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  • Silverofdreams30Silverofdreams30 Posts: 7,200 Member
    " someday or one day"

    Chapter two


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    I decided it was a good idea to visit a few areas around the city and
    talk to people face to face. It was a Sunday, and Sundays a lot of people usually are off and have time to relax
    outdoors.

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    I went to look at the movie posters, maybe my father is a famous actor, and my mother could not
    stay with him so why she said he left before I was born. I guess it is not one of my best ideas to go after, but a girl can
    dream, right?

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    Nothing interesting here I passed by quickly.

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    That fire lady seems late to work, good she can run quickly they probably need to be
    very fast, I thought to myself.

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    I saw a lady taking a rest by one of the benches outside the grocery store.
    I walked outside to go greet her.

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    " Hello, my name is Gwen, I am new in town" I introduced myself.

    " Hi Gwen, how nice to meet you, I'm Cornelia one of them who have
    lived the longest here
    ". Cornelia said and gave the girl a warm smile.

    " Can I help you"?

    " Well it might be a long shot, but I am looking about clues to find my father,
    I moved here with my mother who is too secretive about her past".

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    " Wow, do you mean your father left you and your mother without even giving her a hint beforehand"?
    Cornelia seemed really surprised to hear this fact, it was not a very usual event.

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    " I'm not sure, that's why I am trying to figure out what happened during that time, I was not even born
    remember, so I am as clueless as everyone
    ".

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    " I see, yeah maybe try the library, there they have all sort of files and you are
    bound to find something interesting I am sure, I am afraid I never knew your grandmother
    so not a big help here
    ". She said as she stood up to walk home.

    " You are right, I may have to start with the library, thank you, Cornelia, hope we will meet
    again
    ", Gwen said and decided it was time to go to the library.

    To be continued



  • chonkiechonkie Posts: 67 Member
    New chapter! Woo! :)
    I like that you have Gwen comment on more mundane things, small details, like the firefighter. It feels a bit more organic as opposed to never letting a character's mind wander.
    Cornelia gave her pretty solid advice. If anything remotely historical / important is archived in the library, she might actually finds something like a family tree, or just genealogy documents in general.
  • emorrillemorrill Posts: 8,110 Member
    @Silverofdreams30 Gwen is such a pretty sim. :star: (I forget if I told you that already. :p )
    Love that pic of her studying the movie poster and wondering. ;) Great pose!
    That's Cornelia Goth!? :open_mouth: Love her pink hair color. :blush:
    I do hope Gwen finds lots of answers at the library. I'm getting crazy curious about her dad now and it's driving me crazy! :p

    You're doing well keeping us engaged. :kissing_heart:
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  • Silverofdreams30Silverofdreams30 Posts: 7,200 Member
    @chonkie

    Thank you for reading, I enjoy letting her mind thinking for herself and
    not have her do what I say all the time.

    @emorrill

    Thank you, as you know I'm no writer, I just " go with the flow" and do not
    plan ahead, I usually take screenshots then type up stuff after that.
    I'm glad the story is intriguing enough hehe, I do like the suspense, and as I told
    @DivaDoodle I have not figured out the father plot just yet,
  • DivaDoodleDivaDoodle Posts: 1,858 Member

    @Silverofdreams30 I'm glad you feel better! I stayed away from the forum yesterday as well.
    too achy after physical therapy! But it is supposed to make me feel better! LOL 😂

    Wonderful Update!

    I love every picture of Gwen! how she is deciding with her hand to her lips!

    Cornelia looks awesome! I love her pink hair! she is so young and pretty!

    Perfect surprised look of Cornelia! great catch!

    It is so fun to follow what little Gwen is doing and hear her thoughts! :)
  • TamijoTamijo Posts: 1,072 Member

    @Silverofdreams30
    Great idea from Cornelia to direct her to the library, might be some old newspapers and stuff there.
    As always very HQ pictures.
    My active stories: Appaloosa County..*.. Sinful Sisters.....*.....Earlier stories:..*..Survivors the River..*.. A Memoir of Grace "Slick" Joplin
  • Silverofdreams30Silverofdreams30 Posts: 7,200 Member
    @DivaDoodle

    Thank you, it fun exploring different areas of a world,
    I never look too closely at the buildings so this is quite fun.

    @Tamijo

    Thank you,
    I'm happy to hear you enjoy the photos.
    Well, see what comes next.
  • bekkasanbekkasan Posts: 10,171 Member

    @Silverofdreams30 Gwen is such a pretty teen.
    She is certainly determined to find out about her Dad. Can't say I blame her.
    Cornelia looks so different with your makeover. She is much prettier and I love the pink hair.
    Good idea to check out the library!
  • Silverofdreams30Silverofdreams30 Posts: 7,200 Member
    @bekkasan

    Thank you, yes she's a very determined girl wanting to find out the
    truth about her father. It's fun figuring things out as I go.
  • Silverofdreams30Silverofdreams30 Posts: 7,200 Member
    " someday or one day"

    Chapter two, part two

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    Gwen took a cab over to Sunset Valleys' local library.

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    " wow creator look, that building there I want to go there"! (she let me now
    as free will options are closed off for now.)

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    She walked up the few steps there was.

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    " Ok let's see, I have to look up the local library articles, maybe I can
    find something there
    ".

    She told herself as she looked the correct path up, the computers at the library had
    much more to them than what an original home computer had.
    there were lots of different articles about " Sunset Valley", history documents that looked too old for what she
    wanted, other documents that handled the economy, and some articles were about crimes and such.
    There was gossip about local celebs, but no Peters mentioned so her dad could not be someone local that seemed
    for sure.

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    Other people started to turn up at the library, Cassandra seemed to follow her own
    advice and brought Gunther there too.


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    Cassandra was not sure why she went here though.

    to be continued...






  • chonkiechonkie Posts: 67 Member
    Too bad Gwen didn't find anything usual at the library.
    Snooping isn't really the best thing to do, but maybe she'll get an opportunity to look through family documents whenever she's home alone?
  • emorrillemorrill Posts: 8,110 Member
    @Silverofdreams30 I had a feeling Gwen's dad wasn't a local or I think her mom would've taken her and settled somewhere else. :p

    I keep wondering if her dad is a movie star or something. :mrgreen: Had a one night stand with a fangirl and had to take off. :smirk: (Sorry, you know how my imagination can be sometimes. :lol::p )

    Your Gunther looks... :love: I much prefer the shorter hair.

    I wonder where Gwen will turn for answers now. Perhaps the internet? Or maybe she should confront her mom somehow. I look forward to more. :blush:
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  • DivaDoodleDivaDoodle Posts: 1,858 Member

    @Silverofdreams30 oh good! Just what I was hoping for! An Update!

    YAY! I am Glad that Gwen talks to her creator! :)

    Good thinking to start at the library's computers, Gwen! you never know if there will be an article and picture from years ago!


    I'm glad Mom came here with Gunther. are they dating? She is looking bored standing next to that romantic poster! :o Gunther maybe should take the Hint! ;) lol
  • TamijoTamijo Posts: 1,072 Member

    @Silverofdreams30
    Great update
    She did not get much further in her search, but at least might be able to rule out a local celeb.
    LoL Cassandra seems to be bored to death.
    My active stories: Appaloosa County..*.. Sinful Sisters.....*.....Earlier stories:..*..Survivors the River..*.. A Memoir of Grace "Slick" Joplin
  • Silverofdreams30Silverofdreams30 Posts: 7,200 Member
    edited April 2021
    @emorrill

    Thank you for the sweet comment, I had an idea at first but it was scratched
    when I tested something in another save, so well see where it goes hehe.
    Gunther works better in short hair in my opinion haha.

    @DivaDoodle

    Thank you for the sweet comment, that is not her mother
    it is Cassandra goth which she talked to before heading over to the library.
    Cassandra is married to Gunther.

    @Tamijo

    Thank you for the comment, yeah well see where it
    will go sooner or later :).

    @chonkie

    Thank you, I hope to sort that out
    as the story plots ahead hehe.
  • bekkasanbekkasan Posts: 10,171 Member

    @silver hehe, she is telling watcher what she wants to do!
    Bummer that she didn't discover anything while searching the articles.
    Gunther looks cute!
  • DivaDoodleDivaDoodle Posts: 1,858 Member

    @Silverofdreams30 Oh sorry, my confusion! Of course that is not her Mother, what was I even thinking!!!
    I like the look of Cassandra and Gunther!
  • Silverofdreams30Silverofdreams30 Posts: 7,200 Member
    @bekkasan

    Thank you, I had to redecorate the house cause accidentally removed the launcher cc,
    but it's good I like decorating hehe.

    @DivaDoodle

    No worries my friend hehe

  • Silverofdreams30Silverofdreams30 Posts: 7,200 Member
    " Someday or one day"


    Chapter three

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    " Hey creator, You know I need a bit of a break teens need to have some fun too and not just
    work"

    Gwen was sent out to the park to enjoy some of her own time, it can be quite tiering to look for a person she has no clues about.

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    " Yes, this is exactly what I need right now, thanks to you creator"!

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    " No way, these photos look terrible, why did I decide to try
    this machine out" She thought to herself.

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    " This is the fun things creator! I love playing pool"! She squealed as there was a
    pool table up ahead.

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    Around here there were other people about.

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    She also talked a bit to Holly Alto, which would be her new classmate.

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    Mortimer was out and about.

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    He joined her for a game of chess

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    " Thanks, creator, this was fun for "me time" this afternoon"


    To be continued
  • emorrillemorrill Posts: 8,110 Member
    @Silverofdreams30 Aww, I loved seeing Gwen go out and have some fun. <3 She looked so happy!

    (That Fireman was hot by the way. :love: )
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  • Silverofdreams30Silverofdreams30 Posts: 7,200 Member
    @emorrill

    Thank you,
    The fireman was not too hot before I edited him a bit lol.
  • DivaDoodleDivaDoodle Posts: 1,858 Member

    @Silverofdreams30 So glad that Gwen is having a fun day!

    I love her smile! She is really enjoying herself!

    hahahaa her expression looking at the photos!

    Cool! I always forget that teens can play pool!

    Wow! Great job on that fireman <3

    Gosh you really made the townies attractive! I can hear them all telling you 'thank you, creator!"

    hehehe Gwen and Mortimer's face when she waves Hi! <3


    Great update!
  • Silverofdreams30Silverofdreams30 Posts: 7,200 Member
    @DivaDoodle

    Thank you, I prefer looking at the handsome townies than the originals most of the
    time *lol*. :D. Gwen had a great Sunday afternoon outside just having fun before she had to go to school.
    she even did her schoolwork automatically, I just looked at it in her inventory haha.
  • bekkasanbekkasan Posts: 10,171 Member

    @Silverofdreams30 I love that Gwen asked for a break! lol, she deserves some fun time too. I hope she meets a few cute teen boys.
    Ah ha! Hot fireman bringing food to BBQ. :love:
    Wow...Holly is beautiful! I love her entire vibe in that picture. I'm gonna have to find her and see what I can do with her. That looks like one of the Sims 4 hairs redone for sims 3? It has that chunky, cartoon look to it. But, it suits her very much.
    Glad she enjoyed her time off!
  • TamijoTamijo Posts: 1,072 Member

    @Silverofdreams30
    Great update, meeting a lot of new people, Love the pool table haven’t got that in my game (I think)
    My active stories: Appaloosa County..*.. Sinful Sisters.....*.....Earlier stories:..*..Survivors the River..*.. A Memoir of Grace "Slick" Joplin
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