All right maybe this is coming way out of left field but...
Even though the vampires may have been a different kind of story than you originally intended, I feel like the level of highly dramatic.... drama.... completely fits Schemes & Dreams
Enjoyed it very much.
Well written, as always, but I would have left out this part: This next part is short but it's where things take their darkest turn yet. It ends badly for one unlucky sim, but it sets up our happy ending.
Unless you meant this as a disclaimer, there was no need to tell us things take their darkest turn. Or, to let us know a Sim was going to fall on some very bad luck, as it were. Kind of spoiled the suspense you had going, for me, anyway. And unless you are giving us a far less than happy ending, why tell us beforehand?
@GalacticGal I was just giving readers a warning since the previous chapter took so many by surprise. I felt like this might be even more surprising since I’ve never had a sim die in either story. I’m not entirely sure how to handle this sort of material, it is a little outside of my comfort zone.🙂
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Enjoyed it very much.
Unless you meant this as a disclaimer, there was no need to tell us things take their darkest turn. Or, to let us know a Sim was going to fall on some very bad luck, as it were. Kind of spoiled the suspense you had going, for me, anyway. And unless you are giving us a far less than happy ending, why tell us beforehand?
Just a thought.
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