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Lan Tribe

Kwan Lan of China. She was tired of the Chinese patriarchy society. Espically when there had only been two important females in the Chinese history. So she decide to move somewhere where she could start her own tribe.
Chapter 1:

This is the Creator Kwan Lan
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This is her slave Jarret
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Jarret watched her as she trained
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"What a lovely meal slave Jarret"
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"Thank you creator"
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    ElesmeraElesmera Posts: 556 Member
    Looking forward to future updates @Madamelee also bookmarked :)
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    MadameLeeMadameLee Posts: 32,757 Member
    Elesmera wrote: »
    Looking forward to future updates @Madamelee also bookmarked :)

    Thanks. This is my first shoot at doing an Amazon challenge. I only decided to have a Chinese person as the Creator since there were too many Caucasians creators. You should also check out my Disney-Charming legacy its in my siggy.
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    ElesmeraElesmera Posts: 556 Member
    I like the fact that your Creator is Chinese it makes your story unique.
    Ok I will check it out.
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    MadameLeeMadameLee Posts: 32,757 Member
    Gen 1: chapter 2
    We accepted a new woman Bah Mcneal and her slave, Edmund Slave into the tribe.
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    Emunded made a meal-I really wish the slaves would eat in their house. Not in mine
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    I work out and the Bah and Jarret come and talk to me. Turns out Bah wanted to mate with Jarret. I said that he was already taken.
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    Later in the day Jarret and I tried for baby
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    I'm pregnant. I really hope its girl. I couldn't bare if I had to mate with another slave. Its a reason my family disowned me. I didn't want to get married or change my name.

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    Jarret was glad about the news. And he was preparing to die because of the tribe.
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    He died
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    MadameLeeMadameLee Posts: 32,757 Member
    edited December 2015
    Gen 1: Chapter 3: Bha's Point of View

    It took several weeks before I, the Gather Bha got over loosing her best friend. I know I shouldn't have fallen in love with the slave Jarrett who was pre-destiny to be the Creator's sire for a potentional heiress.

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    Three weeks later Lan came over to me and said "Lan, would you like to mate with your slave?" I replied "I don't really know him Creator. He was a gift from my guardians when I left to wander the world." "I order you to mate with him!. If not you will have to leave." I replied "Yes Creator." I didn't want to get on her bad side.
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    I spend some time with him and got to know him:
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    In the mean time, Lan was on the treadmill:
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    "I wish this kid would get out of me!!" Lan complained to me one day at breakfast. I just ate silenty
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    and went into labour a couple of hours later
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    she gave birth to a creator heiress whom she named Jia
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    our new slave, Daqurin was the first of us to greet the Creator Heiress
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    and I was next
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    Jarret and I woohooed and I was pregant!!
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    Emund will have to move away..since we can't have half-siblings in this tribe. But at least he doesn't have to be scarficed to Athena, our goddess not like the Creators' sires
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    MadameLeeMadameLee Posts: 32,757 Member
    edited December 2015
    Gem 1; Chapter 4

    Our provider started to take care of little Jia.
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    I didn't like the provider touching my heiress without permisson. When I saw her it brought back some bad memories. "I don't want you in here!!" Her: "I'm the provider-I'm SUPPOSE to touch her!!"
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    and then she and the other slave Daqurin kept griving over the dead slave Jarrett
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    Bha was fishing to gain the fishing skill
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    the new provider tried to cooked supper for us and we ended up with a fire in the slaves' room but me and the other slave put it out

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    and then she was able to cook supper
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    Late that night, Bha saw Jarrett's ghost. Jarret said "If Lan isn't careful she will regret angering the provider"
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    Before supper the provider felt Bha's stomach
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    She then challenged me to a game after breakfast the next day
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    The next day after breakfast the provider and I sat down at the chess table:
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    Bha came over and tried to encourage the provider and I snapped at Bha "Stay out of it!!" [Bha replied "Yes creator!" [/b] but I lost the game and upset the entire game board
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    I then put her in the cell of punishment this is what happened:
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    Little Jia grow up into a lovely child!
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    "Daqurin?" "Yes creator heiress?" "Why are you dress like that?" I'm a slave for you and your mom. In this world women rule. One day you will take you're mom's place."

    He then helped Jia with her homework after cooking a hotdog
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    Bha gave birth to a tribal son named Edwin I think.
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    MadameLeeMadameLee Posts: 32,757 Member
    edited December 2015
    Gen 1: Chapter 5

    (I totally forgot to get rid of the plumbob while I was taking videos. Sorry! I was more concern about making sure that the walls were up)
    Jia cried at his grave she wonder if she would ever meet him
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    The next night her wish was granted
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    Jarret then exercised with my mom
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    Aunt Bha spent time with her son
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    I couldn't wait for Edwin to grow up so I had a play-mate!!
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    Daqurin discovered a fire and almost died in it if it wasn't for Aunt Bha
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    Edwin grow up
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    My mom told us a very cool story about pirates
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    Aunt Ama performed the cermony kiss and wohooed with Daqurin
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    MarialeinMarialein Posts: 2,885 Member
    edited October 2015
    Your stroy is quite good by now :) Maybe you can use some more dialoges to make it even more interesting. ;)
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    MadameLeeMadameLee Posts: 32,757 Member
    edited December 2015
    Gen 1: chapter 6

    The provider said to her child's father "Hey (name) I'm pregant..I'm not sure what, we're going to do with you."
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    Edwin said " Jia When we grew up could I be your first option to mate with?" Jia replied "Do I have to promise that now through? We're young." Bha "Shut up the two of you I'm trying to listen!!

    "Mom, Edwin wants me to mate with him when I'm Creator.. I think its a bit too soon to think about it? I mean I'm only ten." I replied "Yeah it is too soon"
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    MadameLeeMadameLee Posts: 32,757 Member
    edited December 2015
    Gen 1: chapter 7

    I welecome our new shaman into the tribe, Sigi
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    The provider gave birth to a daughter we named Ginny
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    Edwin moped the floor as the latest slave repaired the fridge
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    MadameLeeMadameLee Posts: 32,757 Member
    edited December 2015
    Gen 1: chapter 8

    I helped with Ginny a lot.
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    on Jia;s birthday we invited Jia's uncle to join us. Before Jia blew out the cake she played for the last time on the Jungle Gym
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    and looked at her new buffet tables
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    She grew up to look like me mostly..
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    Persefona711Persefona711 Posts: 356 Member
    Jia is really pretty.
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    MadameLeeMadameLee Posts: 32,757 Member
    Jia is really pretty.

    thanks if you want to see what her parents look like look at the oringally post
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    MadameLeeMadameLee Posts: 32,757 Member
    Gen 1 chapter 9
    I helped train Jia in becoming the next leader
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    "Jia, you know the elephant necklace I wear?"
    "yes mother, I do..what about it?"
    "It will pass to you when you become the creator."
    "Is there anything else mother?"
    "Yes there is, you have to fight with a champion of the temple..before you become creator...she's just a teenager herself now, but she's very welled trained"

    A couple of hours after we returned home, Alfred came to me and "Creator, I want to ask you something.." I said "Go ahead Alfred." Alfred "I want to be first to mate with your daughter when she becames the creator.."
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    I replied angriy "How dare you ask me of doing such a thing!!."


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    A couple of seconds later I said "I will talk to Jia about it."

    Jia "You wanted to see me mom?"
    "Yes I did want to talk to you..what a lovely outfit dear.."
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    "I know you didn't call me out here to talk about my outfit..so out with it!"
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    "Alfred asked when you become creator if he can mate with you first.. he's a good looking sim and he has traits which could be good in a future husband."
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    " How DARE you arranged my first mate Mother. I promised myself to Edwin.."
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    "How about we have an council meeting about it?" "Will that included Ginny or no?" "Yes it will included Ginny.."
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    I said "We have this issue, when Jia, the creator heiress becomes creator, Alfred wants to mate with her first, but Jia says she promised herself to Edwin..so who should she mate with when she's older?"
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    Bha "Maybe when Edwin's a YA he should fight with Alfred?"
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    Alma: "Is there an more sensible alternative?"

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    Sigja; "I can connect with the spirts to see what they say about who she should mate with."
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    "Thank you Sigja
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    MadameLeeMadameLee Posts: 32,757 Member
    edited December 2015
    Gen 1: Chapter 10

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    That night Jia's dad appeared as he does every night. Jia talked to him "Dad what do I do? I promised Edwin I would mate with him. But Alfred thinks I should mate with him since he's stronger."


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    Jia and Ginny talk a lot "What's with all the talk of babies Jia?" Jia "Because we're a newish tribe, we have to have babies when we're YAs, espically me, to continue on the line. Slaves that the Creator mates with, have to be scafrice to the goddess of Wisdom. Heck why Jarret, my dad is a ghost. Well your dad and Edwin's dad only are exiles from our tribe." Ginny "Oh..that expalins it"

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    Sigja mediate and ended up in a weird place
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    Sigja came to talk to me "According to my vison, Edwin would be the best choice. A promise is a promise after all." I said "Thank you Sigja"

    The next day, the future father of my granddaughter, aged up into a teen
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    This is what he looks like now:
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    his parents:
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    (Bha)

    Edward (dad)
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    MadameLeeMadameLee Posts: 32,757 Member
    Marialein wrote: »
    It is good that Sigja could help the tribe

    yeah thanks for commenting
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    MadameLeeMadameLee Posts: 32,757 Member
    Gen 1: Chapter 11

    My daughter went to the temple to fight the temple's champion. She won but as soon as she did-the ex-champion attack her
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    I yelled at the ex-champion "How DARE you attack my daughter when she won fair and square!"
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    Edwin became an adult
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    MadameLeeMadameLee Posts: 32,757 Member
    edited January 2016
    Gen 2 Chapter 1
    I'm Jia, the new Creator Heiress. I got together with Edwin
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    We woohooed-I don't want to wait
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    I got pregent and told Edwin
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    We the tribe had to decide what to do-either follow tradition or break from it.

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    Alma suggested we break off tradition. but Bha, argued that we shouldn't do that because other tribes had been cursed if they broke it with bad luck. Edwin suggested that he should just be left to die. I asked Siga to see what the future said. According to her the future had no Edwin in it



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    Persefona711Persefona711 Posts: 356 Member
    Great chapter, I'm curious if tribe breaks the tradition.
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    MadameLeeMadameLee Posts: 32,757 Member
    Great chapter, I'm curious if tribe breaks the tradition.

    thanks!! The way Siga cried means bad news
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    MadameLeeMadameLee Posts: 32,757 Member
    Gen 2: Chapter 2:

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    that but we didn't want to anger the goddess or the Queen Hawkika

    The two tribal daughters did their homework
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    I gave birth to a little girl named Elizabeth
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    Persefona711Persefona711 Posts: 356 Member
    edited January 2016
    poor Edwin :(
    but cheers for sweet Elizabeth ^^
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    MadameLeeMadameLee Posts: 32,757 Member
    I'm starting from strach again..since I had to delete that file

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