've chosen quite a few of them 7 of them to be precise that will be studs in my story. I'll make sure to give you the credit for their use and post links to them on my front page ^_^!
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    ElijahsBabyGurl9ElijahsBabyGurl9 Posts: 1,326 Member
    edited May 2014
    CONTINUATION OF CHAPTER ONE

    Britt and Neem went to bed that night dreaming of future foals and the prospects of having a successful ranch. The next morning Britt decided to apply at the Science Center for work. She knew that someone had to bring in extra income until the foals started being born. She also voiced her displeasure to Neem about their current living situation.

    “I know we’re supposed to start out slow but I can’t live like this Neem. This house is WAY too small for all of us. Isnt there something you can do?”
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    Neem thought about it and smiled. “Why aye thaur is mistress. Ah ken ay an auld ranch property 'at was recently vacated by their former tenants. We coods buy th' property an' move in the-day. How does 'at sound?”
    (Why yes there is Mistress. I know of an old ranch property that was recently vacated by their former tenants. We could buy the property and move in today. How does that sound?) Neem replied as he took out his phone.
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    Britt’s eyes lit up in excitement. “That’ll be perfect. We have just enough funds for it. Neem, you make that happen and I’ll be the happiest woman in Aurora Springs.”

    Neem nodded dialed the number and spoke to the realtors. “Hello thes is Neem Mcbrave. Mah companion an' Ah are interested in th' property oan th' edge ay town, 28 Seaside Court, that’s correct. We’d loch tae buy it an' we’ll pay in cash."
    (Hello this is Neem McBrave. My companion and I are interested in the property on the edge of town, 28 Seaside Court, that’s correct. We’d like to buy it and we’ll pay in cash.) After several moments of conversation, Neem hung up while Britt watched quietly. “It’s aw sit mistress. We can move in immediately.”
    (It’s all set Mistress. We can move in immediately.)

    Britt smiled broadly and ran inside to get her luggage. After about 15 minutes she was done packing. The family climbed into the cab and soon they were off to their new house. After a short drive they pulled up.

    Britt could not believe her eyes. The property was huge.

    A small yellow house was engulfed by the barn sitting right next to it. There were three large pastures, a small backyard and even a gardening area. The house was moderately bigger than their last one with one bathroom, 2 large bedrooms and a good sized kitchen.
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    Britt loved it already. Argo was super excited and ran into the pasture nearest the house and rolled on the ground. Britt and Neem laughed. Pretzel took her new surroundings in stride looking calmly around the house before finding the biscuit ball and doghouse in the rear of the property.

    Britt and Neem settled in nicely and ate macaroni and cheese for their missed breakfast. “I love the new house Neem, it’s wonderful.” Britt replied between bites of her food.
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    “I’m glad 'at ye ur happy, mistress. Ah aeem tae make ye happy. As lang as ye ur pleased 'en sae am Ah. But aye Ah tay, loove th' new haem. Its refreshin' tae bide oan sic' a large plot ay lain. There’s mair freedom haur.”
    (I’m glad that you are pleased, Mistress. Remember I aim to make you happy. As long as you are pleased then so am I. But yes I too, love the new home. It’s very refreshing to live on such a large plot of land. There’s more freedom here.) Neem replied washing the dishes.
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    Amidst the revelry, Britt suddenly looked at the clock she was late for work! Her face paled. “OH NO!! I’M LATE! I’ve got to go, Neem. Please make sure that Argo has some fresh hay scattered and that Pretzel eats. Other than that, enjoy your day. I’ll be home later.”

    “Hae a guid day at wark, mistress. Th' house will be freshened up when ye return.”
    (Have a good day at work, Mistress. The house will be freshened up when you return.)Neem replied politely and gave a small bow.

    Britt nodded and rushed out the door. Late for her first day of work, talk about bad impressions.

    Neem went out and scattered hay for Argo and filled Pretzel’s dish as his Mistress had instructed him to do.
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    Argo decided to give Neem some attention and gave him a loving gentle nuzzle on his cheek with her nose in thanks for the hay. He laughed and petted her nose. “Loove ye tae lassie, yer welcome.”
    (Love you to girl, your welcome.)
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    As the day wore on Neem became slightly bored since all of his chores were finished. He decided to practice his Alchemy. He was getting more skilled each day.
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    He also took notice of how lonely Pretzel seemed to be and decided to adopt a dog from the shelter by the name of InkBlott or Inky for short. He was a grey dog with white markings and some unusual blue coloring on his head and ears. Pretzel took to him immediately and they became fast friends.
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    At his own discretion Neem also adopted two stud colts for the start of his Mistress’ ranch. A young crème colored foal with a red blaze that went by the name of Hades and a brown spotted foal whose name was Kaiser. Both would be excellent additions to his Mistresses’ breeding program when they grew up.

    Neem just hoped that his Mistress didn't get upset with him making decisions regarding her ranch on his own. He lived to serve and help her so in his mind he is doing just that. And the colts were very handsome, they'd produce stunning foals of their own!

    HADES Mixed Breed Traits: Shy, Fast, Agile, Noisy, Piggy
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    KAISER Mixed Breed Traits: Fast, Playful, Nervous, Untrained
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    An older stallion loaned from his owner to start things off. He was a chocolate brown/black horse whose name was Roman. He and Argo wasted no time in getting to know each other. Even though he was slightly smaller than Argo, they would produce a beautiful foal.
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    When Britt came home she was pleasantly surprised at the addition of new animals to the household.

    She loved Inkey and fell in love with the new colts, Kaiser especially. She held high hopes for him.
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    Neem was relieved that his mistress was pleased and not angry with him for making decisions regarding her ranch on his own.

    “Thank you for getting the colts and Inkey, Neem. I love them. Both of those colts will produce stunning foals when they get older! Pretzel loves Inkey I never thought she would get lonely. Thank you for keeping her needs in mind.” Britt said looking down but smiling.
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    Neem bowed. “Its mah pleasure mistress. Th' colts waur a bargain th' chiel sellin' them offered a fair price fur baith an' th' dog was frae th' shelter. He seemed a perfect match fur Pretzel an' Ah coods teel she was in need ay th' companionship ay anither dog. Th' stallion ye see thaur is oan loan. th' owner wanted heem tae produce a foal afair bein' retired.”
    (Its my pleasure mistress. The colts were a bargain the gentleman selling them offered a fair price for both and the dog was from the shelter. He seemed a perfect match for Pretzel and I could tell she was in need of the companionship of another dog. The stallion you see out there is on loan. The owner wanted him to produce one last foal before being retired.)

    Britt smiled and nodded.

    Later that evening, both Britt and Neem spent some quality time with each other and the dogs. Each getting a thorough grooming.

    “Inkey is so cute. He and Pretzel make a wonderful pair, don’t you think Neem?” Britt asked as Pretzel licked her on the chin.

    “Aye they dae mistress. They are a guid match. Th' resultin' pups woods be unique.”
    (Yes they do mistress. They are a good match. The resulting pups would be very unique.) Neem quietly replied as he groomed Inkey.
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    Things went well between Argo and Roman and it was later confirmed that Argo was indeed with foal. So Neem decided to return the stallion to reduce any confrontations with the other two on the property.
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    Neem approached the EC and was greeted by one of the stable hands.

    “Good evening sir, how may I help you?”

    “Ello’ thaur laddie, Ah returnin' thes horse. He was oan loan tae us an' I’m sure his owner woods loch heem back.”
    (Hello there lad, I returning this horse. He was on loan to us and I’m sure his owner would like him back.) Neem said bringing Roman up to his side so that the boy could see him.

    “Ah yes. Roman. I hope that your mare will produce a sound foal. Here is the $8,790 promised by the owner. We’ll see to it that he’s returned safely.” the lad calmly.
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    “Thenk ye very much laddie. Mah mistress will be pleased.”
    (Thank you very much. My mistress will be pleased.)Neem replied as the lad handed him the money.

    The stable boy got Roman settled into his stall and returned to Neem.
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    “Please teel th' owner 'at Ah am in his debt. Ah main be gonnae noo. Thank ye fur daein' business wi' me. I’ll definitely be back fur mair horses.”
    (Please tell the owner that I am in his debt. I must be going now. Thank you for doing business with me. I’ll definitely be back for more horses.)Neem said walking out the door without a second glance.
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    While Neem was busy at the EC and Britt working on her garden, Hades aged up into a gorgeous stallion. His crème roan coat shone in the evening light. He would be next in line to sire a foal for Argo.
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    And things were going VERY smoothly between Pretzel and Inkey. Neem and Britt would have another surprise sooner than they expected.
    END OF CHAPTER ONE!

    Chapter One is now finished! Chapter Two on the way!



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    NiemalynNiemalyn Posts: 187 Member
    edited May 2014
    Argo is so pretty. ^.^ And I like Kaiser a lot, too. Can't wait to see him grow up and have a foal with her. =D
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    ElijahsBabyGurl9ElijahsBabyGurl9 Posts: 1,326 Member
    edited May 2014
    Chapter One is finished Whoo! I re-edited it and added all the rest. Chapter Two is on the way! I hope everyone likes the finished version of Chapter One. :D
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    ElijahsBabyGurl9ElijahsBabyGurl9 Posts: 1,326 Member
    edited November 2014
    Chapter Two now posted!
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    ElijahsBabyGurl9ElijahsBabyGurl9 Posts: 1,326 Member
    edited May 2014
    Giving my story a bump to keep it on top. The second chapter will be posted above. Hope everyone has liked the first chapter so far. Sorry its taking so long to get the second one out...RL is in the way atm. :oops:
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    ElijahsBabyGurl9ElijahsBabyGurl9 Posts: 1,326 Member
    Second Chapter coming soon. Foal and Stallion list updated and link for first dog found and added. Working hard trying to get second chapter finished!! Thank you for staying with me!
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    ktwilight777ktwilight777 Posts: 172 Member
    Great story and lovely horses, can't wait to read more! :)
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    Fiveme2Fiveme2 Posts: 963 Member
    WOOT! Love he story and the horses :)
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    PandaPanda Posts: 76 Member
    edited September 2014
    Looks like fun... :)
    Hades look beautiful!
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    ElijahsBabyGurl9ElijahsBabyGurl9 Posts: 1,326 Member
    edited November 2014
    Chapter Two: Puppies, Kittens, and Foals OH MY!

    Several weeks later after Roman had been sold, Neem noticed that Argo was extremely restless and temperamental. She stayed in the further most pasture almost exclusively and refused to let either Britt or Neem do any kind of work with her. They kept Hades in a separate pasture to prevent any squabbles. Kaiser was allowed to roam since he was a foal. Soon it was apparent why Argo was acting up. A beautiful chocolate dapple lay sleeping at Argo’s feet. The little angel was named Honey Pie. Neem was pleasantly surprised and told Britt of the news.
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    Britt looked out the window to see Honey Pie standing next to her mother, Argo looking proud.
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    “She looks a lot like Roman doesn’t she Neem?” Britt replied as she studied the foal.
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    “Indeed she does Mistress. She has her mother’s markings but her father’s coloring. A beautiful blend of both. Once she’s fully trained she should sell for quite a fair price.” Neem said smiling broadly.

    Britt laughed and agreed. Soon after Honey Pie’s birth Pretzel lay in the middle of the kitchen whining uncomfortably. Both Neem and Britt turned to her in alarm watching nervously as she gave birth to her puppies. She had four pups 2 males 2 females. The birth went smoothly and Pretzel was in no harm.
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    From left to right: Chakra (f) Phoenix (m) Tiffy (f) Taffy (m)
    The pups were so cute. Britt fell in love with all of them all but she knew there was not enough room on the farm for all of them plus four horses. So with Neem’s help homes were found for three of the four puppies. Britt decided she couldn’t part with the little white male puppy she affectionately named Phoenix. He was just adorable and soon fit in perfectly with the rest of the family.
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    Britt was out tending her garden when Neem came to her with a small problem.

    “Mistress, forgive me for disturbing you while you are gardening but I need to talk to you.” He replied waiting as she finished up.

    “Yes Neem? What is the matter?” Britt replied brushing dirt from her hands and pants.

    “Well, I was in the barn getting some feed for Argo and the other horses when I noticed some small creatures scurrying about. The barn has mice mistress. May I suggest we get a couple of cats to rid ourselves of them?” he asked showing her an ad for free kittens in the paper.

    “I didn’t know we had mice. Yes getting some cats is a good idea Neem. A male and female preferably and we will need to make sure they are properly trained. You see to the arrangements, Neem. It’ll be nice to have a cat.”

    Neem nodded and went back inside to call the number on the ad to reserve two kittens for himself and his mistress. He was glad she agreed he didn’t want the feed in the barn to become contaminated from the mice. The kittens were named Mischief and Magic and would be available soon.

    MORE TO COME...COLLEGE IS PREVENTING PROPER UPDATES...PLEASE BEAR WITH ME!


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    Fiveme2Fiveme2 Posts: 963 Member
    WOOT pretty babies :DD i wan foalnap your baby lol
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    PandaPanda Posts: 76 Member
    I love how the pups have blue spots on them. cx
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    NiemalynNiemalyn Posts: 187 Member
    I love your story. =)
    But those puppies... they were all so cute.
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    Saasha26Saasha26 Posts: 58 New Member
    Lovely stories so far.
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    QuizicalcoatlQuizicalcoatl Posts: 2 New Member
    Wow, I love it. Great story so far!
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    Fiveme2Fiveme2 Posts: 963 Member
    Love it :)
    You can always UAW mine from my exchange :)
    Think about doing one but idk if I was to to a cat or dog or horse or just Two of the three hehehehe
    Still need my charger thou :(
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