@AdamsEve1231 On that note, how do you plan for your chapters? So, when I start writing a story the first thing I do is figure out the overall plot and all the important scenes that need to be present. Then, I break up each chapter by scene (or try to). As for what my planning looks like, each chapter is just a line or two…
Welcome @Maladi777 ! I can't wait to read your legacy! It's one I've been meaning to for a long time. :smile: Also, if @friendsfan367 needs to go in May, you can also bump me up one as well. I do not mind. :)
I just want to thank everyone for the kind words! With how crazy life has been lately I've felt my motivation to write slipping but how supportive and kind everyone is has perked me up these last few days. @AdamsEve1231 @CitizenErased14 @cecerose0208 @Maladi777 @simscognito @candycottonchu ^_^ I really loved all of your…
I started this story a long time ago and I honestly cannot remember what the initial inspiration was. All of the characters are based on parts of people I know or have known. I myself grew up in with religious grandparents and the church I attended with them was very strict (stricter than they were) so I knew I wanted to…
@AdamsEve1231 I use this lighting mod . I also use a reshader and change my presets depending on the feeling I am going for. @simscognito You are not the only person to feel that way about Jay. The Jay club is small. :smile: @Maladi777 and @InfraGreen Thanks for reading you two! <3 I'm sorry it was a pain in the butt to do…
First of all, thank you so much for reading. <3 I appreciate it a lot. My dog is doing much better. He went in for his checkup Wednesday and his liver enzymes are still elevated so now he has to take supplements but otherwise, he is doing much much better! Thank you for asking! 1. I very rarely let the game dictate what…
Alright! I read half the 4th generation before I went back started from the first generation. I did finish the first and am about half way done with the second. For the readers: 1) What do you think of the challenge aspect of this story? Would you attempt something similar? I would not attempt something similar, but I do…
@Piazzagirl1015 Would you rather I read generation 4 (it's what is listed as reading for this cycle) or would rather I start from Generation 1? If I start from Gen 1 I'll probably only make it through gen 1, maybe halfway through generation 2. I started reading generation 4 and am about 4 chapters in but I'd figured I'd…
@friendsfan367 I was a pleasure to read! @Piazzagirl1015 Thank you! He's a hound mix! I haven't done a DNA test, so I'm not 100 percent sure, but thats what the rescue I got him from told me! :smile: How are you liking Jungle Adventure? It looks like so much fun - like one of the better packs they've done a long time!
1) If you've read before, what differences do you see this time? What similarities to previous iterations of this story? I didn't read the original benders. :[ 2) What's your favorite part/chapter/arc? AYDENS FIRST DAY was my favorite chapter so far. I really enjoy Noel's dialogue here. He cracks me up with these retorts…
@shogunfish This is why I just started over! I still have my sims 3 save file and all the CC on a separate hard drive but the forum changes ruined it for me so I figured I might as well just begin again. :)
Gideon and I thank you guys for all the well wishes! They were very appreciated! I'm reading the benders now and, if you don't mind, can you swap me lower on the discussion order? :) I'd rather my spot in this rotation be given to someone more active than I have been, and I'll take theirs. <3
Hey guys. I am so sorry for being gone again. My dog got really sick over the past two weeks. On Tuesday they told me to be prepared to put him down (he's only two years old), but luckily the emergency surgery they did worked and he's home with me again. Unfortunately, it cost me an arm and a leg (worth it though), so now…
Okay guys, I know I just got back but I am about to get really busy over the next month. Christmas was hectic which is why I haven't really been around this month. And January is my birthday & my mother's birthday, plus my boyfriend's mother bought us tickets to see her in Texas... so I'll be going there for a week and my…
Hey girlie! I missed you around here! Everything is going well on my end! How about yours?! Last I spoke to you, you were about to go to college! Haha, it's really not the different from the original. I just spruced up the writing and bit and filled in some gaps in the plot. ^_^
Okay guys, I know I just got back but I am about to get really busy over the next month. Christmas was hectic which is why I haven't really been around this month. And January is my birthday & my mother's birthday, plus my boyfriend's mother bought us tickets to see her in Texas... so I'll be going there for a week and my…
@friendsfan367 Take care of yourself first and foremost! Reading and writing will always be there. Don't let it stress you. I used to work the retail life and it was... insane during the holidays. Try to rest despite what your mother might say. Some people don't understand because they never worked it (or it has been such…
Hey guys! Thank you all for reading and answering the questions on my story. I really appreciate it. This last week was hectic and I didn't have time to get on the forums at all really. I'm so sorry about my lack of activity (again).
Dialogue. Whenever I write dialogue I feel like my characters all sound the same. It drives me mad but I cannot fix it for the life of me. I also struggle to walk the line between making the conversation feel natural but not too lengthy. Also, pacing. I like to develop my characters to try and explain why they behave…
Chapter Five: Trust As Berries age their colors fade. Bright hues dim to pastels until they succumb to the grayish white that broadcasts their infertility. Survival of our race was the number one priority in Berry. Anyone who couldn’t contribute to our survival, our reproduction, was considered a burden. By the time a…