Oh, Jocelyn...things are not going so good right now....I hope the emptyness she is feeling is that she is confused about...well, everything, and don't even know what to do, and what to feel...I know a saying from my country that is, ''An empty mind is the devil's workshop'' don't know if you get it, but I sure hope that her emptyness don't go that way...and Tobi, od dear...Is even more sad because I'm re-reading some old chapters, and is very sad to see the loveable Tobi drinking and all that stuff...I wonder how much time will take for they to learn to deal with death, because, if you see in a bigger picture, at least for the childrem, they will live more life without Luc and Hazel than with than in their lifes...but i do agree that in childhood, things matter much more.
I like that saying @Sourocha ! Hopefully it won't be the case with Jocelyne, but we'll see... and yes, Tobi Ugh this is so hard for me to write haha I hope the family can learn to move on soon.
Well, that came as a shock! I hope he said no because of the circumstances and not because his feelings have changed. Gus's thoughts on how time with Noah seems like an eternity is not a good sign. Patiently (or not) waiting for your next chapter no matter which family member it involves. Saturday seems a long way off.
Well, that came as a shock! I hope he said no because of the circumstances and not because his feelings have changed. Gus's thoughts on how time with Noah seems like an eternity is not a good sign. Patiently (or not) waiting for your next chapter no matter which family member it involves. Saturday seems a long way off.
@suzanna13 In Gus' defense, he did say that it felt like both an eternity AND the blink of an eye at the same time. I think what he meant by that statement was that time has flown, but it also feels like they've been together forever (as in, he can't even imagine/remember a time they weren't together).
Still, his reason for saying no definitely remains unclear... We'll have to wait until we hear from him again to get more of the story!
I'm glad you're so excited for the next chapter Thanks so much for reading!
And just something I have notice a little time ago, but never said it, or did I? interlude chapters are usually In narrator style, and that way, we can see the events happening one by another, not like the usual chapters, that are mostly in the end of the day saying how it was, It also show many points of view of diferent chapters, and don't have the "personal point of view when describing the scene, like the normal chapters have.
And just something I have notice a little time ago, but never said it, or did I? interlude chapters are usually In narrator style, and that way, we can see the events happening one by another, not like the usual chapters, that are mostly in the end of the day saying how it was, It also show many points of view of diferent chapters, and don't have the "personal point of view when describing the scene, like the normal chapters have.
Actually, even though it's told in 3rd person, this interlude is told from Gus' POV. We still hear his thoughts. But we are left on a cliffhanger, which @CitizenErased14 loves to do!
I think they'll work out their emotions and hopefully will get their wedding!
And just something I have notice a little time ago, but never said it, or did I? interlude chapters are usually In narrator style, and that way, we can see the events happening one by another, not like the usual chapters, that are mostly in the end of the day saying how it was, It also show many points of view of diferent chapters, and don't have the "personal point of view when describing the scene, like the normal chapters have.
And just something I have notice a little time ago, but never said it, or did I? interlude chapters are usually In narrator style, and that way, we can see the events happening one by another, not like the usual chapters, that are mostly in the end of the day saying how it was, It also show many points of view of diferent chapters, and don't have the "personal point of view when describing the scene, like the normal chapters have.
Actually, even though it's told in 3rd person, this interlude is told from Gus' POV. We still hear his thoughts. But we are left on a cliffhanger, which @CitizenErased14 loves to do!
I think they'll work out their emotions and hopefully will get their wedding!
@Sourocha@pammiechick Yeah, my interludes are 3rd person, but we are still only inside one character's head at a time. But it's less personal because it's not 1st person like the journals, where we are DIRECTLY inside the character's head/seeing their most personal thoughts. So I do see what you're saying Sourocha But pammie is also right
Tobi, Tobi...do you realize little eyes are watching and learning? Alcohism isn't easy to beat. I'm sad Tobi is going down this path...but I'm happy Zayne has Gus! That's a bright spot in him coming home. Gus is my favorite character atm, besides Zayne (but he hasn't had a chance to screw up lol!
Tobi, Tobi...do you realize little eyes are watching and learning? Alcohism isn't easy to beat. I'm sad Tobi is going down this path...but I'm happy Zayne has Gus! That's a bright spot in him coming home. Gus is my favorite character atm, besides Zayne (but he hasn't had a chance to scr*ew up lol!
@pammiechick yes, Tobi definitely needs to realize the example he's setting for his grandkids. Ugh. I'm glad you love Zayne and Gus so much Fair warning -- as a Rosebrook heir, Zayne is basically guaranteed to screw up at some point. But for now, yes. He is precious
You really can see that Zayne gets older and finally thinks more realistic I'm still sorry for him. At the point when he mentioned his relationship with Joce he kinde reminded me of Stefan when Jonas got married to Mari I'm so glad that Gus is there for Zayne, I really hope that he and Noah sort out their problems, I would be so sad if they seperate I loved the episode again
You really can see that Zayne gets older and finally thinks more realistic I'm still sorry for him. At the point when he mentioned his relationship with Joce he kinde reminded me of Stefan when Jonas got married to Mari I'm so glad that Gus is there for Zayne, I really hope that he and Noah sort out their problems, I would be so sad if they seperate I loved the episode again
@YJB19299 Yeah, he's definitely becoming more aware of the reality of the situation. And that's a good connection between how Stefan felt about Jonas and how Zayne is feeling about Joce! Very true.
Ugh, I still absolutely love this story but its difficult to read right now. Weird question: Do you happen to have a version without pictures? Zaynes scar.. well, it's hitting home a bit too real right now.
Anyways, worked up the courage to get up to date, and WHAT THE HECK TOBI. Like I get that youre hurting but theres so many little kids watching, youre teaching them horrible things! Stooooop!
At the start of the Gus/Noah episode, I knew he was going to propose. I just knew it. Why did Gus have to say no?! I feel like it has to do with not wanting to get into something he knows deep down Noah doesnt actually want, or at least I really hope thats the case. Those two cant split up, they're so good together and so freaking adorable!
Ugh, I still absolutely love this story but its difficult to read right now. Weird question: Do you happen to have a version without pictures? Zaynes scar.. well, it's hitting home a bit too real right now.
Anyways, worked up the courage to get up to date, and WHAT THE HECK TOBI. Like I get that youre hurting but theres so many little kids watching, youre teaching them horrible things! Stooooop!
At the start of the Gus/Noah episode, I knew he was going to propose. I just knew it. Why did Gus have to say no?! I feel like it has to do with not wanting to get into something he knows deep down Noah doesnt actually want, or at least I really hope thats the case. Those two cant split up, they're so good together and so freaking adorable!
Ugh, I still absolutely love this story but its difficult to read right now. Weird question: Do you happen to have a version without pictures? Zaynes scar.. well, it's hitting home a bit too real right now.
Anyways, worked up the courage to get up to date, and WHAT THE HECK TOBI. Like I get that youre hurting but theres so many little kids watching, youre teaching them horrible things! Stooooop!
At the start of the Gus/Noah episode, I knew he was going to propose. I just knew it. Why did Gus have to say no?! I feel like it has to do with not wanting to get into something he knows deep down Noah doesnt actually want, or at least I really hope thats the case. Those two cant split up, they're so good together and so freaking adorable!
@MariskaAmy I'm sorry that the story is hitting so close to home for you If you need to take a break, it's okay. Unfortunately there's no version without pictures. The screenshots are very crucial to the chapters (sometimes even showing things that the words do not, or acting alone when there are no words at all), so I don't upload/save any all-text versions of them
You are right, Tobi is definitely making a huge mistake here and setting an awful example, and we are gonna get more info about the Gus and Noah situation soon
Ugh, I still absolutely love this story but its difficult to read right now. Weird question: Do you happen to have a version without pictures? Zaynes scar.. well, it's hitting home a bit too real right now.
Anyways, worked up the courage to get up to date, and WHAT THE HECK TOBI. Like I get that youre hurting but theres so many little kids watching, youre teaching them horrible things! Stooooop!
At the start of the Gus/Noah episode, I knew he was going to propose. I just knew it. Why did Gus have to say no?! I feel like it has to do with not wanting to get into something he knows deep down Noah doesnt actually want, or at least I really hope thats the case. Those two cant split up, they're so good together and so freaking adorable!
@MariskaAmy I'm sorry that the story is hitting so close to home for you If you need to take a break, it's okay. Unfortunately there's no version without pictures. The screenshots are very crucial to the chapters (sometimes even showing things that the words do not, or acting alone when there are no words at all), so I don't upload/save any all-text versions of them
You are right, Tobi is definitely making a huge mistake here and setting an awful example, and we are gonna get more info about the Gus and Noah situation soon
I understand, just had to ask you know? And uh, thanks for having Zayne smile some in the latest chapter, hopefully my Amy will do so soon as well. Its quite the compliment to your writing for it to hit me, by the way, doesnt happen too often.
Looking forward to hearing more about the Noah/Gus situation soon, they deserve more spotlight for sure!
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I like that saying @Sourocha ! Hopefully it won't be the case with Jocelyne, but we'll see... and yes, Tobi
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@suzanna13 In Gus' defense, he did say that it felt like both an eternity AND the blink of an eye at the same time. I think what he meant by that statement was that time has flown, but it also feels like they've been together forever (as in, he can't even imagine/remember a time they weren't together).
Still, his reason for saying no definitely remains unclear... We'll have to wait until we hear from him again to get more of the story!
I'm glad you're so excited for the next chapter
Actually, even though it's told in 3rd person, this interlude is told from Gus' POV. We still hear his thoughts. But we are left on a cliffhanger, which @CitizenErased14 loves to do!
I think they'll work out their emotions and hopefully will get their wedding!
@Sourocha @pammiechick Yeah, my interludes are 3rd person, but we are still only inside one character's head at a time.
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@pammiechick yes, Tobi definitely needs to realize the example he's setting for his grandkids.
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@SeaDragonSong Yeah, he's getting there! Poor kid
@Sterretjeee yes, the truth his finally sinking in
@YJB19299 Yeah, he's definitely becoming more aware of the reality of the situation. And that's a good connection between how Stefan felt about Jonas and how Zayne is feeling about Joce! Very true.
Anyways, worked up the courage to get up to date, and WHAT THE HECK TOBI. Like I get that youre hurting but theres so many little kids watching, youre teaching them horrible things! Stooooop!
At the start of the Gus/Noah episode, I knew he was going to propose. I just knew it. Why did Gus have to say no?! I feel like it has to do with not wanting to get into something he knows deep down Noah doesnt actually want, or at least I really hope thats the case. Those two cant split up, they're so good together and so freaking adorable!
you mean why did Noah say no?
@MariskaAmy I'm sorry that the story is hitting so close to home for you
You are right, Tobi is definitely making a huge mistake here and setting an awful example, and we are gonna get more info about the Gus and Noah situation soon
Interlude: Fun & Games
And I laughed when Jocelyn got jealous. That whole scene was hilarious! Thank you for the happiness!
No, Noah proposed, Gus declined.
I understand, just had to ask you know? And uh, thanks for having Zayne smile some in the latest chapter, hopefully my Amy will do so soon as well. Its quite the compliment to your writing for it to hit me, by the way, doesnt happen too often.
Looking forward to hearing more about the Noah/Gus situation soon, they deserve more spotlight for sure!
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