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    Dark Heresy - The Light That Blinds [Ch 08]

    MissAnneMissAnne Posts: 544 New Member
    in The Sims 3 Stories and Legacies
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    Chapter One - Princess of Nothing http://missanne82.livejournal.com/1092.html
    Chapter Two - The Kingdom of Ash and Bone http://missanne82.livejournal.com/2100.html

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      Stace89Stace89 Posts: 54
      edited January 2012
      I love your pictures, they're fantastic! And the story's really well written. Definitely bookmarked in my favourites!
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      countthestarscountthestars Posts: 556
      edited January 2012
      Wow. This is really, really good. I don't even know where to start!

      First of all, your pictures are absolutely gorgeous. I love both the photo effects you use and the framing/staging. Just well done, all around.

      As for the story itself... it's brilliant so far. You have fantastic descriptions, characters, plot, everything. Malik's descriptions of battle particularly stood out to me (and I loved the dramatic black and white shots, too). Asher's little scheme with the necklace is intriguing, too. Only two chapters in, and I'm really getting a sense of the characters' motivations and personalities.

      You've set up a foundation for an amazing story and I am dying for the next update.
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      MissAnneMissAnne Posts: 544 New Member
      edited February 2012
      http://missanne82.livejournal.com/2776.html

      Chapter Three
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      DuckypantsDuckypants Posts: 2,187 Member
      edited February 2012
      I love this story so far! I hope there is an update soon!
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      MissAnneMissAnne Posts: 544 New Member
      edited March 2012
      Thanks for reading ^-^

      Unfortunately, the pictures for chapter 4 are a bit difficult to stage so it may take a while.
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      MissAnneMissAnne Posts: 544 New Member
      edited March 2012
      Chapter 4 has been posted:

      http://missanne82.livejournal.com/3922.html
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      DuckypantsDuckypants Posts: 2,187 Member
      edited April 2012
      Chapter four did not dissapoint! I hope she doesn't think he is weak, for doing what he did.
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      MissAnneMissAnne Posts: 544 New Member
      edited April 2012
      I think you're the only one here reading my thread xD

      Anyway chapter 5&6 is out :O
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      DuckypantsDuckypants Posts: 2,187 Member
      edited April 2012
      Maybe I am the only one, and I can't believe it if its true. Because your story is awesome.
      So is it her? Or is it not her? Has she been able to see the whole time?

      And I love how characters from Skyrim made a guest appearance, lol. Devin is my favorite. He reminds me of Jason Statham, if you know who that is. You did a good job with them.
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      MissAnneMissAnne Posts: 544 New Member
      edited April 2012
      I was actually going to have the "reveal" much later in the story, but knowing how slow I write, I'll probably never get that far xD

      But yeah, she's not blind and she's not Aaliyah either.

      I'm bad with coming up with fantasy names, so I usually name characters off of books I read and games I play xD The last thing I played was Skyrim, so I rolled with that.
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      MissAnneMissAnne Posts: 544 New Member
      edited April 2012
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      DuckypantsDuckypants Posts: 2,187 Member
      edited April 2012
      I loved chapter seven! There have got to be more than three people reading your story! Please keep going with it!
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      MissAnneMissAnne Posts: 544 New Member
      edited May 2012
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      DuckypantsDuckypants Posts: 2,187 Member
      edited May 2012
      Yay new chapter! (Lol you had to know I would comment. I love this story.)
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      MissAnneMissAnne Posts: 544 New Member
      edited May 2012
      Lol, Duckypants xD

      I don't think I'll be posting updates in this thread anyone, since you're like the only person here o__o

      It'll be one less place for me to keep track of.
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      DuckypantsDuckypants Posts: 2,187 Member
      edited May 2012
      Alright. I'll just bookmark your site. Thanks for letting me know :D
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