Hi @DeafSimmer ! That is one hard question. In general, you need to understand them. Put yourself into their shoes, ask why are they acting like they do, what they want to achieve with their actions,… (View Post)
okay, first of all, that is a LOT of questions :D And I understand, it's the first story you have ever written, and you need the feedback. okay let me try. General Okay I gtg now, I'll probably answe… (View Post)
@haswh it has been a year ago since she appeared the last time, and she had only one chapter. So I'm not surprised if more people forgot :sweat_smile: (View Post)