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Uzoma Legacy

Would really appreciate feedback on my attempt at a legacy. This is what I've done so far http://s1231.beta.photobucket.com/user/TEXASKITTYKAT/story/12663

Needless-to-say, I have never really gotten into story telling & would like any suggestions. I really would like to learn.

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  • fruhurricanefruhurricane Posts: 2,204 Member
    edited March 2013
    I liked that format for storytelling. It reminds of a photo album which is nice. :)

    A downside to that is that it moves quite quickly though. We don't really get to know the characters. And before we even know she found a man she is pregnant with her third child. If you take time to introduce the characters the readers will have an easier time following what's happening.
  • TEXASKITTYKATTEXASKITTYKAT Posts: 5,909 Member
    edited March 2013
    fruhurricane, thanks so very much for your input & helpful tips. I truly appreciate you taking the time to read what I've done so far. I definitely agree with you. I really do need to add more pics. I simply got into playing the game & actually forgot to take more pics to fill in the storyline.
  • fruhurricanefruhurricane Posts: 2,204 Member
    edited March 2013
    fruhurricane, thanks so very much for your input & helpful tips. I truly appreciate you taking the time to read what I've done so far. I definitely agree with you. I really do need to add more pics. I simply got into playing the game & actually forgot to take more pics to fill in the storyline.

    I know how that can be. :)

    It's a good start, keep working on it.
  • TEXASKITTYKATTEXASKITTYKAT Posts: 5,909 Member
    edited March 2013
    Added some more but don't know how to do add on's so here goes
    http://s1231.beta.photobucket.com/user/TEXASKITTYKAT/story/12663#
  • GreenonePlyGreenonePly Posts: 352 New Member
    edited March 2013
    love the way it's set up very unique. I also like ur sim did u upload her to the exchange yet? She would make a great fortune teller for moonlight falls. :mrgreen:
  • TEXASKITTYKATTEXASKITTYKAT Posts: 5,909 Member
    edited March 2013
    GreenonePly, thanks for the input. Here's the download link for Kalish if you or anyone is interested.
    http://www.thesims3.com/assetDetail.html?assetId=7079944
    She & her family still reside in Riverview but I may consider moving them to Moonlight Falls in the future. I'm really trying to follow the legacy rules.
  • cbrock7cbrock7 Posts: 1,026 Member
    edited March 2013
    Wow, I think you did an awesome job, lots of hard work here.
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