I'm so glad someone likes Lola! She is such a tragic character. I think she is a perfect representation of someone going through a quarter-life crisis (That's a real thing!). Unfortunately it took her to a really dark place, but she can only go up from there . I have some interesting things planned for her so you will definitely be seeing her more!
Sean + Esme = Sesme....or Eean....no Sesme
I like them too because their first interaction, he totally ignored her! (Chapter two ). They are not in a relationship yet, but who knows what can happen.
Thank you for reading and commenting
She is, poor thing. The tragic ones are often my favourites. Was kinda missing her in the last three chapters. XD
As you all know, I have taken a bit of a hiatus from this story. However, that doesn't mean I'm not still writing . Since I am waiting for the Seasons EP to come out to start writing S2....I thought it would be fun to do some flashback short stories
Here's a sneak peak for two of them:
2005: Sean and Leo are starting their junior year and are BFF......but everything changes when a certain freshman named Lola shows up
2005: sixth grade....two of the geekiest kids in school.....the story of how Ellie and Sal became best friends
I will also be doing an interview starring......Lola!
This is for @emorrill 's challenge.
Also @simscognito voted for her
I enjoyed this chapter. It was fun to see them all when they were so 'young'. Actually not sure how old they are so not sure if I can call them 'young' or not. xD It wasn't quite a secret that Leo was gay. We kinda already knew that because he was with Ren (did I get his name correct?) but I 100% missed it when he said 'I hate girls' when I was reading it the first time.
I enjoyed this chapter. It was fun to see them all when they were so 'young'. Actually not sure how old they are so not sure if I can call them 'young' or not. xD It wasn't quite a secret that Leo was gay. We kinda already knew that because he was with Ren (did I get his name correct?) but I 100% missed it when he said 'I hate girls' when I was reading it the first time.
Lol i named it "dirty little secret" after an all american rejects song
Also it was a secret to sean!
And yes they were young. Sean and leo were 15/16 and lola was 14. Wait until you see my next one! Sal and ellie as ten yr olds
I enjoyed this chapter. It was fun to see them all when they were so 'young'. Actually not sure how old they are so not sure if I can call them 'young' or not. xD It wasn't quite a secret that Leo was gay. We kinda already knew that because he was with Ren (did I get his name correct?) but I 100% missed it when he said 'I hate girls' when I was reading it the first time.
Lol i named it "dirty little secret" after an all american rejects song
Also it was a secret to sean!
And yes they were young. Sean and leo were 15/16 and lola was 14. Wait until you see my next one! Sal and ellie as ten yr olds
I don't know that song so I wouldn't have understood the reference. I guess Sean didn't know until he erm, found out. I'm looking forward to seeing Sal and Ellie as 10 year olds!!!
Edit: Just noticed this was my 9000 comment! xD (I have 20 discussions that some reason count as posts)
First, I want to thank everyone for following METRO this past year. You guys have really helped me grow as a writer. Also, your comments and interest in this story helped keep me going
Just wanted to let ya'll know that I've been quietly working on the next chapter
I needed a break to rethink the story so I am going to be changing some character bios for season 2. When I post the new chapter I will include which character bios to re-read.
So sorry for leaving, coming back, and then leaving again. The past two months I have been extremely busy (trips, moving,etc..) and I really never had a chance to write. Now that winter is here and I get to be a hermit again....I have decided to continue writing this beloved story.
Unfortunately I have also decided to delete what I wrote for season two so far. I re read season one recently and I realized that I didn't like where I was going with the characters in the new season (mainly Sean becoming a jerk, destroying REO, and bringing in new characters that were sort of boring). I think I rushed into it and didn't really think about potential storylines. My apologies (since this will be my second re-write ). Hopefully you will all be patient and keep reading! I promise the new season two will be great . In the meantime, maybe just re read season one and forget about the past 1 1/2 chapters I posted xD.
@Acarb90 good to see you back! I'd actually liked seeing Sean becoming a plum, but oh well. Take your time to figure out your storyline and I'm looking forward to the second season.
@Acarb90 good to see you back! I'd actually liked seeing Sean becoming a plum, but oh well. Take your time to figure out your storyline and I'm looking forward to the second season.
Maybe he will stay like that but there will be a reason for it
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She is, poor thing. The tragic ones are often my favourites. Was kinda missing her in the last three chapters. XD
As you all know, I have taken a bit of a hiatus from this story. However, that doesn't mean I'm not still writing . Since I am waiting for the Seasons EP to come out to start writing S2....I thought it would be fun to do some flashback short stories
Here's a sneak peak for two of them:
2005: Sean and Leo are starting their junior year and are BFF......but everything changes when a certain freshman named Lola shows up
2005: sixth grade....two of the geekiest kids in school.....the story of how Ellie and Sal became best friends
I will also be doing an interview starring......Lola!
This is for @emorrill 's challenge.
Also @simscognito voted for her
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I enjoyed this chapter. It was fun to see them all when they were so 'young'. Actually not sure how old they are so not sure if I can call them 'young' or not. xD It wasn't quite a secret that Leo was gay. We kinda already knew that because he was with Ren (did I get his name correct?) but I 100% missed it when he said 'I hate girls' when I was reading it the first time.
Lol i named it "dirty little secret" after an all american rejects song
Also it was a secret to sean!
And yes they were young. Sean and leo were 15/16 and lola was 14. Wait until you see my next one! Sal and ellie as ten yr olds
I don't know that song so I wouldn't have understood the reference. I guess Sean didn't know until he erm, found out. I'm looking forward to seeing Sal and Ellie as 10 year olds!!!
Edit: Just noticed this was my 9000 comment! xD (I have 20 discussions that some reason count as posts)
I attempted THREE times to take screenshots and each time something felt off. So I am definitely working on it, I hope to post part two by next week
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First, I want to thank everyone for following METRO this past year. You guys have really helped me grow as a writer. Also, your comments and interest in this story helped keep me going
https://metrosimlit.wordpress.com/2018/08/19/update-hiatus/
Just wanted to let ya'll know that I've been quietly working on the next chapter
I needed a break to rethink the story so I am going to be changing some character bios for season 2. When I post the new chapter I will include which character bios to re-read.
Expect a new chapter sometime this month!
So sorry for leaving, coming back, and then leaving again. The past two months I have been extremely busy (trips, moving,etc..) and I really never had a chance to write. Now that winter is here and I get to be a hermit again....I have decided to continue writing this beloved story.
Unfortunately I have also decided to delete what I wrote for season two so far. I re read season one recently and I realized that I didn't like where I was going with the characters in the new season (mainly Sean becoming a jerk, destroying REO, and bringing in new characters that were sort of boring). I think I rushed into it and didn't really think about potential storylines. My apologies (since this will be my second re-write ). Hopefully you will all be patient and keep reading! I promise the new season two will be great . In the meantime, maybe just re read season one and forget about the past 1 1/2 chapters I posted xD.
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Maybe he will stay like that but there will be a reason for it
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Chapter one should be out this week! (I promise )
https://metrosimlit.wordpress.com/season-two-characters/