Congratulations to all the top placers Everyone’s entries was awesome, well done everyone. Thanks Judges for your time and effort you are committing to the comp. On a side note, I am not much of a story writer but I will do my best
Being a writer isn't necessary, just displaying your ideas thoroughly in the pic, which you're incredibly good at already! I just wanted a bit more to shine through is all.
Glad I could help, @Spudders_86 Take in what the comments say and you'll just continue to improve. So excited for you getting equal first with someone like @abelhinha35 who is a good friend and an extremely talented editor.
I will take on what was said in the comments. Would be nice to know what the other judges said @MizoreYukii
@Spudders_86 The other judges didn't say anything? What you see on the front page under results is all I received, I'm sorry. When judging we don't make unanimous decisions or have long discussions like you see on TV in ANTM, etc. We each judge separately based on our own thoughts and the provided criteria, and when a judge has time they provide feedback for the contestants. KF was the only one who had the time it seemed, besides me. Jen is feeling better though so hopefully we will be getting 3+ comments from now on, and I'll try to encourage the others to do so.
Stop this right away
Put that down and clean this mess up
End of conversation
Put your back in it and make it up to me now
Mother Nature (Lillian) has had enough of what her children (humans) have done to her beloved planet
Will she forgive them if the clean up their mess or will she take out her fury on them?
These Legoland empires choking out mine
Now you're everywhere, everywhere multiplying around me, child
A strain on my heart
This rock can't tolerate any more
Congrats to the winner and placers, and well done everyone. Thanks for the scores and comments judges Totally agree with you @MizoreYukii, had a picture in my head but couldn't find the right filters to bring it together, but I am very grateful for my scores. I just want to know why Becca scored me an 8
the part of the song that really spoke out to me was this:
"The cold shoulder, folded arms, the looking up
You've never listened and carry on careless regardless
This is not a fire drill and if we hold any hope
It's harmonic connection, in stereo symbiosis
These Legoland empires choking out mine
Now you're everywhere, everywhere multiplying around me, child
A strain on my heart
This rock can't tolerate any more"
I really wanted to convey the sadness of the Earth while she sits there and the people of her world pump toxins and pollution on her. I really wanted a powerful image that spoke also of climate change and pollution
"Stop this right away
Put that down and clean this mess up
End of conversation
Put your back in it and make it up to me now"
I was inspired by the chorus to show Mother Nature angry at "the world" for not taking better care of Earth. The couple in the render represents the world. they're only paying attention to each other and what's currently on TV, that if they took a sec to look out the window they would see the smog in the air.
Verse 1:
What if this storm ends and I don't see you
As you are now, ever again?
A perfect halo of gold hair and lightning
Sets you off against the planet's last dance
Interpretation:
Inside a cosy shelter, protected from the storm. They only have each and he never wants this moment to end.
Just for a minute, the silver forked sky
Lifts you up like a star that I will follow
And now it's found us like I have found you
I don't want to run, just overwhelm me
Interpretation:
They met in the middle of the worst storm they had ever witnessed.
With their emotions overwhelmed by the weather they found love in the eye of the storm.
But will it last.....?
A perfect halo of gold hair and lightning
Sets you off against the planet's last dance
I want to see you as you are now
Every single day that I am living
Painted in flames, all peeling thunder
Be the lightning in me that strikes relentless
What if this storm ends and I don't see you
As you are now, ever again?
A perfect halo of gold hair and lightning
Sets you off against the planet's last dance
Interpretation (well, a little story to go with):
As we ran from this new threat, I saw the strength in his eyes waver and fear creep in like a dark fog.
I pulled him close and touched his ragged, weather-worn face. Reassuring him that no matter what we faced we could beat it together.
We thought the storms were over.
We were wrong.
Comments
Okay great that I can do
Thanks @Jendowoz0612
Stop this right away
Put that down and clean this mess up
Stop this right away
Put that down and clean this mess up
End of conversation
Put your back in it and make it up to me now
Mother Nature (Lillian) has had enough of what her children (humans) have done to her beloved planet
Will she forgive them if the clean up their mess or will she take out her fury on them?
Earth
Are you with me?
Baby, behave, we'll make it work
Do you love me?
Earth
These Legoland empires choking out mine
Now you're everywhere, everywhere multiplying around me, child
A strain on my heart
This rock can't tolerate any more
A3 is due tomorrow!
@MyFavoritedesign @Melusine377 @Spudders_86 @abelhinha35 @Penguinwa101
Twitter: @Penguinwa101
Tumblr: http://penguinentertainment.tumblr.com/
Youtube: Penguin Entertainment
Earth
Explanation:
"The cold shoulder, folded arms, the looking up
You've never listened and carry on careless regardless
This is not a fire drill and if we hold any hope
It's harmonic connection, in stereo symbiosis
These Legoland empires choking out mine
Now you're everywhere, everywhere multiplying around me, child
A strain on my heart
This rock can't tolerate any more"
I really wanted to convey the sadness of the Earth while she sits there and the people of her world pump toxins and pollution on her. I really wanted a powerful image that spoke also of climate change and pollution
Twitter: @Penguinwa101
Tumblr: http://penguinentertainment.tumblr.com/
Youtube: Penguin Entertainment
@MyFavoritedesign @Melusine377 @Spudders_86 @abelhinha35 @Penguinwa101
The lightning strikes
Verse 1:
What if this storm ends and I don't see you
As you are now, ever again?
A perfect halo of gold hair and lightning
Sets you off against the planet's last dance
Interpretation:
Inside a cosy shelter, protected from the storm. They only have each and he never wants this moment to end.
Just for a minute, the silver forked sky
Lifts you up like a star that I will follow
And now it's found us like I have found you
I don't want to run, just overwhelm me
Interpretation:
They met in the middle of the worst storm they had ever witnessed.
With their emotions overwhelmed by the weather they found love in the eye of the storm.
But will it last.....?
The lightning strikes
Sets you off against the planet's last dance
I want to see you as you are now
Every single day that I am living
Painted in flames, all peeling thunder
Be the lightning in me that strikes relentless
@Melusine377 @Penguinwa101 2 more days!
What if this storm ends and I don't see you
As you are now, ever again?
A perfect halo of gold hair and lightning
Sets you off against the planet's last dance
Interpretation (well, a little story to go with):
As we ran from this new threat, I saw the strength in his eyes waver and fear creep in like a dark fog.
I pulled him close and touched his ragged, weather-worn face. Reassuring him that no matter what we faced we could beat it together.
We thought the storms were over.
We were wrong.