OK first uh... Hi. this is the official thread to my series New Girl. Yea. You've probably never heard of it. But, if you have say what you think of if. If you haven't go to the link here.
http://www.thesims3.com/contentDetail.html?contentId=235250
ENJOY
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It could use some revision though, some spelling and grammatical errors, but other than that it's going well.
Have you thought about having someone revise your work for you? I have a beta reader for my short stories. They're handy to have. :-D