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December 4 - Everyone ready for the Friday Highlight? It's ready for you here.

New Girl

OK first uh... Hi. this is the official thread to my series New Girl. Yea. You've probably never heard of it. But, if you have say what you think of if. If you haven't go to the link here. http://www.thesims3.com/contentDetail.html?contentId=235250
ENJOY :D

Comments

  • ChristGirl201ChristGirl201 Posts: 1,392 Member
    edited July 2010
    Sounds really good. Also sounds like many people who do move, they don't want to. Seems like you have a good story on your hands and can't wait for more!
  • TimBitTimBit Posts: 278 Member
    edited July 2010
    A good start.

    It could use some revision though, some spelling and grammatical errors, but other than that it's going well. :)
  • hannahcclarkhannahcclark Posts: 19
    edited July 2010
    Well I've never been a good speller so sorry :( but I'm haveing alot of fun with it and i'm happy how it's turned out
  • CouriervaughanCouriervaughan Posts: 20,570 Member
    edited July 2010
    good start
  • LadyDarkSorrowLadyDarkSorrow Posts: 2,865 Member
    edited July 2010
  • TimBitTimBit Posts: 278 Member
    edited July 2010
    Well I've never been a good speller so sorry :( but I'm haveing alot of fun with it and i'm happy how it's turned out

    Have you thought about having someone revise your work for you? I have a beta reader for my short stories. They're handy to have. :-D
  • hannahcclarkhannahcclark Posts: 19
    edited July 2010
    Whats a beta reader???
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