Hey everyone, this used to be a thread for something else, but I am repurposing it for a story that I don't know the outcome of. Mostly because my children are in control (with some guidance of course.) You're welcome to leave comments here on it, or over on my word press. But I wanted to have a place to post new parts when I get them up, and where readers can have conversations about it. So without further ado...
The Table of Contents:
Life as a Toddler
Comments
Going into the Past
The Gardener
Moving On
Talking about Achievements
Side Story: Sidetracking for Grilled Cheese: Block
Side Story:Aging the Keeners
Side Story: Chance Keener's Birthday Wish
Side Story: Resetting my Sims Self
Taking a look at the family
A midnight Chance Wedding
SimSelf Family
KC: Moving in together
KC: Date Night Trend
Penpal Application: Chance Keener
KC: Accidental Phasing Amusement
KC:Feeling Alone
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S1:E1 - Meeting the Contestants
S1:E2 - Mingling and Gossip
S1:E3 - Water Park Shenanigans
S1:E4 - First Date!
S1:E5 -Fishing Elimination
S1:E6 - Musical bladder test
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Meeting the Boss
The Sunroof
Shirt Swap
First Assignment
The Hangover
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Ruth and Robert:
Renovated Warehouse
Professor Ellis Solomon:
An Astronomy Study
A Spouse for A Professor
Alice and Andrew:
Romantic Starter Home
Getting Jobs
Nameless Retail Store
Double Date Day
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Return from Pergutory
To the Island
Still want a pet
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They're ghosts and the first to parts can be found
here and here
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S1:E5 -Fishing Elimination
S1:E6 - Musical bladder test
three more parts of the bachelor written and posted. xD
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Chance Keener would like some penpals to write with.
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I've added this to the first post. While you're welcome to look at the other links of other stories I still have up at the moment. Things will probably be changing. I would like to separate my stories more as they get bigger, and I have more people reading and commenting on them. That way there is a place that specific stories can be discussed. And any tips and suggestions have a place to go as well.
Originally, this was so that I could have one link in my signature. But Changing up all of that.
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I really like how you presented Lilith as power-hungry, controlling and self-serving. I'm looking forward to seeing this interpretation of Lilith ahead.
The pictures though!?! No idea how those broke, I will try to fix them.
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I also liked the fluidity of the story. It moved from topic to topic very well and never felt forced. I also liked how chapter progressively grew darker. Also, I loved how each next chapter painted previous ones in different light.
I very much enjoyed chapters after Caleb and Bella began their affair. It was really gripping story twist and I enjoyed it a lot.
On the negative side of things: too much Duchess. I love cats myself, but it felt as if her presence was just a filler. In fact, each chapter clearly had a few moments that could be removed or compressed. But that is only my opinion.
Before I continue - I understand why things progressed the way they did. Thank you for explaining, BTW. I'm in no way trying to offend you or your kids.They seem like a lively bunch :-)
With that said, chapter 10 ruined the immersion and experience completely for me. I kept on reading, but still it was just not as good. Not even remotely the same thing. A shame, really.
The best part about the story is Kahtleen herself. If is genuinely interesting to read about her reactions and emotions during her time in the cabin.
My favorite chapters are 7,8 and 9. Gripping, interesting.
Did I like the story? At first it was a bit boring, but then it definitely picked up the power. Overall - yes. It was nice and fun up until chapter 10.
Would I recommend the work? I think that yes. It definitely can entertain and has potential to it.
I think that will be all. thank you for sharing your work. I had good time reading. Be well :-)
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