Would really appreciate feedback on my attempt at a legacy. This is what I've done so far
http://s1231.beta.photobucket.com/user/TEXASKITTYKAT/story/12663
Needless-to-say, I have never really gotten into story telling & would like any suggestions. I really would like to learn.
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A downside to that is that it moves quite quickly though. We don't really get to know the characters. And before we even know she found a man she is pregnant with her third child. If you take time to introduce the characters the readers will have an easier time following what's happening.
Rainbow Drifter Challenge
I know how that can be.
It's a good start, keep working on it.
Rainbow Drifter Challenge
http://s1231.beta.photobucket.com/user/TEXASKITTYKAT/story/12663#
http://www.thesims3.com/assetDetail.html?assetId=7079944
She & her family still reside in Riverview but I may consider moving them to Moonlight Falls in the future. I'm really trying to follow the legacy rules.