Hiya! I've been reading each chapter and it's so nice to see things are starting to turn around for Finn and Naja. I'm glad they have Bella in their lives and I'm glad that Naja has Duane.
Though I'm afraid that Finn is going to do something unintelligent... like try to move her away from Duane. That would be really selfish of him!
I'm home again. I have had a wonderful holiday. I've been by the sea. High sun and blue sky. A nice break from the enclosed heath of the big city.
this may not be Sulani ... but the real thing
@ThePlumbob I do not see any comments I need to approve.
I do not know if there is a time factor so you might want to try again.
I keep an eye on the page.
I'm home again. I have had a wonderful holiday. I've been by the sea. High sun and blue sky. A nice break from the enclosed heath of the big city.
this may not be Sulani ... but the real thing
@ThePlumbob I do not see any comments I need to approve.
I do not know if there is a time factor so you might want to try again.
I keep an eye on the page.
Welcome back, soumds like you had a lovely time!
Weird, I wonder why that is! The reason I initially asked if you were getting them because whenever I submitted the comment the page would just reload, it didn't say anything was awaiting moderation. I'll try later on my desktop instead of the tablet.
Naja is angry. What happens between her and Duane is not Finn's case! ..... But Finn sticks to his view. .... Naja still has a lot to learn and here she has started a very dangerous game.
@Shadami I had a nice vacation. Thanks
I think you quickly reach it all when you get time again. Some of the chapters are very short so they are read quickly.
Maybe I would do it differently at another time ... but we must all try to find our form of expression.
Here comes another short chapter ...
Finn is desperate. He misses his sister, but where has she gone and how will he ever find her and make it right again?
....He has a little friend who is eager to help him.
Finn wonder about the concept of destiny.
The question is whether he is a victim of his destiny?
Does everything happen because of coincidences and the choices we make in life? .... or is everything predetermined in advance?
He has a friend who is trying to help him with a clarification.
After Makoa's visit, Finn has become aware of where Naja is staying.
In addition, Makoa has told about a woman that Finn should meet.
It's time to try make things right again.
Oh Finn, darling. Love does make you blind, but the headmaster’s pupils almost getting eaten by a cowplant is not because the headmaster was in love. It’s because the headmaster is an irresponsible muppet who keeps giant cowplants in the backyard of his orphanage xD I feel like a big confrontation is about to take place between Finn and Naja, and it’s not going to be pretty.
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Ouch. That’s what I was afraid of. He’s so hell-bent on keeping Naja “safe” (according to his views) and keeping everyone away that it ended up chasing away his only sister. Finn has a lot of self-reflection and growth to go through if he wants to have a healthy relationship with Naja in the future.
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It’s good that he wants to apologize – but the apology itself would be wrong. Finn still thinks he’s in the right, and Naja is being young and naive. He wants to apologize for raising his voice, while he should be apologizing for being too controlling. *sigh* let’s hope Finn realizes that at some point, too.
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@_sims_Yimi Thanks for your comments. They are much appreciated
Yes! the headmaster is very irresponsible, but Finn thinks he is good and lured into depravity.
Finn thinks that it is Naja who has a lot to learn ... but he has a hard time looking beyond his own reflection.
Luckily Finn has a friend who helps him along the way.
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I'm still wondering why you can not write messages in WordPress. I have tried looking in the settings and wondering if I have a plugin that overrules Jetpack.
It's hard to find my way around as I'm a beginner in that field. I think I will take a course in the fall to get direct sparring.
Finn is determined to face the fear he has avoided for so long.
He starts his journey through hell .... what is hiding behind the anxiety?
Perhaps he will discover that the fear is blocking him from facing reality.
Interesting how Finn has kept all of the bad memories in his mind, but actively has to work to remember the good ones. I’ve seen that in a lot of pessimistic people – you can have a day full of good and bad memories, but they’ll remember the bad ones and dismiss the good ones. Sometimes even forget them outright.
Finn seems to be like that, too. I hope that remembering these good memories of his past will help him to grow a little as a person.
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I wonder if something bad happened to Jeff and Angelo or as a result of their relationship (maybe Tom did something to them?) ... That could be another reason for Finn being afraid to see Naja in a relationship with Duante...
Finn is just a pessimist ... of course not without reason.
But it is my purpose to show that he has now spotted some of the nuances of life. That everything is not black or white and that there is light if he dares to see it.
This is a story of development and Finn is not completely hopeless
NB: I hope you have solved the problems with the images on your website
Finn is just a pessimist ... of course not without reason.
But it is my purpose to show that he has now spotted some of the nuances of life. That everything is not black or white and that there is light if he dares to see it.
This is a story of development and Finn is not completely hopeless
NB: I hope you have solved the problems with the images on your website
I think Finn is figuring things out as he looks back over his memories, even if it might be painful at times to do so (considering how miserable he was at the orphanage)
Thank you yes I seem to have figured it out! I will try to have the next chapter published today
Finn has another big task he has to overcome. This time it is about his self-knowledge and his relationship with his sister.
It is time to repair the wounds he has caused.
That's a big step for Finn to take. I'm proud of him. The best thing that Finn can do for his sister now is just let her breathe, probably. Get her a home closer to other people, even if it means they'll live separately. You don't have to live together to have a close relationship, after all. In fact - sometimes people grow closer after splitting up.
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this may not be Sulani ... but the real thing
I do not know if there is a time factor so you might want to try again.
I keep an eye on the page.
Welcome back, soumds like you had a lovely time!
Weird, I wonder why that is! The reason I initially asked if you were getting them because whenever I submitted the comment the page would just reload, it didn't say anything was awaiting moderation. I'll try later on my desktop instead of the tablet.
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Naja is angry. What happens between her and Duane is not Finn's case! ..... But Finn sticks to his view. .... Naja still has a lot to learn and here she has started a very dangerous game.
Chapter 22
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I think you quickly reach it all when you get time again. Some of the chapters are very short so they are read quickly.
Finn is desperate. He misses his sister, but where has she gone and how will he ever find her and make it right again?
....He has a little friend who is eager to help him.
Chapter 23
Chapter 24
I have no doubt that they will reunite though you can tell that they have a strong sibling bond.
Yay the turtles have returned! What a great payoff for Finn's hard work
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Breed Out The Weird *COMPLETE*
You are right that Finn and Naja have an unbreakable bond, but right now Finn is fighting with his demons
The turtles yes ... they have a special symbolic value in history
The question is whether he is a victim of his destiny?
Does everything happen because of coincidences and the choices we make in life? .... or is everything predetermined in advance?
He has a friend who is trying to help him with a clarification.
Chapter 25
In addition, Makoa has told about a woman that Finn should meet.
It's time to try make things right again.
Chapter 26
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Finn thinks that it is Naja who has a lot to learn ... but he has a hard time looking beyond his own reflection.
Luckily Finn has a friend who helps him along the way.
It's hard to find my way around as I'm a beginner in that field. I think I will take a course in the fall to get direct sparring.
He starts his journey through hell .... what is hiding behind the anxiety?
Perhaps he will discover that the fear is blocking him from facing reality.
Chapter 27
Chapter 28
Chapter 29
Finn seems to be like that, too. I hope that remembering these good memories of his past will help him to grow a little as a person.
We'll see what happens to Finn
Vlad The Dad: A 100 Baby Challenge, Vlad as ‘matriarch’ *COMPLETE*
Breed Out The Weird *COMPLETE*
But it is my purpose to show that he has now spotted some of the nuances of life. That everything is not black or white and that there is light if he dares to see it.
This is a story of development and Finn is not completely hopeless
Thank you yes I seem to have figured it out! I will try to have the next chapter published today
Vlad The Dad: A 100 Baby Challenge, Vlad as ‘matriarch’ *COMPLETE*
Breed Out The Weird *COMPLETE*
It is time to repair the wounds he has caused.
Chapter 30