then I cringe for an hour because I notice all of my typos or wonder what I was I thinking with some choices (looking at you, Nightfall). And then I get this burning desire to EDIT EVERYTHING.
For some reason, I thought it was funny when Omar turned into a bunny. Like, one moment he looked enraged, and the next moment - bunny.
Chapter 4.08 - Vice
Chapter 4.09 - Heart of Gold
Hey, welcome back. Glad you're enjoying the doom and gloom.
As fun as it is to get comments, I really don't mind you not commenting as you go. It's been so long since I wrote the earlier books that I've forgotten a lot of the details, so I have to read the chapter back to understand what the reader is on about. And then I cringe for an hour because I notice all of my typos or wonder what I was I thinking with some choices (looking at you, Nightfall). And then I get this burning desire to EDIT EVERYTHING.
So, yeah. Sporadic 'hey, I like this thing you're doing' comments are totally fine by me.
Also for everyone who's up to date, yes I realise it's been ages since I put a chapter out. You'll get one tomorrow. It contains fire.
That's because you're reading the Author's Version. Everyone else is reading the Audience's Version, and it's way better.
I really do like this thing you're doing. It is, from my point of view here in the audience, extremely well done, and exciting to read. I love it when the "good" and "bad" of characters gets very complicated. Plus, I like your sense of humor. The TV news panels have been really cracking me up.
Chapter 4.10 - Undo Button
Chapter 4.11 - Chasing Ghosts
Chapter 4.12 - Holy Potato!
And I survived. But somehow I suspect your promise that it gets "better" in Book Three is a lie.
You are a fantastic writer. I am completely hooked on these messed-up characters and all their messed-up stories.